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guitar, voices; not sure if it's a love song or religious, or both
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| Tom Atwood said 1787 days ago (January 3rd, 2005) | |
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David Crosby harmonies very nice Thanks Tobin. Once again, an excellent analysis. Your suggestion re: a bridge is a good one. But at this point--it would be like changing the color of my daughter's eyes. The song & she are about the same age, too! Check out my latest song called Keep Looking for Jesus (MJRF)
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| Peter Greenstone said 1787 days ago (January 3rd, 2005) | |
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beautiful Man, I really love listening to new tracks from you. Great melody and lyrics. There is such precision in your performance, yet it always remains easy and natural. Check out my latest song called From Nothing
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| Peter Greenstone said 1787 days ago (January 3rd, 2005) | |
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also Remember to include Artist and Album info in the mp3 tags on your songs so that when they get downloaded they still have your name on them. Check out my latest song called From Nothing
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| Iseae said 1787 days ago (January 3rd, 2005) | |
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Variation Great track, well written and produced. I agree with Tobin though, somemore variation would be nice. Check out my latest song called Vickys Song
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| packosmokes said 1785 days ago (January 6th, 2005) | |
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Friendly track. There's an interesting vibe I get in this song. As though, through good or through bad, love has "no end" all right there in a quiet, peaceful song. I suppose a bridge could help make this more of a "song" but on the other hand, the song as it is right now feels like calming ocean waves washing up onto the sand... so it may help, it may not. I refuse to make a call on that one, heh! I can say, I didn't feel like I missed or longed for anything additional. Check out my latest song called With You
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| Tom Atwood said 1785 days ago (January 6th, 2005) | |
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song structure Thanks again for your comments and suggestions. The feedback is wonderful. Sometimes I have felt like Charles Ives, the early 20th century composer who sold insurance during the day, and wrote symphonies at night that few people heard until after his death. (If only he had had MacJams!) It may be a 'weakness,' but whenever I write a song--or really, when a song comes to me--it is planned out very poorly. It's almost like I have to sit at the guitar and wait, tapping my fingers. I have found if I try to 'craft' a song, write down lyrics first, or develop verses and a bridge-- nothing happens. Or something bad happens. So in the case of "No End," this is the song that arrived, and it arrived without a bridge. Does this make sense? Thanks again! Check out my latest song called Keep Looking for Jesus (MJRF)
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| Suzanne said 1784 days ago (January 6th, 2005) | |
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suspension so true and simple. great suspensions. love is simple, so complex, so timeless, so short. yes. without being sentimental, this captures something very true. Check out my latest song called Rock The Baby With Voodoo (w/Tobin)
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| EdensEve said 1784 days ago (January 6th, 2005) | |
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I'm with you ...what a great place to float away. Really like your voice, guitar. Take my breath away. |
| Tom Atwood said 1784 days ago (January 6th, 2005) | |
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I'm with you Thanks Eve and Suzanne Check out my latest song called Keep Looking for Jesus (MJRF)
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| thetiler said 1784 days ago (January 7th, 2005) | |
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harmonies You have the potential to be more powerful with your guitar and songs using your great gift of vocal harmonization. When you use it it really works for you very well as in this song. You play the guitar nicely, but you have that added bonus of vocal harmonization. Great triple threat. Guitar - fingerpicking Vocal - solo voicing on one track Harmonization on another track. You really should use those more often on individual songs because you can pull it off very well. Bill thetiler Check out my latest song called The Bluebird Cafe (with two other guest)
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| bronco said 1725 days ago (March 6th, 2005) | |
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Soothing This was the perfect song to listen to on a Sunday night with one lamp on and me sitting alone at the computer. Your voice really grows on me the more I listen. Check out my latest song called Strange Feeling
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| Mystified said 1522 days ago (September 25th, 2005) | |
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this is perfect... ...just the way it is. Depth in simplicity. Beautiful. Check out my latest song called For the Beauty of the Earth
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TobinMueller
Your harmonies are very cool, remind me of David Crosby,
who is a favorite. And you have a wonderful voice. Some
random clicks in the track. The song intentionally is
simple and repetitive, but I felt like if a bridge of some
sort could surprise with new content, something to add a
layer of depth, the song could be a brilliant piece.