Don't Be So Blind

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My original plan for this one was to present it as stripped down as possible, a single acoustic guitar accompanying a single vocal. But I never could get takes I was happy with. So then I decided to try a band approach. Wasn't happy with that either. Changed the key and revoiced the chords. Tried the stripped down approach again. Still wasn't happy. Went back to the band thing. Kind of liked the sound and feel of the drum loops with the rhythm guitar sound. Started to feel a little better about it. So ready or not..........

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First Verse
Don’t like to look back,
On the man I was
Selfish and hurtful,
To the ones I loved
A foolish young man
Not thinking at the time
You’d have to live with it,
Don’t be so blind

Second Verse
Like a flash of light
Something triggers memories
Never my finest
Shake my head in disbelief
How could I have said that?
Wasn’t thinking at the time,
You’ll have to live with it
Don’t be so blind

First Bridge
Eventually you’re gonna realize
If you’re lucky anyway
Just beware when you punish yourself
The penalty exceeds the crime
You’ll have to live with that,
Don’t be so blind

Second Bridge
But it’s only me that can’t forget
Most forgave me long ago
Would they remember,
If I brought it up now?
I wasn’t thinking at the time
I’ll have to live with that,
Don’t be so blind

Last Verse
I guess he’ll stay with me
Foolish young man from the past
Reminding me there are,
Some things you can’t take back
I little voice I’ll hear
Perhaps from time to time
You’d have to live with that,
Don’t be so blind
You’d have to live with that,
Don’t be so blind
You’d have to live with that,
Don’t be so blind

Song Stats

Hits: 2321
Comments: 127
Fans: 49
Plays: 269
Downloads: 79

Uploaded: Jun 05, 2010 - 09:20:38 PM
Last Updated: Sep 20, 2010 - 01:09:21 PM Last Played: Jun 18, 2013 - 12:48:59 PM

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Hardware:

MacBook, Line6 GuitarPort, Zoom H4, Gibson Les Paul Studio, Hamer Cruise Bass

Software:

GarageBand 8, Line6 GearBox & PodFarm, Drums on Demands loops

Comments

drakonis

drakonis said 1109 days ago (June 5th, 2010)

Love the ringing guitar notes
and the strummed chords seem to wash across the sands... really like the soft sound of this. I think the drums are OK except for the 2&4 snare(?) hit which seems very loud, crisp and out of place for this more gentle song. Your singing is great, backing is super, well-fit lyrics. Good stuff!
ttfn,
Drakonis

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alackbass	alackbass said 1109 days ago (June 5th, 2010)
	I Did Consider Going with the Rim Shot But I just dug that snare drum so much I decided what the hell, kind of my power ballad. Thanks for listening. You're always good about leaving honest and constructive comments. Thank you for that. Check out my latest song called Close to the Bone by Jerry Quinn

Char	Char said 1109 days ago (June 5th, 2010)
	Nice, gentle song... not a power ballad. I agree the slap sound was attention getting, but if you like it, that is what matters. :) Check out my latest song called When Loving Is One-sided, Music by Bob Rodgers

alackbass	alackbass said 1109 days ago (June 5th, 2010)
	Oh-Uh Now the two of you have me thinking I should change it! :) I think that's just the bassist in me coming through. There's nothing better for a bassist than locking in with a strong drummer. The whole time I was playing the bass track I was digging that drummer. I guess that's why I come here! Honest feedback. Check out my latest song called Close to the Bone by Jerry Quinn

guitapick	guitapick said 1109 days ago (June 5th, 2010)
	Very nice... ...the tune itself is so in the pocket and pure...the vox/harmonies put it a step above. Fine piece, man... Check out my latest song called 'Cuz I Can

alackbass	alackbass said 1109 days ago (June 5th, 2010)
	Thanks Bob "Pocket!" What a nice comment. Again, the bass player in me says thank you. Check out my latest song called Close to the Bone by Jerry Quinn

michaeljayklein

michaeljayklein said 1109 days ago (June 6th, 2010)

Shades of Stevie Wonder..
Especially in the verse and break--just has that certain resonance of his, which of course, is delightful. This is a beautiful and well crafted song, with a memorable melody line and soft, well joined lyrics. Of course, your playing and vocal were (as always) sublime. I personally think this is one of your very best Andrew. Thanks for keeping the bar raised! Michael

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alackbass	alackbass said 1109 days ago (June 6th, 2010)
	Wow! Listening again looking for the Stevie part. Never had Stevie in mind. But that's another great thing about this sight. People hear things in our music we never heard. "Sublime?" My vocal? So much more than I deserve. Thank you Michael. Check out my latest song called Close to the Bone by Jerry Quinn

RAVENS	RAVENS said 1109 days ago (June 6th, 2010)
	Wow This is just terrific, totally sounds like a tune I'd hear on the radio. Very pro & I'm very impressed! RAVEN ;-) Check out my latest song called Tattooed Scars (w/ Sigmund, Scofugate, Rok41)

alackbass	alackbass said 1109 days ago (June 6th, 2010)
	Thank You As I was putting it together I forged ahead in spite of my feeling the song had no commercial potential at all. It was just something I kind of liked and wanted to post for my own personal reasons. That you could picture it getting airplay is very gratifying. Thank you! Check out my latest song called Close to the Bone by Jerry Quinn

Symphony101	Symphony101 said 1109 days ago (June 6th, 2010)
	Never happy :-) Perfectionist huh ? You sing great, I loved the part where you layered your voice for "live with that, don't be so blind". Cool guitars and bass line too. It's a wonderful song. Now I'm going to use your words against you :-) Be proud man ! I'm one of those who is impatient to hear your posts. Check out my latest song called The Wish Granter

alackbass	alackbass said 1109 days ago (June 6th, 2010)
	Feeling Better!! I suffer from as much self doubt as anybody. Just can't stand the sound of my own voice. Comments like yours make each new song a little easier to post. Thank you Yves! Check out my latest song called Close to the Bone by Jerry Quinn

moorlandt	moorlandt said 1109 days ago (June 6th, 2010)
	a very solid and classic piece of soft rock, including lyrics that make sense. What's noit to like about this? Great tune, mate. Check out my latest song called Free (remix)

alackbass	alackbass said 1109 days ago (June 6th, 2010)
	Oh, I Could List a Few Things I'm not completely liking. But if you like it, then don't let me try and convince you otherwise. Thanks so much Walter for taking the time to listen and leave a comment. Check out my latest song called Close to the Bone by Jerry Quinn

hackneybloke

hackneybloke said 1109 days ago (June 6th, 2010)

don't be so blind
hi andrew. this is very well produced and it conforms to all the usual construction 'rules', and in the listening reminded me of a seventies album track (from an established recording artist i hastily add), and it's good to hear you finally putting your voice up there so clear and in front of everything. it makes me wonder why you've been having problems with it. are you happy with it now? i wasn't put off by any percussion issues; for me it rolled along...easy on the ear...but perhaps without going to enough places to really stand out and excite.

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alackbass

alackbass said 1109 days ago (June 6th, 2010)

Thank You!
Wow, what a thoughtful and detailed comment. Those singer/songwriter guys are always in my mind when I write something like this. I think it starts with having an acoustic guitar in one's hand while you write. It's a similar approach to many of those "established recording artists." As for the vocal, I hear pitch and phrasing issues I wished weren't there. But aren't we all our own worst critic. But despite my own concerns, I've learned (through my participation here at MJ) to take the risk, post it, and let the community decide. The support of artists like yourself encourages me to forge ahead. Thank you again.

Check out my latest song called Close to the Bone by Jerry Quinn

Aemyn	Aemyn said 1109 days ago (June 6th, 2010)
	yeah, this is great, like someone said, totally something you'd hear on the radio. smooth and relaxed, awesome. Check out my latest song called Untitled Metal

alackbass	alackbass said 1109 days ago (June 6th, 2010)
	Thank You! I'd like to hear it on the radio. But not my recording. Maybe some established recording artist. Then all I would have to do is count my money. Ahhh......in a perfect world. Thanks so much for stopping by to listen and comment. Check out my latest song called Close to the Bone by Jerry Quinn

shavingronaldscar	shavingronaldscar said 1109 days ago (June 6th, 2010)
	Nice! great words, we can all relate to this. Good performance and production, and a wicked hook line. Loved the solo, less is more! Check out my latest song called A Rubber Ball's Day Off

alackbass	alackbass said 1109 days ago (June 6th, 2010)
	Thank You I'm glad you like the lyrics. That's the part I find the most challenging. This has a hook? Thanks for listening and leaving a comment. Check out my latest song called Close to the Bone by Jerry Quinn

MarkHolbrook	MarkHolbrook said 1109 days ago (June 6th, 2010)
	Well dang it Andrew! I'm really glad you didn't run out of music and I'm glad you took the band approach. This is top shelf and very cool man! Yet another ALACKBASS download... You are filling up my drive dude! Check out my latest song called Find Yourself (MJCC2013)

alackbass	alackbass said 1109 days ago (June 6th, 2010)
	Thank You But I'm thinking that's a pretty small drive you have there. There is no bigger compliment than a download. Thank you! Check out my latest song called Close to the Bone by Jerry Quinn

fasteddie	fasteddie said 1109 days ago (June 6th, 2010)
	Really wonderful The producttion on this song is really stellar. It is so clear. You have an awesome voice man! I think that your choice of instruments is perfect, not too much or too little. Great stuff! Check out my latest song called A Friend to the End

alackbass	alackbass said 1109 days ago (June 6th, 2010)
	Thanks! Your comments are not only appreciated, they are very encouraging. I find it very difficult to accept my own voice. But the support from you (and other MJers) encourages me to keep working at it. Thank you! Check out my latest song called Close to the Bone by Jerry Quinn

jdholliday

jdholliday said 1109 days ago (June 6th, 2010)

Since you are
way in the top of my favorite macjammers and a singer/songwriter/guitar player (triple threat) which is what I live for in music, I had to listen several times, I know you are your own worst critic and didn't ask for critiques in the description, and I see why in your responses, this is one of those that I write a lot of, for the art of it, more for therapy than anything else, you wrote this because you had to eh? To me this reminds me a lot of Joe Walsh and the Eagles, The lyrics are so spot on for us that have experienced that same revelation, trust me I'm one, also my own worst critic, I try to leave all of that at the cross, your harmonies are stellar and the layering of your vocals is perfect, you have a great tone to your voice Andrew very nice to hear it up front, but as the good book says you don't have to live with it, forgiveness is a wonderful thing, especially forgiving yourself as you elude to, by far my favorite post of yours'...... you are exploding with creativity! Run with it my friend!

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alackbass

alackbass said 1109 days ago (June 6th, 2010)

Thanks James
Wow, I really appreciate all the time and thought you put into your comments. But for the record, I'm always willing to receive and invite critiques. I assume when I post those will (and should) come. So always feel free to critique honestly.

That vocal tone came after dozens of takes and loads of EQ. So I guess it was worth it. As for the lyrics, being a musician can be an inherently selfish pursuit. I assumed others at MJ would relate. I'm glad you got it. Thanks again.

Check out my latest song called Close to the Bone by Jerry Quinn

Six-Nail-Coffin	Six-Nail-Coffin said 1109 days ago (June 6th, 2010)
	Very chill. needs saxaphone i think. just a light touch to compliment an otherwise great song. Check out my latest song called Svartalfpolska

alackbass	alackbass said 1109 days ago (June 6th, 2010)
	That's a Very Good Idea I never considered asking one of the many talented sax guys here at MJ to take a solo or fill around the vocal. While I'm done with this one, that is absolutely an idea I'll take into a future project. Thanks for the suggestion. Check out my latest song called Close to the Bone by Jerry Quinn

ShadowofNine	ShadowofNine said 1109 days ago (June 6th, 2010)
	Ohh nice Song, luv the lyrics and the over all feel of the song, fine performance as well... Check out my latest song called Theres a Prog in my Soup

alackbass	alackbass said 1109 days ago (June 6th, 2010)
	Thanks So Much High praise from one of my favs. Check out my latest song called Close to the Bone by Jerry Quinn

jibes	jibes said 1109 days ago (June 6th, 2010)
	I'm glad you kept at it because it's well worth it. A very pleasant tune. So smooth and clear. Lovely! Great production. Check out my latest song called JESSICA

alackbass	alackbass said 1109 days ago (June 6th, 2010)
	Thank You I'm glad you like it. And thanks so much for stopping by to comment and listen. Check out my latest song called Close to the Bone by Jerry Quinn

ConnieO

ConnieO said 1109 days ago (June 6th, 2010)

Sublime
Great song Andrew. Very moving lyrics! Your voice and the words carry an overwhelming saddness and regret that touches my heart and reminds me of my own
"why did I say or do that..." and the things I'll never be able to take back but need to forgive myself for, too. I'm glad you went with the band approach and I think the instrument mix fits very well.

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alackbass	alackbass said 1109 days ago (June 6th, 2010)
	Wow 2 sublimes for 1 song (see Michael's comment). It's good to be me today. Thank you so much for taking the time to listen and comment. Check out my latest song called Close to the Bone by Jerry Quinn

Vic Holman	Vic Holman said 1109 days ago (June 6th, 2010)
	sometimes it takes a process to find the songs zone. the song sounds great Andrew. sounds like a keeper to me. Check out my latest song called They Must

alackbass	alackbass said 1109 days ago (June 6th, 2010)
	Great Way to Describe the Process It was difficult to find a zone for this one. I'm glad you like it. Thanks for stopping by to listen and leave a comment. Check out my latest song called Close to the Bone by Jerry Quinn

dave_b	dave_b said 1109 days ago (June 6th, 2010)
	Don't Be So Blind Nice relaxed groove. The guitar line is simple but elegant and pulls the song along. I agree with Eduard on the snare hit, a little too aggressive here. Maybe a wood block or rimshot instead. I like the lyrics and your vocs. Check out my latest song called Llarions Blues

alackbass

alackbass said 1109 days ago (June 6th, 2010)

I'm Torn
I'm sure you saw my response to Eduard and that I did consider a rim shot. So a part of me agrees with both of you. Can't say I considered a wood block. I'll hold on to that one for a future project. Thank you. But another part of me agreed with Julian in that the drums made it "roll along" or as Bob put it provided a "pocket." The great thing about this do-it-yourself-recording thing is that the possibilities are endless. I'm particularly glad you liked the vocals and the lyrics. Those are by far the most personal parts and as a result the ones that were my greatest concern prior to posting.

Check out my latest song called Close to the Bone by Jerry Quinn

Dadai.2	Dadai.2 said 1109 days ago (June 6th, 2010)
	lush guitar lead in... Andrew, this is a perfect song. I'm not entirely sure what I mean by that, except everything fits so well, with you very pro vocals. the stripped down-ness of this tune is it's strength. Bass, guitar, drums all sit nicely in their own accessible place. By the star is your vox... love the harmonies. D Check out my latest song called Nylons and Harp

alackbass

alackbass said 1109 days ago (June 6th, 2010)

More than I Deserve
Thanks so much Jack. I doubt I've ever done anything perfectly (just ask my wife). But I'm glad you like it. Your comment made me realize that in the end I guess I did achieve a stripped down approach, even though it may not have been the arrangement I originally envisioned. And thanks so much for the kind words regarding my vocals.

Check out my latest song called Close to the Bone by Jerry Quinn

Moviz	Moviz said 1109 days ago (June 6th, 2010)
	So Clean and fresh with your lovely clear vocals and the bell like guitar sounds, lovely lead too and a really nice easy melody.... very polished sounding... just love it Andy, tops, regards M Check out my latest song called He's The Jazzman

alackbass	alackbass said 1109 days ago (June 6th, 2010)
	Thanks So Much Maurice! I really appreciate that you always take the time to listen to my posts and leave a comment. It's members like you that give me the confidence to write and sing more of my own material. Thanks! Check out my latest song called Close to the Bone by Jerry Quinn

Savage_Beast	Savage_Beast said 1109 days ago (June 6th, 2010)
	excellent excellent tune. Check out my latest song called CP (AD)2006

alackbass	alackbass said 1109 days ago (June 6th, 2010)
	Thanks so much I appreciate you stopping by to listen. Check out my latest song called Close to the Bone by Jerry Quinn

eleveneyes

eleveneyes said 1109 days ago (June 6th, 2010)

too bad....
... that by the time you realize that you're gonna have to live with things you've said and done or not done this you've all ready done the damage. I'm glad to know I'm not the only one who drives themselves batty thinking about stuff like this. But you're so right when you say "But it’s only me that can’t forget". I've made a fool of myself trying to apologize for stuff that others don't remember and now I have those things to live with too. ANYWAY, love the song, lyrics, melody, harmonies, presentation, feel. You do agree that some variation might help it along. About the snare - I didn't read all the posts here so hope I'm not reiterating a previous idea but there was talk about the snare. I like the having the snare, I wish it had more "body" to the sound of it. I think you should try going between rim taps in a verse and snare in the bridge or something like that. Nice job overall, great tune!

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alackbass

alackbass said 1109 days ago (June 6th, 2010)

Wow, What a Thoughtful Comment!

You obviously spent some energy really thinking about the lyrics, and I appreciate that a great deal.

About the snare (by the way I love the little side discussion the snare has raised. It leads to others sharing alternate approaches I'll explore in future songs), I never really heard the song as a ballad, although I guess it did turn into one (or was always one). And while it may not have come through in my vocal, I always hear an angry subtext in the lyric (wanting to go back and slap around the younger version of myself). So that crisp, sharp snare just had that atmosphere. It was almost like having Chad Smith on drums. I just connected to it and moved on from drums to other things.

Thanks so much for listening and leaving such a thoughtful comment. Judging from your most recent song, you really know what you're talking about. Your kind words and thoughtful critic will guide future songs of mine. And I have your page bookmarked. I'll be exploring the rest of your work. Be on the lookout for my comments.

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Joanna	Joanna said 1109 days ago (June 6th, 2010)
	alackbass I really like the lyrics and the harmonies work great! It's an excellent fit in this genre. I love when a song is what it wants to be. Wonderful! Check out my latest song called 20 Years

alackbass	alackbass said 1109 days ago (June 6th, 2010)
	Thank You Very kind of you to stop by to listen and comment. I'm particularly glad you liked the lyrics, which is always the hardest part for me. Check out my latest song called Close to the Bone by Jerry Quinn

propercharles

propercharles said 1109 days ago (June 6th, 2010)

Tip Top
I like this. The production is crystal clear and beautifully transparent. I wish I had the voice to use the "stripped down approach." You certainly carry it off. The lyrics too impress. I like this ethic of the older man having a "perhaps," internal voice conversation with a younger version of himself. I've a peice in that vein myself but incomplete as yet. The solo guitar is really nice did you think to have snippets of it inter-vocals perhaps. Hard to call as your stated intention is simplicity. I think, as Drakonis said, a more flaffy snare or even a brushed sound might have sat better. For some reason I'm hearing Sheryl Crowe on backing vocals. We wish! huh?

Nice touch.. Well done.

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alackbass

alackbass said 1109 days ago (June 6th, 2010)

As a matter of fact
I did toy with having the lead guitar fill in around the vocal in the last verse. Thought better of it when I realized I was just riffing on patterns and not really saying anything.

About that internal conversation: It would be so much better if the older man could have that conversation with the younger man before mistakes are made. Oh wait, I just realized, my father tried.

Man, I'll be afraid to ever use that snare sound again :)

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rok41

rok41 said 1108 days ago (June 6th, 2010)

Blind,,,
Andrew, this is really, really nice. I have been out of pocket and didn't catch this til now. Man, very nice! Your tonal instincts are great (must be the bass player in you) This feels light and airy, but full and your vocals and harmonies sound very nice. I do agree a bit with the assessment regarding the 2 /4 snare, maybe try the block or rims for the first verse and open it up as the song grows. It is a minor thing and in no way takes away from the quality of this effort.

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alackbass

alackbass said 1108 days ago (June 7th, 2010)

Thanks Man
I'm glad you like it. Please read the next part knowing that I'm smiling, glad you commented honestly, and appreciate the feedback. And most importantly I am in no way offended by your, or anyone else's comments about the snare. I come here for honest feedback, not dishonest praise.

One final (hopefully) point about the snare (loop): In my mind all of my posts are nothing more than demos. If the songs were to be taken further it would be by some other artist who would do their own arrangement. For me each song is like a college project, assigned by me, for my own composition/arranging class. I've handed this one in. Perhaps I deserve a B (B+) because according to the grading rubric I "used a stylistically inappropriate percussion track." I'm good with that.

There are just so many hours in a day. I could take an hour or two to change (perhaps improve) the drum track and repost it. Or I could spend that same time trying to write another (perhaps better) song and apply the feedback I received throughout my time as a member here to that new composition. The choice of how best to spend that time is a no-brainer for me.

Again, I have great respect for your work and musicianship and value your (and all the other) opinions posted here. Until I joined MJ I had never written, recorded, and published any of my own original music. I'm growing as a musician because of the support and constructive feedback I receive from the MJ community. That's a gift, even when others would do something differently than I did.

Peace :)

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rok41

rok41 said 1108 days ago (June 7th, 2010)

I completely understand...
I like the honest feedback, negative and positive, it allows me to get better. These are our personal ideas and work, and there have been times that I don't agree with some of the assessments of my songs, or parts of my songs (they are like our children in a way). I mean I don't even share most of these with my band mates. You are a fantastic musician and I always look forward to your new releases and feel a bit of kinship with you knowing you too are a true bassist at heart. I think, you can see by the outpouring of comments on this song that it is fine work, and that the snare is a non-issue. Peace brutha!

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alackbass	alackbass said 1108 days ago (June 7th, 2010)
	Thanks for the follow up You are most wise my friend! Check out my latest song called Close to the Bone by Jerry Quinn

867-5309	867-5309 said 1108 days ago (June 6th, 2010)
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alackbass	alackbass said 1108 days ago (June 7th, 2010)
	Thank You I appreciate you stopping by and taking the time to comment and listen. Check out my latest song called Close to the Bone by Jerry Quinn

BlueDarkness

BlueDarkness said 1108 days ago (June 6th, 2010)

Smooth Jazz
This song sounds like a David Pack (Ambrosia) solo song that a Smooth Jazz station would play between instrumentals. Your drum program is super clean and fits

I agree with the comments about needing a fill be it sax, which is always welcomed, or a tasty George Benson-like guitar or if you know a bad-assed B-3 player with the touch.

Re lyrics: We've ALL had those moments that still make us cringe and truth is the folks that witnessed it will throw it back at you given the chance. Don't give it to them.

The image from your mind comes across well. Nice work

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alackbass

alackbass said 1108 days ago (June 7th, 2010)

Thank You
An Ambrosia comparison! Yes Sir! I'll take that with a smile. There's so much I could have done this. But being a very personal song I wanted to complete it using the limited tools I had at my disposal.

I really appreciate your comment on the lyrics. I'll admit, I rarely experience the throwing it back. Like I said in the song "it's only me" throwing back on me.

Thanks for listening and leaving such a thoughtful comment.

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Einarus

Einarus said 1108 days ago (June 7th, 2010)

Smooth
Just to get that snare issue out of the way - it kinda stuck out in the beginning, but it kinda grows on you. By the time it finished I had started digging it. So what I'm saying is that I don't know what to say.
So there.
But as to the song itself, I really liked it.
Really like the guitar sound you've got going here. Nice flow throughout and all-around a very nice vibe.

Very nicely done!

-Einar S.

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alackbass	alackbass said 1108 days ago (June 7th, 2010)
	Thanks Man I'm glad you like the song. That's what's most important. To your snare comment, so if I changed it, some might come back and say it's better, some my say it's worse, while still other's will be indifferent. So why bother? Thanks for listening and commenting. I always appreciate your feedback. Check out my latest song called Close to the Bone by Jerry Quinn

tempie

tempie said 1108 days ago (June 7th, 2010)

i'm a big fan of that 70's adult soft rock radio sound
just so relaxed man, very cool approach. I like the whispery backups, the sparse playing (those jazzy chords and that nice warm les paul tone). The format dovetails well with the confessional nature of the lyrics, makes for a kind of intimate conversation. I dig it.

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alackbass	alackbass said 1108 days ago (June 7th, 2010)
	And That Makes Me Happy Thanks so much for listening. I really appreciate your kind comments. Check out my latest song called Close to the Bone by Jerry Quinn

Feter	Feter said 1108 days ago (June 7th, 2010)
	Don't Be So Blind Good one Andrew ...good rock ballad ...very nice vocal work ...lovely arrangement ..I m so curious how you used the H4 ...!?!? again good job .. thnx a lot for sharin !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

alackbass	alackbass said 1108 days ago (June 7th, 2010)
	No Thank You I don't consider myself a singer, so all the support I've received for the vocal is much appreciated. I use the H4 strictly as a USB mic. I had to download the newest drivers so now it's just a simple plug and play mic. I can still use it as a field recorder, but haven't had much use for that lately. Check out my latest song called Close to the Bone by Jerry Quinn

magnatone	magnatone said 1108 days ago (June 7th, 2010)
	Blind finally - sorry this took so long andrew - what a FABULOUS tune! great work andrew - congrats! Check out my latest song called Wave Goodbye

alackbass	alackbass said 1108 days ago (June 7th, 2010)
	No Hurry There's never a hurry for you to get to one of my posts, although I always look forward to your supportive comments. But come on, really? No opinion on the snare drum? :) Check out my latest song called Close to the Bone by Jerry Quinn

Calchas	Calchas said 1108 days ago (June 7th, 2010)
	Excellent pop ballad Andrew. The arrangement is solid and the production is clean. Your vocal delivery shines! A fine tune with a good message bro! Be well!

alackbass	alackbass said 1108 days ago (June 7th, 2010)
	Thank You The constant flow of encouragement I get from the MJ community is a wonderful gift. Thank you so much for taking the time to listen and comment. Check out my latest song called Close to the Bone by Jerry Quinn

SmokeyVW	SmokeyVW said 1108 days ago (June 7th, 2010)
	smooooooth very nostalgic... good one thanks Check out my latest song called Burnt Sienna

alackbass	alackbass said 1108 days ago (June 7th, 2010)
	No! Thank, youuuuuuuuuuuuu! I appreciate you stopping by to listen and comment. Check out my latest song called Close to the Bone by Jerry Quinn

sloparts	sloparts said 1107 days ago (June 7th, 2010)
	Outstanding song writing Andrew And the music perfectly fits the song. The guitar sounds sweet on this my friend, as do the other instruments and the mix. Great piece of work. I could hear this on the radio and not be surprise at all. As a matter of fact I look forward to that. Ed Check out my latest song called Quack's Blues

alackbass	alackbass said 1107 days ago (June 8th, 2010)
	Thank You Ed Although I must admit it would surprise the hell out of me to hear it on the radio. Maybe an established artist will pick it up and make me a wealthy man. Now that, I would look forward to. Thanks so much for the support. I really appreciate it. Check out my latest song called Close to the Bone by Jerry Quinn

Jarvoid	Jarvoid said 1107 days ago (June 8th, 2010)
	Well it's all been said,a strong and able song that has been enhanced and embellished by some great musicianship.Way to go me old mucker. 80) Jarvoid Check out my latest song called laundromat blues

alackbass	alackbass said 1107 days ago (June 8th, 2010)
	Well Even if it's all been said, I can't say I ever get sick of hearing it. Thanks so much for stopping by to listen and leave a comment. Check out my latest song called Close to the Bone by Jerry Quinn

DarkPlanet	DarkPlanet said 1107 days ago (June 8th, 2010)
	Honest I like the rawness of the lyrics, it is a coversation with the self...the melody is nice and vocals are heartfelt, some deep emotions here... good job! Check out my latest song called Summer Glaze (With cchaplin)

alackbass	alackbass said 1106 days ago (June 8th, 2010)
	Thank You This is only my 3rd attempt at writing lyrics. So your kind comments about the lyrics will provide encouragement to try and develop that further. Thank you! Check out my latest song called Close to the Bone by Jerry Quinn

mvh9591	mvh9591 said 1107 days ago (June 8th, 2010)
	Very Nice____ This is an excellent song Andrew. The guitar and vocal delivery are great. Enjoyed - Thanks for sharing, mvh : ) Check out my latest song called 01-15-13 Not sure where it's taking me.

alackbass	alackbass said 1106 days ago (June 8th, 2010)
	Thank You I'm glad you like it. I had no way of knowing when I joined just how supportive the MJ community would be. Thanks again for listening and taking the time to comment. Check out my latest song called Close to the Bone by Jerry Quinn

davisamerica	davisamerica said 1106 days ago (June 9th, 2010)
	absolutely radio ready ...and I seldom use that tag but this really is Andrew. Everything is perfect to my ears. A really fine tune and performance. A sincere "Hats Off" Mr. Music Check out my latest song called 12

alackbass	alackbass said 1106 days ago (June 9th, 2010)
	Thank You! While the song may be radio ready I doubt I am. I'm glad the song suited your ears perfectly. I am humbled by your kind words. Check out my latest song called Close to the Bone by Jerry Quinn

guygrooves

guygrooves said 1106 days ago (June 9th, 2010)

Killer
production.... which tells me I have enough equipment and software so now I guess I'll have to learn how to use it properly. Or maybe go back to GB ;) This is such a well done song on all points. My only thought was the drums seemed a touch too digital. Maybe a bump around 200 hz and a roll off between 15 and 20 khz would warm them up. Just a thought. Great production writing and performance Andrew.
Peace

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alackbass

alackbass said 1106 days ago (June 9th, 2010)

Thank You
I appreciate your kind words. Whether or not one has enough or the right equipment is relative to the sound you wish to make. I'm considering moving up to Logic when I purchase a new Mac sometime this summer. But then I know I haven't fully exploited all the potential of GB8 let alone version 9 that would be on my new Mac. Considering it comes standard, I have to admit, GarageBand is pretty amazing stuff.

As for the drums (they've generated a lot of other comments), those are acoustic loops I downloaded from drums on demand. They were also the first time I tried to use the multiband compressor to get more headroom out of the drums rather than the standard preset compressor. I'll agree they didn't come out very warm sounding (although my Bose earbuds, headphones, and speakers tend to warm things up), but it was a sound I liked and just went with. The most important lesson I learned from those drum loops is MJ is filled with honest and talented musicians who know how to give constructive advise (like you gave here). That's the best part of being an MJ member.

Thanks again for taking the time to listen and comment so thoughtfully.

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scofugate	scofugate said 1106 days ago (June 9th, 2010)
	Wonderful Song! Excellent Production! Amazing songwriting! I like the Band sound, but I am sure it would sound great with your first plan NICE!!!! Check out my latest song called Prelude and Jam W/Ibstrat

alackbass

alackbass said 1106 days ago (June 9th, 2010)

Thanks Man
About the stripped down version, the acoustic guitar is so very unforgiving. Every squeak and inaccurate pick stroke sticks out. I just couldn't get past them, even though the process led to me noticing the same small imperfections in the stripped down recordings of Bob Dylan and Neil Young (which of course sound great). I just couldn't get past my own. Thanks again for listening and taking the time to comment.

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scofugate	scofugate said 1105 days ago (June 10th, 2010)
	Hey " Every squeak and inaccurate pick stroke sticks out" That is what makes is REAL and Human!! Check out my latest song called Prelude and Jam W/Ibstrat

alackbass	alackbass said 1105 days ago (June 10th, 2010)
	I know..... Thanks man, I needed to hear that. I'm working on a new one. Maybe this time I'll work up the courage. Check out my latest song called Close to the Bone by Jerry Quinn

kassia	kassia said 1105 days ago (June 10th, 2010)
	Blind This is an excellent song Andrew. I love the organic, laid back feel that makes it seem as if I'm right there in the room with you as you perform this. There were a couple of places where the vocals seemed just a little flat to my ear, but other than that, superb songwriting and performance and production. Check out my latest song called Greensleeves

alackbass	alackbass said 1105 days ago (June 10th, 2010)
	Love the Honesty There are pitch issues at places I'm sure and thanks for being so honest in your assessment. I'm not a singer but I chose to sing this one anyway. Most of all I'm glad you liked the song. Check out my latest song called Close to the Bone by Jerry Quinn

dantimmermans	dantimmermans said 1105 days ago (June 10th, 2010)
	cool, relaxed tune I love the chorus harmony and the guitar solo: simple, clean, effective, and a nice juicy tone. Drakonis pointed out the ringing chords - I agree, they really give such a laid back mood, that unfortunately the drums do kinda upset. that said, the ruffle at 2:45 is just delicious! Check out my latest song called 'Oh Yeah!' by the band Oh Yeah!

alackbass	alackbass said 1105 days ago (June 10th, 2010)
	Thanks Dan You and Eduard weren't alone on the drum thing. The feedback I've received from this one has me considering drum loop choices a bit more carefully on others that are currently being worked on. I'm glad you heard other things in it you liked. Thanks for listening and taking the time to leave such thoughtful feedback. Check out my latest song called Close to the Bone by Jerry Quinn

lengold	lengold said 1104 days ago (June 11th, 2010)
	This sounds very accomplished and professional. Lovely song and performance. We must have a similar taste in drum sounds, I like that crisp sound. Cheers Len Check out my latest song called B E A U T I F U L

alackbass

alackbass said 1104 days ago (June 11th, 2010)

A "Yah" for the Snare
Thanks Len for your kind words and taking the time to listen. The debate about the snare drum has taught me we all must go with what's pleasing to our own ears. Sure we can reach out to valued opinions prior to posting. But in the end whatever we post will not get universal approval. So all one can do is produce music that sounds good to their own ears. Hopefully some other ears will agree. Thanks again!

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egobandit	egobandit said 1104 days ago (June 11th, 2010)
	Bright and open simple and clear the guitar stumming is like waves hitting the sea shore! very cool singing ! A bow to you great song Check out my latest song called piece it together

alackbass	alackbass said 1104 days ago (June 11th, 2010)
	Thanks While this one was taking shape I tried all sorts of approaches to the rhythm guitar. It was rather ironic that in the end what seemed to work best was just simple single down-strokes on the downbeats. And thanks for the kind words regarding the vocal and the song itself. Check out my latest song called Close to the Bone by Jerry Quinn

Firesign	Firesign said 1104 days ago (June 11th, 2010)
	Beautiful love the guitar and the harmonies Check out my latest song called The Lonely Fools

alackbass	alackbass said 1103 days ago (June 11th, 2010)
	Thank You I really appreciate it. Check out my latest song called Close to the Bone by Jerry Quinn

BirdmanWayne94	BirdmanWayne94 said 1103 days ago (June 12th, 2010)
	Although I'm quite... ... young compared to the rest here but I sure do realize that the radio played songs like this before. This is right up there with the late 80's/early 90's soft ballads... fantastic work! No nits for they have been mentioned previously. But your voice sounds like someone I've heard before... can't quite get the name! Check out my latest song called (An Untitled) Intro

alackbass

alackbass said 1103 days ago (June 12th, 2010)

Thanks Man
I appreciate the you taking the time to listen and comment. I don't know who my voice reminds you of. I just hope he can sing halfway decent :)

As for the previous mentioned "nits," you probably have suggestions for improvements that I would love to hear. Those suggestions would no doubt work their way into future songs. Thanks again.

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guitapick	guitapick said 1103 days ago (June 12th, 2010)
	Sounds real fine to me... ...the extra time, thought, and effort's always worth it... Check out my latest song called 'Cuz I Can

alackbass	alackbass said 1103 days ago (June 12th, 2010)
	Thanks Man! I appreciate you taking the time. Although you'd have to hear the previous mixes to be sure the extra time, thought and effort were worth it. Again, thank you! Check out my latest song called Close to the Bone by Jerry Quinn

richard13	richard13 said 1103 days ago (June 12th, 2010)
	I don't care what all the others say... I like it. Nice job Andrew. Check out my latest song called Caledonia

alackbass	alackbass said 1103 days ago (June 12th, 2010)
	Wait? None of the others liked it? :) My reading comprehension must really suck. All kidding aside, I'm glad you liked it. Check out my latest song called Close to the Bone by Jerry Quinn

VicDiesel	VicDiesel said 1103 days ago (June 12th, 2010)
	Sometimes you need to let your children go whether they're ready or not. Good tune; great guitar sound, singing is A-OK too. Check out my latest song called Fourth Candle

alackbass	alackbass said 1103 days ago (June 12th, 2010)
	And You Know.... in the case of a song, I'm never sure. And admittedly my abilities as a writer, arranger, producer, instrumentalist, engineer, and (most of all) singer are limited. So at some point you just have to stop and let the people decide. I'm glad you liked the tune. That's the most important thing to me. Check out my latest song called Close to the Bone by Jerry Quinn

psexnyc

psexnyc said 1103 days ago (June 12th, 2010)

How Do You Get That Guitar Sound?
This track is just crisply sweet! And I really like how that snare just keeps "smacking"! I love pronounced snare drum sounds! I read the comments about "rim shots" and I can hear some nice tight, smacking rim shots happening in this song in my imagination. And your vocal harmonies are solid. You've got a great tune here!!

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alackbass

alackbass said 1103 days ago (June 12th, 2010)

Thank You
I'm glad you liked it and thanks for the thoughtful feedback. As for the guitar sounds, it's Line6 PodFarm or GreaBox (I don't remember which, I use both). The guitar is my Les Paul Studio, both pickups, a Vox AC30 Model with some delay, reverb, and chorus. The solos the same rig but with the neck pickup. Then I added a little tremolo effect on that lead guitar when it adds upper register chord changes in the last bridge, verse, and chorus. Thanks again!

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mikkinylund

mikkinylund said 1103 days ago (June 12th, 2010)

Oh
These are some very good lyrics and very good arrangement. Read some of the other comments, and yeah rim shot would work well on this one. Mellow it down a bit, and let the vocals and the lyrics stand out. Excellent vocals and and awesome ending. Good chorus! This is not my style, but like I've said many times before, when I hear something good, it can be anything as long as it has heart. This does for sure. I like this a lot actually, a bit of Bee Gees if I may stretch it! :) And, the lyrics speaks directly to me... Good job.

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alackbass	alackbass said 1103 days ago (June 12th, 2010)
	Wow Thank you. As you know I have tremendous respect for your work and thoroughly enjoy your music. Your kind and thoughtful comments are very encouraging. Thanks again! Check out my latest song called Close to the Bone by Jerry Quinn

Hickling_Stan	Hickling_Stan said 1102 days ago (June 13th, 2010)
	A great journey Andrew, interesting to hear the journey you went through creating this one. I'd agree with hackneybloke in the main and I love that line..Just beware when you punish yourself The penalty exceeds the crime. So true. A great song well done. Mark Check out my latest song called Elective Introspective

alackbass	alackbass said 1102 days ago (June 13th, 2010)
	Thank You I find the lyrics are always the toughest part. So when a listener has positive things to say about a line or two I wrote it feels pretty good. Again thanks for listening and taking the time to comment. Check out my latest song called Close to the Bone by Jerry Quinn

SISTERS	SISTERS said 1102 days ago (June 13th, 2010)
	love that bass funny how a few choice deep notes affect a song - this is just swell. i dig the laid back groove - and your vocals are doing a great job singing the message. you've got a beautifully wrapped package of sound here. enjoyed! anne Check out my latest song called UNIVERSAL SONG w Astronomusic & 24 Soloists

alackbass	alackbass said 1102 days ago (June 13th, 2010)
	Just a Bunch of Roots & 5ths Or so I thought. Thanks so much for stopping by to listen. Check out my latest song called Close to the Bone by Jerry Quinn

Monkaton	Monkaton said 1095 days ago (June 20th, 2010)
	Good Production I am always amazed at how well people record their music on the MJ and this is no exception. Great sounding instruments and production. The snare drum didn't bother me. Check out my latest song called Dirty Looks

alackbass	alackbass said 1095 days ago (June 20th, 2010)
	Thank You It's the technology. It amazes me how easy the Mac, GarageBand, and my Line6 guitar amp modeling software make getting a clean recording. Now all I need to do is come up with a song and decent sounding performances. Check out my latest song called Close to the Bone by Jerry Quinn

claypotts	claypotts said 1066 days ago (July 19th, 2010)
	well done Hey, this was beautiful to listen to. Your vocals are mellow and smooth and backing and harmonies spot on. Super lyric. WELL DONE! Check out my latest song called Come On Back To Me Baby

alackbass	alackbass said 1066 days ago (July 19th, 2010)
	Wow Thank you Clay. I really appreciate that. Check out my latest song called Close to the Bone by Jerry Quinn

speedonl	speedonl said 1060 days ago (July 24th, 2010)
	Don't Be So Blind Great song all around.. like the guitar work a lot, good melody lines! Check out my latest song called Still be Friends acoustic

alackbass	alackbass said 1058 days ago (July 27th, 2010)
	Thank You I really appreciate it. Check out my latest song called Close to the Bone by Jerry Quinn

tf10music	tf10music said 1060 days ago (July 25th, 2010)
	great voice I really liked this. The acoustics in whatever room or studio you recorded this in did beautifully, the harmonies were real jewels. Check out my latest song called Canto II: A Rough Beast (To Stave Off The Rot)

alackbass	alackbass said 1058 days ago (July 27th, 2010)
	The Acoustic Is actually a clean Les Paul plugged into my interface. Thanks for the kind words. Check out my latest song called Close to the Bone by Jerry Quinn

alackbass	alackbass said 1051 days ago (August 3rd, 2010)
	Oh you meant the room On every track I sit on my sofa in my den. Lots of furniture and carpet so it's a dead space. As a result the acoustics of the room are pretty neutral. That allows me to use various reverbs in GarageBand to simulate room acoustics. Check out my latest song called Close to the Bone by Jerry Quinn

billyfromphilly	billyfromphilly said 1040 days ago (August 14th, 2010)
	Blinded... I really like this piece... Even though I'm late hearing it... I've read the comments... Don't remember reading about alternating the rim shot and snare... maybe give the snare a couple of bars "if you could live with it..." Check out my latest song called PhillyRockJam

alackbass

alackbass said 1038 days ago (August 16th, 2010)

Thanks
I really appreciate you taking the time to listen and leave a comment. Yeah, the snare was discussed quite a bit and I did receive PMs about an alternating snare/rim. I was just okay with how it is (realizing there are a multitude of other options that may be better than what I did). I find a song is never done. But I reach a point where I’m done with a song.

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Bob Rodgers

Bob Rodgers said 1040 days ago (August 14th, 2010)

Great song!
This is excellent! Superb song writing with some great lyrics. A real pro sound with a good choice of instruments. I like the drums and I think you have the right sound on them for this song, a nice crisp sound on the snare is sometimes more favourable than a rim shot.
Lovely harmonies and a great vocal.
Very much enjoyed Andrew.
D/L

Bob

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alackbass	alackbass said 1038 days ago (August 16th, 2010)
	Thanks! I appreciate it. That’s why I didn’t change the snare. While many did object to it, others thought I had it right. You can’t please everybody. So please yourself and then look to see who’s with you. Check out my latest song called Close to the Bone by Jerry Quinn

jodyrush	jodyrush said 920 days ago (December 12th, 2010)
	Soothing vocals Andrew. Great melody. Rhythm guitar has a nice tone. Chorus is swirling in my brain. Glad I found this one. Check out my latest song called Forbidden Fruit

alackbass	alackbass said 892 days ago (January 9th, 2011)
	Thanks Jody I didn't realize you took the time to check out this oldie! I appreciate the listen and the kind comments. Check out my latest song called Close to the Bone by Jerry Quinn

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