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This is my first submission on MJ & I believe it takes like a week to go through, so I'm pacing my breathing. You'd think I'd be used to this already, geez!

"Girl on Fire" was composed by a terrific songwriter/musician named Tres, {He isn't a member here} who was looking for a female singer to cover it. He asked me & I happily obliged, I felt a connection and just loved the melody & lyrics.

So, I recorded & mixed it. Never posted it anywhere else & figured it would be cool to upload it as my first song here...I always recommend listening through headphones. Special thank you to Tres for trusting me with your song, you are a super talent!

RAVEN ;-)
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Lyrics
VERSE 1
Last week, I was cooler than I am now; Then you happened don’t know how.
This week, I am hotter than I’ve been before, don’t think I can take much more
Our first kiss: a near miss Awkwardly, I turned away, didn’t know what I should say
Since then it’s been replaying over in my mind, (I’m) wishin’ I could just rewind

PRECHORUS
Never loved the boys I dated
Slow to warm I’m glad I waited
Now my thoughts aren’t so G-rated
I’m a little frustrated

CHORUS
Oooh, I’ve never been a girl on fire! Light me up light me up, yeah I’m ready to burn
Oooh, I’ve never been a girl on fire, but ever since I met you, I think I’m catchin’ on

VERSE 2
I’m so confused I'm all tangled up inside, can't wait till I come untied
Daydream/ Nightmare all my thoughts have turned to you, don’t think that you even care
I can’t sleep, I can’t eat! I can try but it’s no use, can’t seem to un-light this fuse
Tick tock! Time bomb! Infatuation overload, any second I’ll explode

PRECHORUS 2
You can see it in my eyes
My temperature is on the rise
I wish you’d just realize that
I’m so sick of fantasizing

CHORUS 2
Oooh, I’ve never been a girl on fire! Light me up light me up, yeah I’m ready to burn.
Oooh, I’ve never been a girl on fire, but ever since I met you, I think I’m catchin’ on.

BRIDGE
Tonight is the night and it feels so right
All it takes is just a spark
and we’ll ignite

OUT CHORUS
Oooh, I’ve never been a girl on fire! Light me up light me up, yeah I’m ready to burn.
Oooh, I’ve never been a girl on fire, but ever since I met you, ever since I met you…
Oooh, I’ve never been a girl on fire! Light me up light me up, yeah I’m ready to burn.
Oooh, I’ve never been a girl on fire, but ever since I met you, I think I’m catchin’ on
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Hits: 7248
Comments: 245
Fans: 116
Plays: 161428
Downloads: 132

Uploaded: Jun 22, 2010 - 11:28:34 PM
Last Updated: Jun 22, 2010 - 10:27:27 AM Last Played: Sep 10, 2017 - 10:02:05 PM
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Comments
michaeljayklein said 2709 days ago (June 22nd, 2010)
You da bestest!
This was fantastic Dani! Good grief, so much vocal talent and then you couple that with the ability to mix a song with such incredible mastery (and I know that you work with extremely little at hand). Stunning and the work done by Tres was no less fabulous. PS: Farina liked this too!
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RAVENS said 2709 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
Gracias
Awww, tanks Spanky! It is so cool to see that you are the person who left me my first comment here. I'm super happy that you like the song, it was a blast recording. Can't tell you how much I appreciate YOU! Give Weef an Eskimo kiss from cousin Impsie.
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Char said 2709 days ago (June 22nd, 2010)
Sounds
perfect. Would be great for one of those TV shows with all the beautiful young people. :)
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RAVENS said 2709 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
Gracias
That is so cool to say, thank you so very much Char. Tres & I truly appreciate your wonderful feedback.
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kickliquid said 2709 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
It's like a sexy party in my ears
This song is like if Tegan and Sara + Metric + Shiny Toy Guns had a love child.

This is one of those song's I have to listen too in my shiny new sports car with a European name no one can pronounce while driving really fast with the windows down and the people on the outside would mistake me for a male model because the song alone would make me look ridiculously good looking, it's just that damn sexy... sorry lol i got carried away

I digg it :)
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RAVENS said 2709 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
Gracias
Throw Johnny Depp in that mix & I'm there!

Can't tell you how happy I am that you dug it. The first time I heard the track I was hooked, so it's really nice to know that I was good enough to sing on it. Thanks again for your awesome feedback.
Check out my latest song called Tattooed Scars (w/ Sigmund, Scofugate, Rok41)
crissew said 2709 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
Definite Pat Benetar vibe goin on
So very cool. Great vocal as always, you got it pro quality every time. Very cool. Harkens me back to other bands like Joan Jett and Heart. Awesome work here.
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crissew said 2709 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
oh yes
Can't forget Blondie too. Great stuff. One of my favs of yours Dani
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RAVENS said 2709 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
Gracias
Ya think? When I listen to my voice on this, I'm reminded of those teenage pop singers. What ever happened to Debbie Gibson anyway? Super thank yous, Charles.
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alackbass said 2709 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
Girl on Fire
Wow! This track is filled with hook after hook! The instrumental bed is flawless. Full of dynamics, interesting changes, and an arrangement that builds and backs down in all the right places.

Now to the vocal performance and arrangement. Perfectly double tracked. Great harmonies! Flawless mix. Great use of effects! The delay is tastefully used to accent just the right phrases.

And I get to download it? This day is off to a great start.
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RAVENS said 2709 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
Gracias
Isn't the track super coolio? I thought the same thing when I heard it. Tres is so awesome, and he actually sang the song first {as a guide} and I thought he rocked. But, he insisted that it be sung by a female.

Thank you very much for the props on the vocals & arrangement too. I always sought to improve on that. We certainly appreciate your awesome feedback.
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Symphony101 said 2709 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
I actually cheated
and listened some of your works on other places. So when I hit play I knew what I will hear would be a delight.

This rocks Dani. Terrific song, and the recording quality is just exceptional. Thank you for this post !
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RAVENS said 2709 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
Gracias
Awww, that's awesome! Thank you so much, means a lot. Tres & I are super happy that you liked the song & appreciate your terrific feedback.
Check out my latest song called Tattooed Scars (w/ Sigmund, Scofugate, Rok41)
LouDobbs said 2709 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
Super
This is blazing with energy - great change-ups and topped off with simply marvelous vocals. Really is good! No wonder Tres wanted you to rock this.

. - L
RAVENS said 2709 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
Gracias
One of the things I really like about this song are the change-ups, gives it some oomph. Super thank yous for your awesome feedback, very glad you dig it.
Check out my latest song called Tattooed Scars (w/ Sigmund, Scofugate, Rok41)
CIASM_ZENABI_ said 2709 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
catchy
catchy from the start, cool vocals, catchy guitar, nice driven chorus. enjoyed it cheers
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RAVENS said 2709 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
Gracias
When I first recorded it, the chorus was stuck in my head for days. Thanks so very much, awesome that you like it, we appreciate that greatly.
Check out my latest song called Tattooed Scars (w/ Sigmund, Scofugate, Rok41)
rok41 said 2709 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
Dani
This is great! Your vocals are stellar! The arrangement is very polished and professional. Great song all around! Download! Can't wait to hear more form you!
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RAVENS said 2709 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
Gracias
That's so awesome, thanks a million for your wonderful feedback. Tres and I truly appreciate it.
Check out my latest song called Tattooed Scars (w/ Sigmund, Scofugate, Rok41)
particledots said 2709 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
hi ravens
i like this...very nicely done pop music

what is the effect you use on your vocal?
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particledots said 2709 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
PS
i listened on studio monitors and headphones - and it truly sounds much much better in phones

do you do your mixing in headphones?
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RAVENS said 2709 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
Gracias
I used an effect called Chorus Reverb, which really only adds a slight reverb to your voice. But, I doubled the vocal track & moved one over just a micro-smidgen to create that weird effect. Hec, I don't know what I do most times, I experiment like crazy.

About the mixing, yes I do mix with headphones. On a side-note: I suffer from allergies which affects my left ear. So when listening or mixing via speakers, it throws me off completely. I've gotten so used to listening to music through headphones, that when I don't wear them, it's awkward. Super thank yous for your wonderful feedback, I'm so happy you liked the song.


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Ibstrat said 2709 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
Wow
this is great.You are a fantastic vocalist!
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RAVENS said 2709 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
Gracias
Awww, thank you so much for such a wonderful comment, it's truly appreciated.
Check out my latest song called Tattooed Scars (w/ Sigmund, Scofugate, Rok41)
davisamerica said 2709 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
oh my....
this is hot. Dani....incredible track...dynamite lyrics and vocals are killer...downloaded
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RAVENS said 2709 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
Gracias
Aren't the lyrics neat? It was so funny when I first tried to sing it, kept getting tongue-tied. Tres is very talented, I hope he joins MJ. So awesome that you dug it, can't tell ya how much I appreciate it.
Check out my latest song called Tattooed Scars (w/ Sigmund, Scofugate, Rok41)
awigze said 2709 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
Dani !
I think I'm catching on.... just a girl who loves to....SING !!! Super vocals. you know, you are going to be in great demand here. I hope you're ready!!!! sounds like it! Great. Tell Tres, we like his music!
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RAVENS said 2709 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
Gracias
Super cool that ya like it, thanks a million. I'll certainly tell Tres about all the wonderful comments on his track. Hopefully he'll join. Thanks again, it's greatly appreciated.
Check out my latest song called Tattooed Scars (w/ Sigmund, Scofugate, Rok41)
magnatone said 2709 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
WOOT!!!
FINALLY!!!! what a GREAT first upload, with many MANY more to come i hope! this is fabulous on all levels - what an awesome voice you have! YAY!!
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RAVENS said 2709 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
Gracias
Awww, you're super duper sweet! Thank you so very much for your awesome feedback, it's great to be a part of this community. We appreciate it greatly.
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dave_b said 2709 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
Girl on Fire
All sorts of really good stuff going on here. Great hook, and the lyric develops it well. I like the mixture of short and long phrases. " I think I’m catchin’ on" especially provides contrast, and keeps the momentum rolling. Imagery "tick tock, time bomb" answers any questions the listener might have about what a "Girl On Fire" might feel like. I like the backer, very current sounding arrangement, excellent production, reminds me of Silversun Pickups.
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RAVENS said 2709 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
Gracias
Tres is a wonderful composer, I hope he posts his music here someday. So very happy that you like it, we appreciate your terrific feedback so much.
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egobandit said 2709 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
Girl
you on fire great phrasing in the singing sounded difficult but you make seem easy, love the changes in this a little Debra Harry thing you got goin on really cool!
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RAVENS said 2709 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
Gracias
Oh it was hysterical the very first time I sang it. The pre-chorus was torturous to sing without the lyrics in front of me. I'm so happy you dug it, super thank yous!
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Feter said 2709 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
Girl on Fire
Wow ...cool singing Dani ...wonderful music track
and playing ...Rock on !!!!
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RAVENS said 2709 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
Gracias
A thousand and one thank yous sir, means a lot & we certainly appreciate your wonderful feedback.
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ShadowofNine said 2709 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
OMG
You finally did it and with a new track to WoW you sneaky girl you...well you already know I admire everything Dani you are not only a fine fine vocalist, you are a fine producer and never upload tracks that I can find fault with...luv this friend.
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RAVENS said 2709 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
Gracias
Awww, Shadowman thanks a million. It wouldn't be cause ya owe me a few boxes of mac & cheese, would it? Hehe, seriously it means a lot coming from you & I'm so happy that you like the song.
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Sigmund said 2709 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
Girl on Fire
Dani - I have read the listener comments to this point - all very positive - and I am sorry but I must complain. You see I made the mistake of listening to this song early this morning, and I was in kind of a hurry so I did not comment at that time - well, imagine the puzzled looks I got all morning from folks I came in contact with who wondered what was wrong with me as I walked around singing "Oooh I've never been a girl on fire"! So I must respectfully request you don't post any more gender oriented tunes with such easy to remember and clever, catchy lines. And all those cool effects on the vocals and interesting breaks, well they don't help. So to make things easier, may suggest a couple of lyrical topics for your next tune: golf, the weather, or driving in heavy traffic, to name a few.

Seriously, great everything - really loved your first post here, and I look forward to more. Thanks!
Sig
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RAVENS said 2709 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
Gracias
Oh good grief, as I read your first sentence, I braced myself and thought, "Oh no, oh no, oh no". Shucks, that was so darn sweet. Can't thank you enough for such a wonderful comment. I appreciate it soooo much, awesome that you liked it!
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tokai said 2709 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
Yeah you made it
yeah, very nice. Wow what a voice.. already it's a smash as i thought. First of many we hope.
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RAVENS said 2709 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
Gracias
Thanks for the extra push, very glad that you like it. Tres & I appreciate it kindly.
Check out my latest song called Tattooed Scars (w/ Sigmund, Scofugate, Rok41)
craft said 2709 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
oh ye
Great vocals.. I love the way they flow with the song...:)
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RAVENS said 2709 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
Gracias
Nice seeing ya again, super thank yous for your awesome feedback. We greatly appreciate it.
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tempie said 2709 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
oh yeah
i really dig this! half tegan and sarah or pony up and half toni basil. outstanding. i think i hear pat benatar in there too. SO hooky. ipod candy!
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RAVENS said 2709 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
Gracias
How about half Italian & half Puerto Rican? Oh wait, that's me! Sorry, I'm so lame... Super duper thank yous, awesome that ya dug it. Tres & I really do appreciate it.
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Calchas said 2709 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
Fabulous!
Wow Dani, what a debut! Your voice sounds terrific. And tell Tres that he's more than welcome here at MJ. Great music track! BRAVO!

Be well friend!
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RAVENS said 2709 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
Gracias
Thanks a million, that is super cool. I emailed Tres earlier so hopefully he will join, he truly is a great talent. Many thanks again, I'm so happy you liked it.
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Pete_NB said 2709 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
Nice Start!
Fast yet sensuous singing and you groove to this songs many hooks quite nicely.

Great job mixing the harmonies, they have some unique flavours without seeming gimmicky.
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RAVENS said 2709 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
Gracias
That's so sweet, super duper thank yous for a wonderful comment. Very glad you liked our song, it's so appreciated.
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Barretok said 2709 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
GRACIAS A TI...
Hi Dani, it is so nice to see you here I LOVE this song. You two did a wonderful job. Great track. Your vocals can fuel magic into anything. I'm glad you are my linda amiga!! ;)
B
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RAVENS said 2709 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
Gracias
I burned my veggie burger, but still ate it. ;-)

Super glad to see you here, your comment means so much. You heard the rough draft, so it's awesome that you liked the final version. Always a pleasure, thank you again mi amigo poco verde.
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LouDobbs said 2709 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
second helping +++
on my FB page....

. - L
LouDobbs said 2709 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
Note
I'm not Lou Dobbs :)
RAVENS said 2709 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
Gracias
I don't have any of those Myspace/Facebook thingies. However, it is super duper quadruper cool that you would put my song on your page. That rocks man! Whoever you are? Thank you again.
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LouDobbs said 2709 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
de nada
super duper quadruper Luper ♥
jdholliday said 2709 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
So American idol called
They wanna know why you haven't auditioned? ;-)
this is a radio ready hit!
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RAVENS said 2709 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
Gracias
Awww, that is so sweet to say. Actually I am a tad-bit old for that show, wahhhh. In all honestly, I only sing and create music as a hobby. I have no desire to do this professionally. Thank you again for such an awesome comment.
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fasteddie said 2709 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
Awesome
Love the lyrics and vocals!

My first listen to this song is on some really crappy speakers here at work. Even on the crappy speakers this sounds killer good. I can't wait to get home and listen to this on my good monitors.

You ROCK Dani!
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RAVENS said 2708 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
Gracias
I'll trade you my crappy speakers for your crappy speakers. Super cool that you dug it, thanks a million for your awesome feedback. YOU rock!
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Moviz said 2709 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
First fire
I came across that was cool Dani.... and this is just that and with a driving beat. I'm not surprised you took this one up; great writing, but the performance and mix are so top pro..... wonderful stuff, regards M
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RAVENS said 2708 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
Gracias
You are too cool for school! Thank you so much, can't even tell ya how happy I am that you like our song. Your feedback is very much appreciated, sir.
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davisamerica2 said 2708 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
Great vocals Dani
Sounds like a tough one to sing, but you did it effortlessly and without a flaw. Can't wait to hear more from you. And I agree with you: this is a great song, and your mixing sounds perfect.
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RAVENS said 2708 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
Gracias
Awww, thanks so much. It was tricky to sing the first 150 times, but after that is was a breeze. I especially thank you for the props on the mixing, I am always trying to improve on that.
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jiguma said 2708 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
Love it!
You have a perfect voice for this Dani. Great track, and you really do a lot to make it even better.
Congratulations - fantastic first post.
Neil
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RAVENS said 2708 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
Gracias
How very sweet of you, super thank yous for such wonderful feedback. Tres & I truly appreciate it, so happy you liked our song.
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edwarke said 2708 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
Girl on Fire
The best thing about this song is the vocals and production. Very slick, for some reason I think of Britney "Not So Innocent" although I don't have any explanation why I do. The lyrics for me are very exciting and manage to work in some standard pop themes in a real original and fun way - and the inverse chorus concept is great: of course I was thinking it would be I AM a girl on fire, not "never been" a girl on fire. That really makes the artist "own" the song. A criticism of the lyric is that while the singer laments that he doesn't return the attention it ends up with the Bridge "Tonight is the night and it feels so right", so somehow she gets back together with him, but it's like an afterthought - there doesn't have to be a happy ending. Anyway I give this a 9 out of 10 - great debut to MJ, thanks.
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RAVENS said 2708 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
Gracias
Hec, I don't think Britney was ever "innocent" not since she was 5 at least. ;-)

I always appreciate constructive criticism, and learn something each time I receive it, so thank you so much. I'm really glad you liked the song & appreciate your wonderful feedback & suggestions.
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regulus said 2708 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
Really great
I had to take this one home with me. Your vox is on point. Though, 4 me the effects on the guitar was a little rich.

Do continue........ I would love to hear more from you. As a first shot at the site here your right on target. Keep tacken ............. r
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RAVENS said 2708 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
Gracias
Thank you my noble knight. Your avatar looks so interesting, I can't wait to hear your music. I appreciate your feedback very much, super happy that you dug the song.
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hackneybloke said 2708 days ago (June 24th, 2010)
girl on fire
hey dani. this is a great commercial tune. your voice is great. did you do the arrangement - it's sophisticated and always keeps interest. you two sound like a great combo. great first post.
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RAVENS said 2708 days ago (June 24th, 2010)
Gracias
Actually, all I had to do was sing, record & mix the final tracks. Tres composed the track & wrote the lyrics. He even has a version where he sings. {He'll cringe when he reads that} I'm so glad you liked it, we really appreciate your awesome feedback.
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Mike_Lynn said 2708 days ago (June 24th, 2010)
Really Cool
This is indeed a cool track. Both the song-writing and the performance are great. It will be on my playlist for sure. Cheers / Mike
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RAVENS said 2708 days ago (June 24th, 2010)
Gracias
Well your comment is really cool, and I certainly appreciate it. Thank you so much, I'm super happy that you like the song.
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ted23 said 2708 days ago (June 24th, 2010)
!
Love the track and the vocal delivery, spacing etc...
Pop excellence! Nuff said.
Ted

RAVENS said 2708 days ago (June 24th, 2010)
Gracias
Oh man the Garbage Pail Kids, do you remember that movie? Have you ever been to the "Garbage Pail Kids World site"? Why do I know these things? Anyway, super thank yous for your terrific comment, tis greatly appreciated.
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ted23 said 2708 days ago (June 24th, 2010)
Oh yeah
I'm having my own GPK revival/nostalgia trip. I've been to that site, that's the one where you can make our own gpk avatar... As soon as I get a spare 30mins I'm all over it.. The movie WAS garbage :)
Adios!
Outtaorbit said 2708 days ago (June 24th, 2010)
Nicely done.....
excellent attempt
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RAVENS said 2708 days ago (June 24th, 2010)
Gracias
Super cool that you dug it, Tres & I certainly do appreciate your excellent comment. Thank you so much!
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PrototypeEightyOne said 2708 days ago (June 24th, 2010)
yo
love that kick, it hits hard, nicely done. cool track, very poppy which I don't usually dig, but I enjoyed this. You have a great voice and sense of writing. Would love to collab sometime! Just let me know if your interested. This reminds me of early 90's grunge crossed with pop using an 80's drum set and very benetar-esque. Job well done! very cool. Hope to hear lots more here on MJ. I hea ryou on the allergy tip, I too sometimes have the same troubles. This mix was great though!
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RAVENS said 2708 days ago (June 24th, 2010)
Gracias
Yo, you from Brooklyn or sumfin? So cool that you dug this. Actually, Tres wrote the lyrics. Funny thing, I am usually the writer when I collab, so this experience was really great. Hec yeah, would like to collab with ya. Maybe our song can be called "Girl in Space". Can someone say, Lame-O? Thanks a million for your outta this world comment, it's so appreciated.
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TERRAPLANE said 2708 days ago (June 24th, 2010)
Pro sound all around
Excellent song writing, musicianship, vocals & mix,, You & Tress ROCK! Thanks for sharing... Keep on keepin on,,, hope to hear more from you..T
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RAVENS said 2708 days ago (June 24th, 2010)
Gracias
Thank you sooo very much, I'm really happy that you like our song. Greatly appreciate your wonderful feedback.
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woofer3 said 2708 days ago (June 24th, 2010)
Very attractive
A good song and well performed - what I do like about it is that there are lots of little surprises dotted all over the place and all of them highlights which is something you don't seem to get a lot of anymore - I am reminded of Anastacia, and needless to say I enjoyed this track very much - especially being an old hippy.
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RAVENS said 2708 days ago (June 24th, 2010)
Gracias
Love your avatar, reminds me of Mario Bros.

Can't thank you enough, I'm really happy that you like the song. Tres really made it easy for me by creating such an awesome track. Thanks again, it's greatly appreciated.
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Bob6stringer said 2707 days ago (June 24th, 2010)
It'sall about me, right?
Man, this thing's would-up tighter than a 5 year-old Britney (per your reply to edwarke). You make the listener feel like the stone in the sling ready to be launched. I can't believe Tres wrote this song for you to sing about me, ad neither of you have ever even me. Crazy. You have great, great control.
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RAVENS said 2707 days ago (June 24th, 2010)
Gracias
It's always about you man!

Hey I like the stone in the sling reference, it's no wonder we get along so well. Thanks a million for your ultra-cool comment, I appreciate it very much. Ummm, so where's my ring Mr? ;-)
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Gaylen75 said 2707 days ago (June 25th, 2010)
This is very awesome
I love this. my only critic is the claps should be compressed to give them more pow.
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RAVENS said 2707 days ago (June 25th, 2010)
Gracias
Good point, I'm sure it was I that suppressed the clap when I mixed the tracks. I'm always learning & using Sonar is quite challenging. Super thanks for such great feedback, Mr. dreamy voice.
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Hickling_Stan said 2707 days ago (June 25th, 2010)
Distinctive
vocal and plenty going on in the background to keep my attention. Theres a feel of real urgency to the vocals which is good. Enjoyed. cheers Mark
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RAVENS said 2707 days ago (June 25th, 2010)
Gracias
Thanks a million, I'm so very happy that you liked the song. Tres & I really do appreciate your terrific feedback.
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bud said 2707 days ago (June 25th, 2010)
Fantastic first post - what a great blastoff
Excellent by any standards - your vocals are perfect and the mix is great.
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RAVENS said 2707 days ago (June 25th, 2010)
Gracias
Thank you so very much, I was so iffy about even posting but I'm so happy that I did. This community is really wonderful. Your pooch is adorable!
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obbster said 2707 days ago (June 25th, 2010)
Sounds great
Love it.
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RAVENS said 2707 days ago (June 25th, 2010)
Gracias
Thank you so much! I wish "ours" was done, but I'm still messing around with the mix. I'll get it eventually, now I'm on a mission! Very happy you liked this song, many thanks again.
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Vic Holman said 2706 days ago (June 25th, 2010)
yes you are on fire
the music is very stylish in a great pop rock style, a nice contemporary sound.

you made a excellent choice to vocalize on this. the vocals are GREAT and the melody is so dead on...........the song is on fire!!!
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RAVENS said 2706 days ago (June 25th, 2010)
Gracias
I could certainly use a bit of color, I'm so pale!

Super duper thank yous for such a wonderful comment, Tres read all the positive feedback and was so very appreciative, as am I. Happy that you dug our song, little teddy bear.
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ktb said 2706 days ago (June 25th, 2010)
ready to go
very pro sounding. I love your voice and what you do with it :-) Very creative and accessible. Tres laid in a monster sound bed.
Kudo's
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RAVENS said 2706 days ago (June 26th, 2010)
Gracias
Thank you so very much, that's so awesome of you to say. Yeah Tres is very talented, everything I've heard from him sounds pro. Oh whoa, your latest song, I am so there...3....2....1....zoooooooom!
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MarkHolbrook said 2706 days ago (June 26th, 2010)
Dang...
I was waiting for this to show up... You discussed it in chat or a forums or somewhere and man I missed it. My apologies!!!

This is great tune man! Powerful and full rich textures and your vocal just kills! Outstanding!
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RAVENS said 2706 days ago (June 26th, 2010)
Gracias
Hec, even if you chimed in 5 years later, it would still mean a lot to me. Oh no, I've never even been to chat, better off because I'd never stop talking!

Thank you so much for your fanflippin'tastic feedback, it's truly appreciated. You have an interesting avatar!
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alanfraser said 2706 days ago (June 26th, 2010)
Very cool!
It's not clear but it sounds like you played all the parts too. No telling how you did it but it's an excellent job. Congratulations!
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RAVENS said 2706 days ago (June 26th, 2010)
Gracias
I live in Sunset Park Brooklyn, if you were to swagger through my hood with that outfit on, they'd call ya, "Pimpin' Fraser" very cool avatar!

About the song - Tres composed the track & wrote the lyrics. For my part - I recorded 6 vocal tracks & did the mixing. It came together pretty easily. Super thank you for your most excellent feedback!
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guygrooves said 2706 days ago (June 26th, 2010)
Knocked it
out of the park... first swing. Very cool song and kick ass performance. The two of you make a great team.
Peace
Guy
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RAVENS said 2706 days ago (June 26th, 2010)
Gracias
That is so awesome of you to say, can't tell you how much I appreciate your groovy feedback. Super happy that you liked the song, I'm sure Tres appreciates it as well!
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falcef said 2705 days ago (June 27th, 2010)
Ragazza nel Fuoco
Salve hello from Italy. Good music good many compliments to the choice of musical instruments used in this song good. Rate and download my songs hello. Ciao falcef
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RAVENS said 2705 days ago (June 27th, 2010)
Gracias
Grazie mille, apprezzo il tuo commento. I'm very happy that you liked the song!


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ste said 2705 days ago (June 27th, 2010)
cool
tune. like the johnny marr meets shina ringo vibe. though i'm struggling for comparisons. original stuff.
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RAVENS said 2705 days ago (June 27th, 2010)
Gracias
Very cool, I'm so happy that you liked our song. Tres & I certainly appreciate your awesome feedback. Many thanks!
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sloparts said 2705 days ago (June 27th, 2010)
Girl on Fire
Dani, you never cease to amaze me with the breadth of talent you possess. This is and awesome track, and you vocal just shines. Great mix, great lyrics, and a great back track, makes for a super fine song. Ya done real good !! ;-)

Welcome to MacJams, Dani,

Ed
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RAVENS said 2705 days ago (June 27th, 2010)
Gracias
Ed, a million thanks for the welcome, I'm really happy to be here. Super duper neato that you liked the song, Tres & I sincerely appreciate your wonderful comment. Hope all is well. ;-)
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SISTERS said 2705 days ago (June 27th, 2010)
hot dang
that was refreshingly cool in a hot way.
love the pop-ness of this, and the fast and furious musical bed.
vocals are absolutely in the pocket - swell attitude coming thru, and the neat little embellishments you do shine. enjoyed this ever so much!
anne
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RAVENS said 2705 days ago (June 27th, 2010)
Gracias
What a super sweet comment, can't thank you enough! Tres really composed a wonderful track & I'm so honored that he asked me to sing this. Very glad that you liked the song, we truly appreciate it so much.
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Social_Ice said 2705 days ago (June 27th, 2010)
Sizzzzling Hot....
This is an impressive first Dani....setting the flames roaring high for those of us who have yet to expose our creative side...hope to hear more from you!
RAVENS said 2704 days ago (June 27th, 2010)
Gracias
Awww, that is so sweet of you to say. I can't wait to hear your music, I'll bet it's just wonderful. Thank you so very much for such a terrific comment, it means a lot to me.
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ramonaji said 2703 days ago (June 28th, 2010)
I'm glad I'm here too, so I
could catch this! Oh, Dani, you have so much talent!!! I love this!

Thank you!!!
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RAVENS said 2703 days ago (June 29th, 2010)
Gracias
Awww, I'm so glad you're here too! Super thank yous for such a sweet comment, Tres & I certainly do appreciate it. Very happy you liked our song.
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michaelkoppenheffer said 2703 days ago (June 29th, 2010)
Wow, what a great lead vocal
Listening through headphones and you did a terrific job on the mix--great to hear your work!!!
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RAVENS said 2702 days ago (June 29th, 2010)
Gracias
Thank you so very much, I'm so happy you dug the song. We certainly appreciate your awesome feedback.
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that80sboy said 2702 days ago (June 30th, 2010)
dang....
....i really need to start doing a little more macjams listening than i do....i missed this completely....i will slap myself later....this song is total FUN!!
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RAVENS said 2702 days ago (June 30th, 2010)
Gracias
Mark, great to see ya! No slapping necessary! I'm so happy that you like the song. Yeah I think the song is a lot of fun too, very different from my usual morbid stuff. Thank you so much for your awesome feedback, it's greatly appreciated.
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damiengh said 2702 days ago (June 30th, 2010)
A definite hit.
Lyrics hit the spot for many a young woman, who may think they've finally found the one, who has lit their fire and ready to take things into the faster lane to a higher place.
This has the hooks and the beat that makes it a winner (& seller). Nice work.
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RAVENS said 2702 days ago (June 30th, 2010)
Gracias
Oh say, I know you. You're the guy from the forum, the one who tortures poor Karen!

Ya know, when I first read the lyrics I thought the same thing. Many young ladies would be able to relate. So happy that you liked it, super duper zilluper thank yous for such a swell comment!
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axljfoley said 2701 days ago (July 1st, 2010)
This
is hot...and you have a super voice. U did a good job with the mixing as well. Good choice for your first post*
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RAVENS said 2700 days ago (July 2nd, 2010)
Gracias
Super thank yous, very cool that ya dug it. I certainly appreciate your awesome feedback. Regards to Lestat! ;-)
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lengold said 2700 days ago (July 2nd, 2010)
Just
Fantastic - should be a mega-hit - totally radio ready.
Cheers
Len

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RAVENS said 2700 days ago (July 2nd, 2010)
Gracias
Awww, that is such an awesome thing to say & I truly appreciate it. Very happy that you like the song, thanks a million!
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ConnieO said 2699 days ago (July 2nd, 2010)
Girl On Fire
is SMOKIN! Tres IS a terrifc songwriter and your vocal and mixing is exceptionally impressive. Your voice is perfect for this song and it is so clean and precise. I love your voice flying all over the place like flames and crackling coals...the the yell in the background at the end...a great punch. Thanks for posting this. More please.
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RAVENS said 2699 days ago (July 3rd, 2010)
Gracias
That is just the sweetest thing to say, can't tell ya how much I appreciate it. I'm sure Tres will be super duper happy as well, thank you so very much for such an awesome comment!
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DarkPlanet said 2699 days ago (July 3rd, 2010)
Blown Away!
Wow Raven I really love your voice!!! What a great song! I can hear a lot of my favorite bands in this, maybe because its so catchy! Downloaded and looking forward to more!
Tom
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RAVENS said 2697 days ago (July 4th, 2010)
Gracias
That was super duper awesome of you to say, thank you so very much! Very happy that you dug it, Tres & I truly appreciate your swell comment.
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Relic67 said 2698 days ago (July 4th, 2010)
catchy
wow, great first post.
the handclaps make it.
great singing too.
applause!
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RAVENS said 2697 days ago (July 4th, 2010)
Gracias
One of the things that caught my attention was the catchy-chorus. So glad that you liked our song, thank you so much.
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FEEL said 2698 days ago (July 4th, 2010)
Current with a new feel
This composition sounds current with a nice new feel. Like the claps, changes and the vocals are spot on. Rock'n tune that is "catching on!"
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RAVENS said 2697 days ago (July 4th, 2010)
Gracias
Can't tell ya how much I appreciate your awesome feedback, thanks a million!
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jibes said 2696 days ago (July 5th, 2010)
What a debut!!!!!
Simply marvy song and your vox are top notch!
And that just the merest tip of what I could say. Hooray!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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RAVENS said 2695 days ago (July 6th, 2010)
Gracias
Super thank yous for such an awesome comment, very happy to hear that you liked it. I appreciate it!
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Jarvoid said 2696 days ago (July 6th, 2010)
Well, at
last I have managed to come stumbling across your page and song.....and wow was it worth the wait and the journey !? Hoo yes,very cool song and the lyrics are top hole.

Not sure what " G-rating" means though,but what eht heck.Great Vocals,great voice and an altogether pro sound .......nice one

Cheers


Jarvoid
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RAVENS said 2695 days ago (July 6th, 2010)
Gracias
Say...your avatar looks like Puff the Magic Dragon, I'll have to check it out after. Oh, G-Rated stands for "Goofy-Rated" cause I'm goofy. ;-)

A million gazillion thank yous for your terrific feedback, awesome that you dug our collab, it's greatly appreciated!
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indigoblu said 2696 days ago (July 6th, 2010)
Better than the usual MacJams stuff...
Good stuff, Dani. The intro instrumental is particularly good. Maybe a bit more punch in the backing track and some compression on the vocals to get them to blend in a bit more. Otherwise, I can't wait to hear more from you. Would you ever be interested in a collaboration?
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RAVENS said 2695 days ago (July 6th, 2010)
Gracias
Wowzers, whatta comment! Actually I am very grateful to be amongst the amazing talent on this site. I can surely learn a lot being here.

Thanks for the suggestions, I am still learning the ins & outs of mixing using Sonar 8, it's a challenge but I love it. A future collab with you would be super, thanks again...
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VicDiesel said 2696 days ago (July 6th, 2010)
Good song
and good arrangement. Your voice is great too. A very enjoyable tune.
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RAVENS said 2695 days ago (July 6th, 2010)
Gracias
Thank you so very much, that's super nice to say. Tres & I certainly appreciate your awesome feedback!
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Kicbal said 2693 days ago (July 8th, 2010)
This is cool
Excellent pop stylings. Cool lyrics. You sound very current and your vocal melodies and engaging, maybe a mix between Gwen Stefani and Pat Benetar. Vox experiments are cool sounding, maybe too much tunneled reverb at times, but what do I know, I'm struggling with mixing vox on my own stuff too.
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RAVENS said 2691 days ago (July 10th, 2010)
Gracias
Super thank yous! Awesome that you dug the song, Tres & I certainly appreciate your terrific feedback. Oh I am always learning about production myself & definitely appreciate suggestions & critique. Thanks again!
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kassia said 2693 days ago (July 8th, 2010)
sooooooooooooo late to the party
good grief please don't disown me. awesome tune made awesomer (?) by your hotseat vocals. love the background vox and panning effects you added to some of the phrases. dani you're a rock star. and a sweetie. sorry i took so long to get here...um....welcome to MJ!
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RAVENS said 2691 days ago (July 10th, 2010)
Gracias
Oh I would never disown you, I'm keeping ya! Can't thank you enough for such a sweet comment, means a lot to me. Super duper thank yous & very happy that you liked the song.
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Reinholt56 said 2691 days ago (July 11th, 2010)
Hi Dani......
I'm always late for the party!!!! I missed this track completely. I should pay more attention.

The track is just complete. The backing is tremendous and your voice just adds dimensions to the overall effect.

I agree with others here. Debbie Harry comes to mind, especially Hanging on the Telephone, from the 'energy' aspect of the singer being the song/words as they come out.

What a wonderful song and performance.

Take care.

Paul
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RAVENS said 2690 days ago (July 11th, 2010)
Gracias
Oh no worries, Paul. I'm very happy to hear that you liked the song! Super thank you for your terrific feedback, means a lot!
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Fredriksen said 2691 days ago (July 11th, 2010)
;)
Great voice. Very good vocal on this great peace of music. ;)
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RAVENS said 2690 days ago (July 11th, 2010)
Gracias
Super thank yous, that's very sweet to say. Tres & I greatly appreciate your wonderful feedback.
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chriscool said 2691 days ago (July 11th, 2010)
superb
this is really catchy and mixed very well , not usually my kind of tune but hey this is easily the best I have heard on mj
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RAVENS said 2690 days ago (July 11th, 2010)
Gracias
Hey, it's Mario & Sonic! How cool is your avatar! I used to rock at Super Mario Bros & Sonic. Man those were the good ol' days. Thanks a million for such an awesome comment, truly appreciate it.
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stevel said 2691 days ago (July 11th, 2010)
Great pop song
Love the energy to this...very nice vocal performance.
Cheers
Steve
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RAVENS said 2690 days ago (July 11th, 2010)
Gracias
Thank you so very much, Steve. Very happy that you dug our collab, Tres & I appreciate it so much.
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chinaman2 said 2691 days ago (July 11th, 2010)
on fire indeed
I dont think ive heard this on the other site. I would have remembered for sure. but this is really really good. somebody said Tegan & Sara; & it's quite right. love the hooks, the guitars, vocals (of course) & everything thats going on.
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RAVENS said 2690 days ago (July 11th, 2010)
Gracias
I didn't post it over yonder. I figure I'd post my crazier stuff on icomp & my normal stuff here, hehe. Super duper thank yous, so glad that you liked the song.
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TracyVosh said 2691 days ago (July 11th, 2010)
G of F
Very nice Raven, such a cool dance-groove tune! And, I'll say it again, you have a fabulous voice, love it!
RAVENS said 2690 days ago (July 11th, 2010)
Gracias
Awww, you're so sweet! I'm super glad that you liked the song, can't tell ya how much I appreciate your wonderful comment.
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Doadars Uncle said 2690 days ago (July 11th, 2010)
Alive!
Great lyrics! Nice breaks, etc. This keeps a good energy.
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RAVENS said 2690 days ago (July 11th, 2010)
Gracias
Awesome that you dug it. Thanks a million for your super feedback, we greatly appreciate it.
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Doug Somers said 2689 days ago (July 13th, 2010)
No sitting still to this one
What a production. Wow, I love this - the energy, the sparkle in your vocals, and the top notch production. If this is your first post, my mind boggles at what's to come.

Thanks for sharing this one, and congrats to Tres as well.

Doug
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RAVENS said 2689 days ago (July 13th, 2010)
Gracias
That is so cool of you to say, thank you so very much! Tres created the track & wrote the catchy lyrics. I was so honored he asked me to sing it. Super thank again, your comment is very much appreciated.
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speedonl said 2688 days ago (July 13th, 2010)
Now
That is something else, everything is already said so I will tell you I just enjoyed it a lot and I think it's a killer song, awesome!!
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RAVENS said 2687 days ago (July 15th, 2010)
Gracias
Thank you so much, can't tell ya how much I appreciate it. Very glad you dug our collab.
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Philos60 said 2688 days ago (July 14th, 2010)
Refreshing youth with power softly
No doubt, this is a new generation song: refreshing youth with power softly increasing...from the viewpoint of a German grandfather.:-)
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RAVENS said 2687 days ago (July 15th, 2010)
Gracias
I have a very good friend that lives in Bochum Germany. I'm so happy that you liked the song, thank you very much for your wonderful comment.
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thoddi said 2688 days ago (July 14th, 2010)
impressive
Seems to be pretty much on fire this song. Cool singing to he great groovy music.
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RAVENS said 2687 days ago (July 15th, 2010)
Gracias
Super thank yous, Tres & I certainly appreciate your awesome feedback!
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MitraMakesMusic said 2687 days ago (July 14th, 2010)
awesome pop song!
i love your voice and i can SO relate to the lyrics! go girl!!
you have a new an in BK!! :)

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RAVENS said 2687 days ago (July 15th, 2010)
Gracias
It's Brooklyn in the house!

That is so sweet to say, I appreciate it so much. Thanks a million & welcome again!
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Robin_Perry said 2684 days ago (July 17th, 2010)
Girl on Fire
Wow, your voice is powerful and agile. You got da stuff. Looking forward to hearing more!
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RAVENS said 2682 days ago (July 20th, 2010)
Gracias
Super thank yous, very happy you like the song. I truly appreciate your sweet comment.
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bronco said 2684 days ago (July 18th, 2010)
nice pop tune
very sophisticated backing to accent your beautiful vocals. You are on fire - keep it up.
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RAVENS said 2682 days ago (July 20th, 2010)
Gracias
Thanks a bunches, I really appreciate your awesome feedback!
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Briguy777 said 2683 days ago (July 19th, 2010)
Hot Stuff!
This is a great, unique & kick ass tune! For a first submission, this is definitely a top ten.

Awesome vocals!
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RAVENS said 2682 days ago (July 20th, 2010)
Gracias
Very cool that ya dug it. I appreciate your awesome comment, thanks a million!
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MUSICAL_FIDELITY said 2677 days ago (July 25th, 2010)
Yay
You rock Girly,
Love this one, you have a fantastic voice and know how to use it !!
Sounds fantastic thru my AKG k701 headphones..
Nice and clear mix and good fx on the back vocals.
Thanx for sharing and keep up the good work.
Ian R
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RAVENS said 2677 days ago (July 25th, 2010)
Gracias
Isn't it great when you listen to music through headphones? I can't imagine listening any other way. Thank you so very much, Ian. I truly appreciate your wonderful comment & I'm so happy you dug the song!
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TobinMueller said 2675 days ago (July 27th, 2010)
Bucket
Well sung. The vocals remind me of a passage in a King Crimson tune when the lead singer actually sang into a bucket to get a certain effect. In the case of pop music, not sure if it works. ALmost like you are chorusing your vocals. You have a cool voice, no need to add any effects other than a touch of reverb. I like the way you use backing voices, how things move in and out, giving this a SciFi other dimensional sense. Well thought thru.
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RAVENS said 2674 days ago (July 28th, 2010)
Gracias
Super cool that you liked it. Actually, I created that effect on my voice. I used a chorus reverb, then doubled the track. The second track I moved about a split-hair to create that sound. Geez, next time I'll make it easier & sing into a bucket. Hehe, that is so cool, I never would have thought of something like that!

Super thanks again, I appreciate your awesome feedback so much! ;-)
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five_extra_arms said 2669 days ago (August 2nd, 2010)
Girl On Fire
Well, the title wasn't misleading, that's for sure.

I really like how this song develops - with that twangy jangly guitar and the rich bass line thumping along. I wasn't expecting the female vocals to rock this tune so hard. It's a really nice combination and I like it!

Excellent first post. I look forward to hearing more of your stuff.
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RAVENS said 2665 days ago (August 6th, 2010)
Gracias
Super duper thank yous! We certainly appreciate your wonderful feedback. Awesome that you liked our collab! ;-)
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Saltaireguru77 said 2664 days ago (August 7th, 2010)
This is great
The intro is very reminiscent of U2 and The Edge's guitar work. Then the song drops in properly and there's hints of Shirley Manson, Chrissie Hynde, Debbie Harry and all those great female vocalist that you just think "yeah, they're talent and attitude!"
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RAVENS said 2654 days ago (August 16th, 2010)
Gracias
Super cool comment, thanks a million. I greatly appreciate your feedback & glad you dug it.
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lavalamp said 2656 days ago (August 15th, 2010)
Terrific
Great, great track. Your vocals are sensational. Lyrics are also top-notch. Yeah, headphones sound better. A little bassy, or compressed too much on speakers, but that critique is if you're talking about the next level.

This could EASILY be a hit.

Great job

Dave

And watch out, you are bringing out all those dirty old men with your avatar, me not included lol
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RAVENS said 2654 days ago (August 16th, 2010)
Gracias
I work at a senior citizen center, so dirty old men don't scare me, hehe. Thanks a bunches for your awesome feedback. I always listen through headphones, and mix my music through them as well. So glad you liked the song!
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mybravedesign said 2656 days ago (August 15th, 2010)
HOLY CRAP!
big chorus... great song all around... got me coming back for more.. need more stuff like this from you...
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RAVENS said 2654 days ago (August 16th, 2010)
Gracias
Thank you so very much for your terrific comment, I truly appreciate it & I'm so happy you liked our collab...
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Angela_Hope said 2656 days ago (August 15th, 2010)
you're my hero(ess)
dani: not only is this song and your vioce and the mix awesome but i appreciate your frienedship. you raise the bar ALWAYS but you know that. at least you better know that girl! ang
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RAVENS said 2654 days ago (August 16th, 2010)
Gracias
So great to have you here, can't tell you how much I appreciate your sweet comment. I'm so glad you liked the song, thanks a million! ;-)
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K.I.S.KISMET said 2651 days ago (August 20th, 2010)
wowza!
wonderful pipes..keep on rawkin'

:)
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RAVENS said 2646 days ago (August 25th, 2010)
Gracias
Awww, super thank yous for such a sweet comment. I'm so glad you liked our collab! ;-)
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Keedee said 2643 days ago (August 27th, 2010)
Yippppeeeeee!!!!!
I've long been waiting for this day! I'm doing a prancing, Snoopy-like dance in my head as I listen. This, like all you do is FABULOUS!!!! So glad you put your toes in the water! :D
RAVENS said 2624 days ago (September 16th, 2010)
TY Lyn
You are just too sweet! Yeah, this was my first MJ post. Everyone here is so wonderful and welcomed me with open arms. Thank you very much, your comments mean so much to me. Still waiting for you to get your toes wet, missy!!! ;-)
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CrazeeFlootGrrl said 2624 days ago (September 15th, 2010)
Girl on Fire
Love the song! Very cool mix! And I totally get the lyrics... lol Thanks for sharing! :)

PS downloading this too!
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RAVENS said 2624 days ago (September 16th, 2010)
TY Jess
I think every female can relate to the lyrics at some point in their lives. Gotta love those dumb boys! Thanks a million, I'm very happy that you liked song & appreciate your feedback greatly.
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PockBluesman said 2621 days ago (September 18th, 2010)
Girl on fire
Great production on this Dani another top quality song . You cant help tappin your feet to thi s one well done
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RAVENS said 2610 days ago (September 29th, 2010)
TY PBM
Thank you so very much, I truly appreciate your wonderful comment. So happy that you liked the song.
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dancedivine said 2620 days ago (September 19th, 2010)
Great job!
This is excellent, Raven.... I can't wait to hear what else you have in store.... :)
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RAVENS said 2610 days ago (September 29th, 2010)
TY Olivia
You're so sweet, can't tell ya how much I appreciate your terrific feedback. Thanks a million! ;-)
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NigelCampbell said 2609 days ago (October 1st, 2010)
OK - That rocks
Great tune and excellent voice - seriously would love to collaborate on something (have a tonne of stuff that would suit your voice! - all of it a bit odd!)
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RAVENS said 2607 days ago (October 3rd, 2010)
TY Nigel
Super cool that ya liked it. Thank you so very much for your awesome feedback, I greatly appreciate it. If you have anything in mind for a collab, give me a holla!
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Mute Albino said 2607 days ago (October 3rd, 2010)
tstfll
tastefully done, great voice, cool song
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RAVENS said 2607 days ago (October 3rd, 2010)
TY Mute Albino
Thanks a bunches for your wonderful comment, it's very much appreciated!
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AbstractVision said 2596 days ago (October 14th, 2010)
Dani!!!
Way to go guys Dani ur a star & Tres u da man
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RAVENS said 2592 days ago (October 18th, 2010)
TY Billy
Hey, I had NO idea you were on this site too. Not just that, but I see you have a song with Tres as well. Very cool, can't wait to hear it. Thanks a bunches, it was great seeing you here! ;-)
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Garni said 2595 days ago (October 14th, 2010)
Superb
Hi there ol buddy :)
Its me over this place now :)

Love this Dani :) You voice is amazing!

G-)
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RAVENS said 2592 days ago (October 18th, 2010)
TY Garni
It's so cool that you're posting here again! Thanks a million, I certainly hope you stick around these parts! ;-)
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Narad said 2595 days ago (October 15th, 2010)
Girl on Fire
Brilliant and sparkling like fire ! :)
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RAVENS said 2592 days ago (October 18th, 2010)
TY Harald
Thank you so much for your wonderful feedback, I appreciate it greatly. ;-)
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ktholliday said 2580 days ago (October 30th, 2010)
~Aloha Dani~
Sooooooooooooo wonderful!!! your voice, and the entire song, just rocks! This is fantastic!!! I really enjoy your songs! I can't wait for the next!!!! :) Keep them rolling!!! ~ Take good care ~ Katy ~
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RAVENS said 2579 days ago (October 30th, 2010)
TY Katy
Awww, thank you so very much. I'm so glad that you liked it, can't tell ya how much I appreciate your wonderful comment. ;-)
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Warren Smith said 2577 days ago (November 2nd, 2010)
Hot, hotter, hottest
Look at all of these comments!

Raven - you are the hottest thing on Macjams. Indeed, you're a girl on fire : )

And for good reason.

Yea - let's hear it for Brooklyn!
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RAVENS said 2576 days ago (November 2nd, 2010)
TY Warren
Brooklyn in da house! Always cool to see another Brooklynite on MJ. Thanks a million, very glad that you liked the song.
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alfredthepelican said 2576 days ago (November 2nd, 2010)
wow
Thanks for the download. So professionally pop in every way (in a good sense) could be straight from the hit parade.
Cheers
Mark
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RAVENS said 2576 days ago (November 2nd, 2010)
TY Mark
Thanks a bunches for such great feedback. I appreciate it greatly, very happy you liked the song.
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morgan102 said 2575 days ago (November 4th, 2010)
Dani
Wow!!What a mix you captured pal and of course there is no one vocally better than you Enchanted One.You are amazing my friend,I mean truly amazing.
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RAVENS said 2575 days ago (November 4th, 2010)
TY Morgan
It's so great to see/hear you on MJ. Thanks a million for your sweet comment, it means so much, pal. ;-)
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grah3am said 2568 days ago (November 10th, 2010)
Great stuff
This is a quality recording. You deserve to do very well. Nifty production and excellent vocals.
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RAVENS said 2566 days ago (November 12th, 2010)
TY Grah3am
Thank you very much, I really appreciate your feedback. Glad that you liked the song.
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PeterB7858 said 2567 days ago (November 12th, 2010)
Incendiary :-)
Hi, Really polished song that hits the spot. Great rhythm and genuine pop feel. Your vocals are really special. The chorus is infectious. The arrangement and mix set the song up as a surefire winner.
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RAVENS said 2566 days ago (November 12th, 2010)
TY Peter
Ahhh, incendiary is a great word! Very glad that you liked the song. Thanks a bunch for your awesome feedback!
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CIASM_ZENABI_ said 2539 days ago (December 10th, 2010)
girl on fire
gave it a 2nd listen and liked it for all the same reasons. cool track cheers graham
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RAVENS said 2532 days ago (December 17th, 2010)
TY Graham
Awww, that's so cool of you! Thank you again, it still means so much to me that you dig the song!
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jodyrush said 2539 days ago (December 10th, 2010)
Nice Dani...
On fire for sure!
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RAVENS said 2532 days ago (December 17th, 2010)
TY Jody
Super cool that you dig it, I appreciate it so very much! Thank you!
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DeputyDoofy said 2532 days ago (December 16th, 2010)
I have some catching up to do.
Your stuff is phenomenal! Gotta listen to the rest...
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RAVENS said 2532 days ago (December 17th, 2010)
TY DD
You're spoiling me! Thanks a million, it really makes me happy that you like the song, I appreciate it so much!
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borisluxx said 2531 days ago (December 17th, 2010)
Wow! Blown away!
Great track, Dani! You two did a killer job on this! Your vocals ROCK and the layering is perfect! LOVE IT! You've got a great voice and you are truly very talented. Oh, and your mixing skills are great too, btw! Haha!

P.S. I did listen on headphones, as you recommended. Glad I did! :-)

-Boris
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RAVENS said 2531 days ago (December 17th, 2010)
TY Boris
Super thank yous for your sweet comment. I'm so happy you liked the song. Oh and cool that you listened through headphones. I always do, I get a better feel from them.
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easyesteemer said 2531 days ago (December 17th, 2010)
Old Fan New Comment
Very cool song here Dani. Love the vocal mix on this.
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RAVENS said 2531 days ago (December 17th, 2010)
TY Easy
Whoa, it is so great to see you here. How have you been? How is your bro doing? So many questions, hehe. Thank you so much, I'm so happy you liked the song.
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MarcusPerry said 2493 days ago (January 24th, 2011)
Awesome
You have a great voice.. nice tune!
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RAVENS said 2489 days ago (January 28th, 2011)
TY Marcus
Thanks a million, super happy that you liked the song. Tres & I appreciate it greatly.
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virtualruffy said 2489 days ago (January 28th, 2011)
It warms a monster's heart
and that's not the Southern Comfort talking. Well done. This is the first of your pieces I've listened to so I look forward to listening to the rest of your work and being suitably pleased.
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RAVENS said 2489 days ago (January 28th, 2011)
TY VR
Cool avatar, don't think I've ever heard your music before. See you have a spoken-word up, gonna check it out now! Thank you so much for such an awesome comment, we truly appreciate it. Very glad you dug the song.
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lholden said 2489 days ago (January 29th, 2011)
catchy
Cool, catchy tune. You have such a wonderful voice! I loved listening... thanks for sharing.
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RAVENS said 2488 days ago (January 29th, 2011)
TY Laura
I'm so glad that you liked the song, super thanks. I truly appreciate your sweet feedback!
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Ziplok said 2489 days ago (January 29th, 2011)
OMG
surprise!!!!! MJ has just showed me the #1 reason that this is a place where we can actually just find the worlds #1 talents... Raven. i have nothing more to say. My KRKs LOVE you and want to hear much much more. the mixing on this is ill. that is a good ill not a bad ill. this is a smashing underground hit song. you gotta get this one on iTunes cause kids would love this on theyre iPods.
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RAVENS said 2488 days ago (January 29th, 2011)
TY Z
What an awesome comment, thank you so very much. Tres really created and wrote an amazing song. I was so excited that he asked me to be a part of it. We truly appreciate your feedback, be good man!
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PatriciaGirl said 2392 days ago (May 6th, 2011)
I love it!!!
The talent here never ceases to amaze me. What a great first song to submit. High energy great sounding music with an awesome voice to top it off. I am looking forward to hearing more of you "Girl on Fire!!" thx for sharing patty :D
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RAVENS said 2391 days ago (May 6th, 2011)
TY Patricia
Thank you so very much for such a sweet comment. I greatly appreciate it, I'm so happy that you liked the song.
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stevelee said 2337 days ago (June 30th, 2011)
HOT
Hey Ravens, you're always hot! No exceptions here, great vocals and love the arrangement toooo. Woohoo I'm dancin' to this one la la la yeah yeah.. um feelin' it... hot hot hot!!
RAVENS said 2337 days ago (June 30th, 2011)
Hot..
Yet you seem cool as a cucumber! Thank you Mr. Lee, Tres wrote & created the track, he is quite the talent. I loved the song from the very first note, and was honored to sing it. Gracias, son muy calientes a ti mismo!
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