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I wrote this song about my ex, quite unintentionally. I started out with the piano and the lyrics just came out of nowhere...so many in fact i had to trim it down from 7 verses! i know, I know---the drums kinda suck :( I need to adjust the wood block sound--its way too loud and can give you a headache if you listen with the volume on 10. But this is a first draft of the song and it was made exclusively in basic GB, with no frills or extras; however it will be re-recorded professionally using Live 7, Pro Tools and [real] vocals from a [real] singer. I'll update when this happens :)
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Lyrics
THE SCORPION (c) 2010
VERSE 1
i got a story that'll probably make you come/ i got stung by a scorpion/ he filled me with his poison that was just like bittersweet----
dark chocolate, when he kissed me/ (he put me to sleep)/
but first he tried to warn me, tried to tell me from the start/ i even heard the rumors he would break my heart/ but i had to solve his mystery, i just had to know/
AND NOW I CAN'T EVEN BE MAD, BABY!/
MR. SCORPIO
(instr. HOOK)
VERSE 2
well, it didn't take long for his charms to take hold/ i gave him full control of my body and soul/ so when i felt the pain, and when i heard the lies/ i thought it was normal----(i was hypnotized)
and when i couldn't kiss him i would miss him like a drug/ addicted to his poison, i thought it was love/ hurt to hold on to him, hurt to let him go/
BUT EVERYTHING ELSE FELT SO GOOD, BABY!! (MR. SCORPIO)
VERSE 3
but now i'm sad and lonely, cause i'm not the only one/ to ever fall in love with a scorpion/ so how the story ends, just in case you wanna know?/
WITH ANOTHER SATISFIED VICTIM, BABY!!
MR. SCORPIO
(instr HOOK)
VERSE 1
i got a story that'll probably make you come/ i got stung by a scorpion/ he filled me with his poison that was just like bittersweet----
dark chocolate, when he kissed me/ (he put me to sleep)/
but first he tried to warn me, tried to tell me from the start/ i even heard the rumors he would break my heart/ but i had to solve his mystery, i just had to know/
AND NOW I CAN'T EVEN BE MAD, BABY!/
MR. SCORPIO
(instr. HOOK)
VERSE 2
well, it didn't take long for his charms to take hold/ i gave him full control of my body and soul/ so when i felt the pain, and when i heard the lies/ i thought it was normal----(i was hypnotized)
and when i couldn't kiss him i would miss him like a drug/ addicted to his poison, i thought it was love/ hurt to hold on to him, hurt to let him go/
BUT EVERYTHING ELSE FELT SO GOOD, BABY!! (MR. SCORPIO)
VERSE 3
but now i'm sad and lonely, cause i'm not the only one/ to ever fall in love with a scorpion/ so how the story ends, just in case you wanna know?/
WITH ANOTHER SATISFIED VICTIM, BABY!!
MR. SCORPIO
(instr HOOK)
RAVENS
I'm a Scorpio, what a coincidence & I see we're both from Brooklyn, cool!
I like the effect on your vocals, it's different which is nice. Great R&B vibe, this is really good. Welcome to MJ! Looking forward to hearing more from you.
RAVEN ;-)