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thenewgrey

 Genre: Rock & Roll

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Part of our new Anti-Self EP.
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Lyrics
I can feel this pride inside of me
Grow and multiply like a disease
All You've shown is faithfulness to me
Smiling, I repay with vanity

This is where it ends, here and now
You will see how low I can bow
I want to be cleansed, send a storm
I have come to be transformed

In my heart an anger burns all day
Singing songs that make my soul decay
You have asked to take my pain away
Smiling, I ignore each word You say

This is where it ends, here and now
You will see how low I can bow
I want to be cleansed, send a storm
I have come to be transformed

I will say "I love You" with my lips
And when You turn, betray You with a kiss

This is where it ends, here and now
You will see how low I can bow
I want to be cleansed, send a storm
I have come to be transformed
Song Stats
Hits: 1375
Comments: 9
Fans: 1
Plays: 347
Downloads: 56
Votes: 17
Uploaded: Jan 07, 2005 - 01:55:52 PM
Last Updated: Jan 07, 2005 - 06:22:15 AM Last Played: Sep 29, 2009 - 12:55:13 AM
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G5, Digi002
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Comments
Uber said 1778 days ago (January 9th, 2005)
hmmm.....
16 plays no comments.......OK, I'll jump in with my big mouth!.......Good tune. Lyric, vocals guitar all good. Combined in this song...mediocre. I read the lyrics before I listened to the song...I think the lyrics are powerful...have potential......but I don't think the song was built around the lyric. Like the other song I just heard it seems the song is built around the guitar and that guitar sound is dated.....you will have fans of that style- no doubt- and fans because of the subject matter...so it's all good. And the guitaist is very good- no doubt about that.....two other very small nits....."multiply like a disease" when you sang that ..the "a' was awkwardly sitting out there, in my opinion, alone and sounded....less than it could be...I suggest lose it altogether and just hold onto the "i" sound in "like" or instead of the "ah" sound say the long A-sound an emphasize it a little.....sorry really minor...also (one more) on this song and the other you have in the weekly picks section there are instances when you have a three-syllable word where the third syllable has the "T" sound but you say it with a "D" sound..I think it was on the word "vanity"....lol...sorry-very tiny nit...Also, I was getting excited when you came into what I thought was the best line of the song "betray you with a kiss".....the guitar backed off enough for you to say the line-but it came back in on the word "kiss" and we couldn't quite hear it.....Also intro was too long.......wow-a lot of stuff....other than that I liked it...:)


Kevensor said 1777 days ago (January 10th, 2005)
Well Done
was this recorded in a studio? I liked the song and the vocals are great. I think sometimes people get too nit-picky on this. The fact is this is very well done. 8-9-8-8!
Check out my latest song called Smoove
thenewgrey said 1770 days ago (January 17th, 2005)
Well Done
actually, we recorded it at a friend's house. he's a music student at ucsd, and
has the G5 and Digi002. thanks for the comments, we're glad you like the
music!

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The New Grey
www.thenewgrey.net
Check out my latest song called Lions' Den
TennesseeVic said 1776 days ago (January 11th, 2005)
Not my style
but a solid production.
Check out my latest song called Tecmo Superbowl 2009 w/ Dead End (MJRF 2004)
Moses said 1775 days ago (January 12th, 2005)
Nice
Dude you got a great feel to your songs, a great voice,
these are top notch creations that you've posted. There
are little nits that you could fix to improve them, but I love
listening to them. Nice job man.
Check out my latest song called Open Collab
Moses said 1775 days ago (January 12th, 2005)
Nice
Dude you got a great feel to your songs, a great voice,
these are top notch creations that you've posted. There
are little nits that you could fix to improve them, but I love
listening to them. Nice job man. !!!!!So GOoD!!!!!!
Check out my latest song called Open Collab
antonfosh said 1774 days ago (January 13th, 2005)
Great Song
Wow, what a great song. I love it - the song is very catchy,
the lyrics are great and the song has a lot of emotion to it.
Also, I think the production's great here too. Everything
sounding really professional and clear. Well done, I love it.
Check out my latest song called Next To Me
kev said 1773 days ago (January 14th, 2005)
ya beauty!
Top notch folks, not the type of stuff I've listened to here
on macjams, but that ws most enjoyable. Great sound,
nice hooks, top arrangement. its on the ipod.

Kev
The †SUNAMIS said 1484 days ago (October 30th, 2005)
Transformed for the better
Great singing, performance, and mix in this rocker. Nice job.

-Dave
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