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This is a song partly about breaking free, partly about how easily we are brought to our knees. I tried to loosen up a little bit, and I didn't worry about my timing for this one. I also busted out the electric for this one, which I don't do often (the effect is from a relatively crappy digitek rp80 pedal, it wasn't quite the tone I was going for, but I'll deal). As always, lyrics available on request, but I think I may abstain for this one because I lifted a few lines from a poem (sadly, I couldn't lift the entire poem due to my use of caesuras there). Anyways, I hope you enjoy!
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Symphony101
This is really good, I think you did good being relaxed playing this song.
I would have just a few suggestions : I may be wrong but I got the impression that the electric guitar parts could be checked, making sure the phrasing fits to the rest, also, I got the impression some notes didn't seem to fit.
Another point, although the song is capturing attention nicely and the melody and chord progressions are great, maybe some further variation can be foreseen for the length of the song. If you repeat the same sequence for this length (4 min 46 is quite a length) you might lose the listener at some point.
This is just my personal suggestions.
What I find marvellous about the music is it is very simple to progress, all that is needed is hard work and nothing else. So keep it up, all these efforts you are putting in pay off and they will continue paying off.