pop and funny tune! i downloded it :D

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What a catchy song. I love the vocals and the
arrangement. The mix, however, sounds like it needs the
bottom end boosted.

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if there was a bigger differentiation between the verses
and the chorus in terms of rhythm, tempo, melody, overal
feel.
cheers, D.

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this is right up my alley. enjoyed the song very much. i
was starting to feel what daphna said, but then the bridge
broke in not a nano second too soon and it was smooth
sailing from there. witty and wise made me laugh till i
cried. In my book, your the pick of the plant, which is also
a great song. thanks for both.

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Good lyrics and vocal delivery with bouncy
accompaniment.

The vocals sounded just slightly far away and dry
compared to the rest of the mix.

I would also liked to have heard a more contrasting
chordal section, but the overall style of this song was
good.

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Great fun lyrics, especially the great rhymes. "...while I’m
thinking about us / you're writing code in C ." Excellent
retro pop-rock using "contemporary" images. I agree with
daphna that the song is catchy and well built and loads of
fun, but the drum is too repetitive, without the normal fills
that lead into new sections, and that a place to breathe, a
momentary space between sections would work to create
a more varied and interesting pacing.

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Nice vocal control. Good composition overall. Catchy tune.
Keep it up!

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The women who write c\ \ out here don't look like that.

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C++ That's better. :)---
Mungo

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