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i wanted to sound more destructive, but this is as far as i could go with my current production skills....
hope you like it.
hope you like it.
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when you finish your school and start your career
you start seeing what you have never seen before
like how the world is full of arseholes who are
just waiting for you to fall and be a failure
your mates in school turn into your enemies
who wants to rob you and leave you in misery
they steal your job and they steal your girlie
i guess that i just dont call it a rivalry
welcome to the war zone you spawn
your new boss makes you blow his filthy horn
and if you don't, youd end up in street anyway
selling your virgin arse and getting thrown away
slap your own face with all your might
there will be no more sweet wake-up-and-shine
this is the end of the road of your puberty
this is the end of the innocence and the purity
i just wanna get along
i just want a place to belong
why does everything always
have to be so complicated
i dont wanna hear how
much more you make than i now
why does everything always
have to be competitive anyway
friendship is just another glass you break
well, i exaggerated the first verse a little bit
but you feel it that there was some bloody truth in it
growing into an adult is a pain in the arse
and you cant just wash away your scars in the bath
when i started earning like my old man used to
my old man got retired and took off his boots
but he wasnt even 60 when his company got rid of him
and just when the market crushed, we went skint
the financial crisis gave my mum a good reason
to declare a war against the man already beaten
she said that there was no love in the first place
and shed been putting up just for my own sake
when the whole world looks like a CG animation
everybody cheers with a standing ovation
what would i do to save my own arse
my life got shattered and we got fallen apart
i just wanna get along
why cant i just be your son
why does everything always
have to be so complicated
i dont wanna hear how
you hate each other now
why does everything always
have to be torn apart anyway
love is just another glass you break
you start seeing what you have never seen before
like how the world is full of arseholes who are
just waiting for you to fall and be a failure
your mates in school turn into your enemies
who wants to rob you and leave you in misery
they steal your job and they steal your girlie
i guess that i just dont call it a rivalry
welcome to the war zone you spawn
your new boss makes you blow his filthy horn
and if you don't, youd end up in street anyway
selling your virgin arse and getting thrown away
slap your own face with all your might
there will be no more sweet wake-up-and-shine
this is the end of the road of your puberty
this is the end of the innocence and the purity
i just wanna get along
i just want a place to belong
why does everything always
have to be so complicated
i dont wanna hear how
much more you make than i now
why does everything always
have to be competitive anyway
friendship is just another glass you break
well, i exaggerated the first verse a little bit
but you feel it that there was some bloody truth in it
growing into an adult is a pain in the arse
and you cant just wash away your scars in the bath
when i started earning like my old man used to
my old man got retired and took off his boots
but he wasnt even 60 when his company got rid of him
and just when the market crushed, we went skint
the financial crisis gave my mum a good reason
to declare a war against the man already beaten
she said that there was no love in the first place
and shed been putting up just for my own sake
when the whole world looks like a CG animation
everybody cheers with a standing ovation
what would i do to save my own arse
my life got shattered and we got fallen apart
i just wanna get along
why cant i just be your son
why does everything always
have to be so complicated
i dont wanna hear how
you hate each other now
why does everything always
have to be torn apart anyway
love is just another glass you break
chikoppi
Hey, I dig this! Its sort of punk, but with an ecclectic spoken-word twist. The quarter-note chords during the verse really make the chorus kick... and it has quite a hook! Nice guitar riffs and solo work too.
The production sounds a little muddy. I think you could bring the vocals forward a bit as well. The cymbal during the chorus sounds a little odd... maybe it just needs to be a higher tone?
I'd suggest playing with the EQ setting on the tracks a bit and revisiting the mix. Getting each instrument to settle into a frequency range will make everything sound much more crisp. A few improvements in production could really make this track shine!