I see you've extended this one a bit... let me say
again that you really have a good hook there with the
wiggly synth line.... and the bouncy counter-melody
(if that's what they call it) supports it well. This one
is a little snappier, no? Anyway, I still really dig this
one - it sticks in your head...!

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It looks like voting is down right now, but I'll come back. It deserves
more than six!!!

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are you sure you don't have one of these hidden away in
the closet somewhere? you're pretty masterful with the
synth effects. kinda went all clippy during the intermission
there, but comes on super strong at the ending. cooool

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I love the hook. You seem to have good handle on
hooks. I like the fact that you don't try to over emphasize
the hook. You keep it simple, so it stands out. I always
like to believe that simplicity usually brings the most out
of a song. All the elements seem to flow well. Like my
last comment I think you could add some sort of final
building block at the end. Something that takes you to
the edge, then just slowly brings you back down. Keep up
the good work. Cool.

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also, I love the artwork

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I love the hook. You seem to have good handle on
hooks. I like the fact that you don't try to over emphasize
the hook. You keep it simple, so it stands out. I always
like to believe that simplicity usually brings the most out
of a song. All the elements seem to flow well. Like my
last comment I think you could add some sort of final
building block at the end. Something that takes you to
the edge, then just slowly brings you back down. Keep up
the good work. Cool.

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This is so odd and fun.

What an offkey, weirdass little melody.

You are a little overcooked on the levels, I'm distorting
from the bass in the later section.

It's so damn happy!

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if vince clarke were still in depeche mode today, i'm sure
it'd sound something along the lines of this track. just
wondering if you had any intentions of adding lyrics to
any of your tracks or not? either way, i'm feeling the tracks
you have on MJ, and would like to hear some new stuff if
you have any.

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i really don't know if i can explain how fuzzy that comment makes me!
vince clarke is some sort of god, and to be compared to the master is
just brill- thanks for totally making my day.
and no- i'm not planning on putting lyrics to anything i'm doing. if
somebody had the hair up their ass to do so in a collaborative way, i'd
let them, but that's another world that i don't care to dip my toes into
just yet.
and new stuff? i got a couple of things in the cauldron....

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if it's gonna be that kind of party, i'm gonna stick my dick in the mashed potatoes!

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the beat and the electrical impulses are amazing...you should caution people with pacemakers...this is one of those tunes that can cause arrhythmia...very groovy tune

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