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| papag said 903 days ago (December 29th, 2010) | |
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Underway This song is well on its way. You have a good main melody shaping up. Like alackbass said, some additional instruments would add some meat to the tune. I like the effects on the vocals and the overall mood reminds me a bit of Nirvana unplugged. I look forward to hearing this evolve. Check out my latest song called How Can I Know?
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| Hickling_Stan said 902 days ago (December 30th, 2010) | |
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Mmmm At first I agreed with the other chaps comments but as I let the tune just flow over me and got to the guitar solos the song came together, there's a memorable hook here as well. Yeah build it up but don't ditch this version either. Cheers Mark Check out my latest song called Elective Introspective
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| Char said 902 days ago (December 30th, 2010) | |
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Why not call it O Winter? I can't make out all the lyrics but I think you're singing that. Some very pretty playing. Thanks. Check out my latest song called When Loving Is One-sided, Music by Bob Rodgers
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| MJReunionNAR said 756 days ago (May 24th, 2011) | |
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:) Love your voice! Reminds me of another singer that i can't put my finger on to name right now haha. Great guitar playing. Really enjoyed listening :) Check out my latest song called Play The Player
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| Bob6stringer said 756 days ago (May 25th, 2011) | |
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Chilled! I like the steady drone and the mix of your voice and guitar, hypnotic not not at all boring in the over-done "beard rock" vein that's gotten a lot of play by the NPR Music guys. This is nice and clear. Met you in the forums... now I wanna hear some new music! I'll make and post something new if you do... deal? Check out my latest song called Call Me (Turn to Me Reprise)
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| Philip18 said 650 days ago (September 8th, 2011) | |
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Good foundation Nice chords and playing. I like it when the second guitar comes in. Same with the vocals. As with the other comments, I think it could be further developed if that's the way you wanted to go. Enjoyed the listening! Check out my latest song called Coming Home (MJCC2013)
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| grah3am said 510 days ago (January 26th, 2012) | |
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Good tunes from a familiar chord progression. You have something here. I like the acoustic nature, but would still be interested in an electric version. Check out my latest song called One Little Voice
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alackbass
I like it. You might want to get together some other MacJamers to heavy this up. I would add bass, electric guitars, and a drummer and turn this into a full on modern rocker!