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| stephanos said 1770 days ago (January 22nd, 2005) | |
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Congratulations Thanks. This is actually my first complete composition. You're right I think about it taking too long to get to the first ritard. I'm sure I'll revise it in the future. Thanks for listening, Stephen. Check out my latest song called Anna's Song
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| TobinMueller said 1771 days ago (January 21st, 2005) | |
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Thankfulness This is full of warmth and preciousness, great playing and steadfast joy. So grounded. Excellent harp accents. Consider replacing the voice ahs with another sound, or a new layer, a little earlier on to add a variable of sound as the song continued, perhaps. Very nice use of accordion. The last guitar solo comes in a little hot, also, but is wonderfully played and a great addition. And excellent ending. Such a great song, really well conceived and performed. Thank you for sharing this. Check out my latest song called Forge A New Life (MJRF)
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| stephanos said 1770 days ago (January 22nd, 2005) | |
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Thankfulness Oh I hoped the "warmth" came through, even if it wasn't perfect. It does have potential. The "ahhhhs" are a stop-gap, for now. :) Thanks for your encouraging and thoughful reply. Stephen. Check out my latest song called Anna's Song
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| thetiler said 1770 days ago (January 21st, 2005) | |
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Nice and relaxing Nice job Very good accoustical stuff in there. Thanks Check out my latest song called Little Drummer Boy Variations
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| Rebsie said 1770 days ago (January 22nd, 2005) | |
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Lovely sounds I agree that the song could benefit from a shorter build up to the more complex stuff, but only because the complex stuff is so right for the song and so beautifully integrated. You have a good ear for putting the right thing in the right place. Check out my latest song called Amongst The Colours (w/ Luna Trick)
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| Mystified said 1769 days ago (January 22nd, 2005) | |
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Songs like these... ...are the sweetest. What a lovely dedication to your new daughter, so beautifully written and played. Check out my latest song called For the Beauty of the Earth
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| TennesseeVic said 1767 days ago (January 24th, 2005) | |
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Bit sappy... but that's entirely forgivable in this case. Your daughter looks like a sweety. Hope you will be very happy with her, and she with you. Check out my latest song called Tecmo Superbowl 2009 w/ Dead End (MJRF 2004)
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| thetiler said 1545 days ago (September 3rd, 2005) | |
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nice and sweet, flows very well. Like the synth in the backround. Like that oriental feel to it as well. And that synth choir effect. Thanks for sharing Check out my latest song called Little Drummer Boy Variations
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Tom Atwood
on your newly adopted daughter, and on this gentle piece.
The best stuff, for me, is after the first retard, and you
might want get there sooner. Or maybe not. It is a lovely
tune.