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Fleeting (2trx2011)


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 Genre: Acoustic

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album: Smile At The Sky
track 1: 4:10 Fair Weather Friend
track 2: 2:33 Fleeting
track 3: 3:30 Walking On The Moon
track 4: 4:53 Lovesong For Luna
track 5: 5:42 My Friends
track 6: 6:23 ABM
track 7: 3:50 Wrong Body
track 8: 3:36 Four Of Five
track 9: 2:34 Saturday Morning
track 10: 7:02 Pakaluni's Tiki Bar
track 11: 2:47 Fleeting 2
track 12: 4:20 Fare Well My Friend
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fleeting
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Lyrics
Fleeting

gummy bears and lemon drops
the cat's meow is asking how, the here and now
celebrate the holiday
the setting moon, it's gone so soon behind the dune

i don't know why you must leave
and if you're gone i know i'll cry
i run to you, i run to you
i know i'll cry and wonder why

loneliness and happiness
a sunny day, the quiet way of yesterday
treasuring the solitude
inside my brain the silent pain, the falling rain

i don't know why you are gone
and since you've gone i cannot cry
my thoughts return, return to you
i cannot cry and don't know why

(c)2011 Bill Grundmann
Song Stats
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Comments: 15
Fans: 15
Plays: 67
Downloads: 75

Uploaded: Feb 28, 2011 - 08:53:54 PM
Last Updated: Dec 14, 2012 - 10:24:06 AM Last Played: Jan 30, 2017 - 02:47:45 AM
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Comments
Six-Nail-Coffin said 2339 days ago (February 28th, 2011)
whoah
That was not what I expected when I read the lyrics before playing...

Interesting. somber, and pensive.
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alackbass said 2339 days ago (February 28th, 2011)
Fleeting
Sounds like a wonderful entry into the 2011 2trx challenge! Great changes and melody!
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bud said 2339 days ago (February 28th, 2011)
Bill - I'm at a loss for words
what a moving and powerful song.
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fasteddie said 2339 days ago (February 28th, 2011)
This
is moody and dark. I believe it's the vocal tone plus the minor appegiatted chords.

I happen to really like moody and dark.

Very cool!
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Mystified said 2339 days ago (March 1st, 2011)
Hauntingly beautiful
I love your lyrics--the contrasts in this song are wonderful, both in the chord progressions and the joy/sadness of the lyrics, with very soulful singing.
Nicely done....!
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MarkHolbrook said 2339 days ago (March 1st, 2011)
I LOVE
the lyrics man! This is outstanding! I found it very listenable and enjoyable! Nice!
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PeterB7858 said 2339 days ago (March 1st, 2011)
Mood setting...
Hi Bill. The sombre, introspective vocals do a great job of presenting your fine lyrics. And the sparse acoustic accompaniment suits the mood of the song perfectly. It is great to see so many guitar/vocal entries in the 2-track challenge. Well done. Kind regards, Peter.
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neilh79 said 2339 days ago (March 1st, 2011)
Fleeting
Nice tune mate, nice simple progressions nicely done
mrattue said 2339 days ago (March 1st, 2011)
Nice
Nice, simple, different. Really like the guitar accompaniment.

Unexpected, entertaining.

Thanks

Marc
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rabittwhole said 2339 days ago (March 1st, 2011)
heartache
...... extremely moving piece of work Bill ... honestly.
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jdholliday said 2339 days ago (March 1st, 2011)
Hey Bill!
You did a great job here pal, very moving song, this challenge is awesome! Excellent submission!
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Jarvoid said 2338 days ago (March 2nd, 2011)
Hey,Bill...
now do not take this the wrong way but I had an audiovisual in the studio of my head of one of the hairier and bigger of Jim Henson's
Muppets singing this....and bugger me it was effective....they often caught you off guard from all the fun and mayhem with the occasional deep and thoughtful song.Great stuff.thanks.


Chris
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grahame1956 said 2338 days ago (March 2nd, 2011)
Hi Bill
An evocative song. A like it a lot. Have you heard Korgis/ Stackridge? There is a bit of James Warren in this. It is beautiful.
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dimm witness said 2337 days ago (March 2nd, 2011)
dude
a wrist slasher bit of sunshine ;-O hope you're ok great song I gotta go give myself a pep talk!
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egobandit said 2336 days ago (March 4th, 2011)
In wake of poseidon
haunting and telling lovely guitar love when you get back to basics!
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