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| Syncopatient said 1751 days ago (February 10th, 2005) | |
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Giver some depth Nice arrangement of loops. My suggestion would be to add some depth to the overall sound....especially bass and driving rhythm. The drums need to kick to support the other instrumentation. Right now the overall sounds a bit weak screaming for PUMP!....With a remix I think you'll have a cool sounding song! Keep going...we're all striving!...fun stuff huh? Check out my latest song called Jazz Praise
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| Komrade K said 1535 days ago (September 14th, 2005) | |
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Super Loopy I don't know the loops you used but it begins to sound loopy a short way in. Good fun tho' I enjoyed this - put together rather well and it rawks! Check out my latest song called Ye Mariners All
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| rik said 1428 days ago (December 30th, 2005) | |
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Nice experiment with loops Obviously repetitive, but at times interesting. Quite as obviously you could re-use these materials in some more complex arrangement. And of course quite obviously again maybe vocals and solos could be added... Don't know if you recall Ya Hozna by F. Zappa ("Them or Us" album - which is great - if you're interested and you don't already know it), it has a rythmic guitar riff playing along all the same in three quarters for....say 8 minutes, bass on the same loop, or just shifting from I to IV, drum paranoically almost the same but in 5/8. But the song is strange, rich and varied, thanks to alien vocals and guitar solo afterwards. Check out my latest song called Kind of Electric
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I listened on headphones.
I would try to make the drums even bigger sounding,
maybe play around with how the guitars and other
instruments sit in the stereo space - almost everything
sounds very centered.