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| Archy said 1756 days ago (February 5th, 2005) | |
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Nice blend in this... Now would you believe it; it is all loops....!!! Thankyou for the kindly and appreciative comments, Archy --- Life is a terminal illness Check out my latest song called Vines
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| TennesseeVic said 1757 days ago (February 3rd, 2005) | |
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Structure I like the riffs you're using here, whether it's live or loops. However, the structure of the whole piece is a bit strange. You start very forcefully, then immediately the music shifts down a gear to just bass and drum; then there is a passage of acoustic guitar and drum. And then it starts building up again. I think you first need to establish the basis of a piece before you can start thinning it out. Listen to some music; if there are such breakdown passages, they come late in the piece, almost "ok, everyone has had their solo, let's give the bass player one too". It's strange to have that right in the beginning. But I really like the passage with the piano later, that sort of thing can be the chorus section of a decent composition. Check out my latest song called Tecmo Superbowl 2009 w/ Dead End (MJRF 2004)
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| Archy said 1756 days ago (February 5th, 2005) | |
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Structure You listened to this piece closely and critically, and for that I thank you. It is all loops ( Garageband one only), and I created it more as a tester of what I could do with them rather than a finished song, but since you have some ideas and appreciate my work so far I might just try and re work it with some of my own material and churn it out as a Real song... Thanks, Archy --- Life is a terminal illness Check out my latest song called Vines
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| dvandetta said 1712 days ago (March 20th, 2005) | |
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I liked 'Sway' better, but... This one has some interseting parts. The loop that you started with definitely needs to come out. It is too harsh and abrupt to start the song. The second loop would do a much better job. One word, "Continuity". This song needs to decide what type of music it is. Is it hard rock? is it dance? is it pop? Think of the music as a story, you want it to entice the listener to continue listening. I suggest reading a few short stories as well as listening to more music. Learn about formand structure. You have some really promising talent. I look forward to hearing more! -Dylan |
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