Shes losing her bestfriend

Tomoakai

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Hello, My name is Fran, it's been a long time since I've signed up to MacJammers. I recently just joined a local band playing bass. We are just a garageband really. We haven't played any shows yet. Atomic War Bride is the name of our group. Anyways any suggestions would be appreciated.

rick:vox and keys
fran:bass
tony:guitar
sean:drums

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Uploaded: Sep 02, 2011 - 05:59:53 PM
Last Updated: Sep 02, 2011 - 05:59:53 PM Last Played: Apr 03, 2013 - 06:51:47 AM

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michaeljayklein

michaeljayklein said 625 days ago (September 2nd, 2011)

You guys are really good!
I think overall, this professional sounding but as it's live, it's rather hard to give feedback on (the vocal was a bit difficult to make out at times, so I can only get a "general" idea of it), but again, it sounds right in the pocket and would be interested in hearing you and your band in a studio or more room ambient setting. Go for it! Thanks for sharing this, Michael

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Tomoakai	Tomoakai said 621 days ago (September 5th, 2011)
	Working on it As soon as we perfect our playing and work out all the mess ups, we'll be recording soon. We hope to get some decent recordings in the future. Right now we just record live with the H2 :) Thanks for the feedback! fran Check out my latest song called Shes losing her bestfriend

gator4040	gator4040 said 624 days ago (September 2nd, 2011)
	bestfriend Nice rockin tune. Very cool raw live feel. Reminded me a little of the Dead Kennedys mixed with an "evil" 7 Seconds. Id love to hear more of your stuff. great post! Check out my latest song called Crush

Tomoakai	Tomoakai said 621 days ago (September 5th, 2011)
	Thanks! We appreciate the bands mentioned above :) We're working to have some more live recordings soon. After that like I mentioned above, we'll have some better recordings :) Check out my latest song called Shes losing her bestfriend

PatriciaGirl	PatriciaGirl said 624 days ago (September 2nd, 2011)
	Nice one! Great first submission sis! Rockin sound. I love your singers voice, he pretty much sounds like Peter Murphyish. Cool tune, I look forward to hearing more :) patty Check out my latest song called Derelict

Tomoakai	Tomoakai said 621 days ago (September 5th, 2011)
	Haha! The singer gets that a lot!! Too funny PG... Laters fran Check out my latest song called Shes losing her bestfriend

sewer rod	sewer rod said 623 days ago (September 4th, 2011)
	She's losing... Cool tune. You guys definitely sound tight, and I love the thumpin' bass. I agree with Michael and would love to here an actual recording but this is an awesome live track! Check out my latest song called Haunted By the Dead

Tomoakai	Tomoakai said 621 days ago (September 5th, 2011)
	Thank you 8^) We'll have some more soon! Check out my latest song called Shes losing her bestfriend

papag	papag said 621 days ago (September 6th, 2011)
	Goth be gotten Pretty good for a live recording. Sounds like a fun band to see. I'm looking forward to hearing more from your band. Check out my latest song called How Can I Know?

Tomoakai	Tomoakai said 618 days ago (September 9th, 2011)
	papag-thanks! I love the zoomie errr zoom h2-hehe Just set it somewhere and press the record. We have another live one coming soon! fran Check out my latest song called Shes losing her bestfriend

apb

apb said 618 days ago (September 9th, 2011)

Sounds good for live Fran
welcome back to MJs! Tight performances all round. Would be good to hear a "studio" of the band for sure and I read you have plans for that.

Overall made me think of some 80s gothic rock bands like the Mission, Sisters of Mercy (but I have limited point of reference for all things "gothic") and I hear that touch of Jello Biafra too. I liked Tony's sparing use of phaser on the guitar herein (though I have no idea if he uses it in every song, which could be a bit much for my tastes). I think "War Bride" would be just fine too.. the "Atomic" makes me think of "Ned's Atomic Dustbin" and "Atomic Kitten"- do you want those associations? Then again I play drums for fun in a band called "And yer balls".. so best ignore my advice on naming ..
keep it up, bass parts sounded fine... the drums could be a bit more elaborate (does sean have toms?) ;o)

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Les_Kloo	Les_Kloo said 617 days ago (September 10th, 2011)
	Bestfriend I like your band name, for what it's worth. Cool tune. A real crowd pleaser, no doubt. I would also like to hear what you can do with some "studio" mixing. But for live it sounds pretty damn good. I can hear all the parts, although I would like some more bass (but I always say that). Great picture! Check out my latest song called SugarBubbleWater

finkeldink

finkeldink said 547 days ago (November 18th, 2011)

Yeah
Rats! My first comment disappeared.

Anyway, I really dig your bass part.
I also love the chord progressions; it really gives this song a nice dark feel to it.
The recording is pretty good. Sounds like it was recorded live. I'll bet people get hurt at your shows... Wish I was there!

You guys fully rock! Love it!

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chinaman2	chinaman2 said 547 days ago (November 19th, 2011)
	cool reminds me of the music of goth group Sisters Of Mercy from the late 80s. Nice. Check out my latest song called Hunt Of The Season (electroPop Mix)

Mike_Lynn	Mike_Lynn said 545 days ago (November 21st, 2011)
	Cool singing This is pretty good. Look forward to hear more from you folks. Welcome to MacJams. Check out my latest song called Moods

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Artist Info

Name: Frances
Location: Costa Mesa CA USA

Yeesh, it’s been a long time since I’ve been back to MacJams. Had a lot of difficulties in life with family and work. I have been moving around a lot, but now I’m back with family. Hopefully to work things out, while I look for a job. Also, ... [see more]

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Gothic rock evolved out of post punk during the late 1970s. Originally considered just a label for a small handful of punk rock/post punk bands, goth only began to be defined as a separate movement in 1981. While most punk bands focused on aggressive

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