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Watch The Sun


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Garni

 Genre: Pop (Alternative)

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A song I did a while ago and finally put some lyrics to (in progress, I call it as the lyrics need fixing) But I have put it up here online to get some kind of feedback on this.

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Lyrics
Watch The Sun (lyrics in progress)
-Gerald Grech


I stand alone
as i look out to the sea
Thinking about the world we live in
and what I want to be

Do i want to see the sights
or do I watch the sun
Do my plans include you baby
or does that come undone

Transporting myself so high
a wonderful view up there
the world looks at peace to me
played its trick on me, NOT FAIR

The world looks at peace to me
I wonder how my life will be

What is it what cant i see?
what is it? what cant I see, what is it??

Back on the waters edge
I hope to work it all out
Is there someone trying to tell me
A sign to show me what lifes out?

Do i want to see the sights
or do I watch the sun
Do my plans include you baby,
or does that come undone?

Confusion reins, in its ugly, ugly head
I so glad I worked it all out
Advise from you
is what fed me doubt

Do i want to see the sights
or do I watch the sun
Do my plans include you baby,
or does that come undone?
Song Stats
Hits: 673
Comments: 22
Fans: 7
Plays: 59
Downloads: 22

Uploaded: Sep 23, 2011 - 12:05:38 AM
Last Updated: Sep 23, 2011 - 08:17:18 AM Last Played: Nov 14, 2012 - 10:05:58 AM
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Comments
SCJohnson59 said 610 days ago (September 23rd, 2011)
Yea! :D
I'm hearing a David Bowie vibe? ... I KNOW Naaji is gonna jump all over this! :)
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Garni said 610 days ago (September 23rd, 2011)
Cheers Scotty
David Bowie is a big influence, but in this case i was influenced by a band called The Covenant (a Swedish Group). Thanks for popping by mate :))

G-)
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KathyG said 610 days ago (September 23rd, 2011)
Love this
Love this darling xoxoxo
Garni said 610 days ago (September 23rd, 2011)
Thanks Sweetheart
Your support is just so wonderful xoxo
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PeterB7858 said 610 days ago (September 23rd, 2011)
I like...
Hi Gerald. Like the art work. And like the song! The groove that you establish is catchy and the post is well produced, as always. Perhaps posting the lyrics might make it easier for people to give you feedback on them? Take care, Peter
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Garni said 610 days ago (September 23rd, 2011)
Thank u Peter
Appreciate you coming by and taking a listen, Ok I will post the lyrics, thanks for pointing that out.

G-)
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that80sboy said 610 days ago (September 23rd, 2011)
this kinda music
awesome sounds garni....love the synth pads on this....and the Eurythmics arpeggio noodling thru out.....powerful track!
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Garni said 609 days ago (September 24th, 2011)
Cheers Mark
Thank for dropping by mate. Appreciate the listen.
G-)
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Mosaica said 610 days ago (September 23rd, 2011)
Poptastic!
Lot's of '80's influences here to my ear - Human League, Visage etc. Really jumpin' :-)
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Garni said 609 days ago (September 24th, 2011)
Thank you Mosaica
Appreciate the listen.
Cheers :)
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magnatone said 610 days ago (September 23rd, 2011)
Watch the Sun
Hi Gerald - well i just pretty much love everything about this song! i'm a true fan of your work - great job!
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Garni said 609 days ago (September 24th, 2011)
Hi Karen
Thanks for coming by and taking a listen. I really appreciate your support very much

G-)
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borisluxx said 610 days ago (September 23rd, 2011)
:-D :-D :-D
NICE dance track, G!!! Of course, you've gotta know that I'd love this! So this is what you have been so busy doing... It'd say it's time very well spent, sir! I also love the progression this track takes. Sweet ride, sir!

-B
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Garni said 609 days ago (September 24th, 2011)
Herr Luxx 2
Hey mate always so nice to read the support you give me. Means a lot mate

G-)))
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Alannah said 610 days ago (September 23rd, 2011)
I clicked the FB link and saved this .....
... finally got to listen .... good stuff I like it ! :) .... (I always think you sound like a Bowie influence too) ....
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Garni said 609 days ago (September 24th, 2011)
Hey Alannah
So nice to see you always nice to read the support you give me and my work.

G-))
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ramonaji said 609 days ago (September 24th, 2011)
brilliant!
love it, G!!!!
mana_junkie said 609 days ago (September 24th, 2011)
Like A Flock of Seagulls
... but much, much better. Nicely done here Garni.
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Garni said 608 days ago (September 25th, 2011)
Thank you Ramona :)
Appreciate you coming by and your support :)))

G-)
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Garni said 608 days ago (September 25th, 2011)
Thank you Tim
Appreciate your support mate! Thank you very much :)))

G-)
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ShadowofNine said 608 days ago (September 25th, 2011)
Watch The Sun
As the worlds worst lyricist I cannot offer help, but I like the track G...
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Garni said 608 days ago (September 25th, 2011)
LMAO at you Dave!
Thanks for coming by, my lyrical ability is pretty average too, I might do as the Rolling Stones did once was cut up a newspaper and paste it all up as random mumbo jumbo and use that :)

G-)
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