Listening with my Bose headphones. The string loop is
too predictable...almost a duplication of Moby's Play
album.....lots of sounds, nice as they are, this track is
begging for movement to some place. It seems to just
swirl around from one group of sonic concepts to another
without a real melody and focus...which can be fine but
leaves me shortly...then at the very end reminicent of Cold
Play.

My personal observation for what it's worth: loops are
cool if you can bury them and use them for your own
musical purpose and creativity...otherwise, they seem to
stand out and shout at the listener...."I'm a pre-fab looped
based song"...which generally will tire the audience in no
time.

Nice sounds and arrangement though.

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Thanks for the honest comment. I have been playing with garageband for
about 6 months and I am still trying to make a solid track. I have listened to
the track a couple of times and understand what you are saying. Please keep
a look out for other tracks I post, I would be interested to hear any comments
you have. Thanks again for the comments.

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