Opus 1

Archy

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My first original song! I used one loop, which is the drums, but all the rest is my own work. Producion may be a bit rough on this piece as I spent soo long on it that I was in a bit of a rush to get it up here and get some opinions....

Please critiscise, fantasize and rant.

Archy

5 minutes 16.

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Hits: 1217
Comments: 5
Fans: 1
Plays: 100
Downloads: 57
Votes: 5
Uploaded: Feb 09, 2005 - 04:20:01 PM
Last Updated: Feb 09, 2005 - 12:18:24 PM Last Played: Nov 21, 2009 - 06:14:30 AM

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Creative Commons License:
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Song Actions

Hardware:

eMac, 69 key evoloution keyboard.

Software:

GB.

Comments

Rebsie	Rebsie said 1749 days ago (February 9th, 2005)
	Nice one Congratulations on your first original song! I really like the bits where you've got more instrumental stuff going on - there's some nice tunes and sound combinations in there. Perhaps it could benefit from a few more of these to fill out the quieter passages a little. A good start though! Check out my latest song called Amongst The Colours (w/ Luna Trick)

Archy	Archy said 1747 days ago (February 11th, 2005)
	Nice one Thankyou Rebsie, your kind words are encouraging, especially from one who is up to her ears in talent anyway... I was thinking that the broken chord bit which I think is the pale bit you were talking about, might sound better in its own song... who knows Thanks, Archy --- Life is a terminal illness Check out my latest song called Vines

	said 1747 days ago (February 11th, 2005)
	Yes, a very good start... I like this This is an interesting song, with different instruments, and some nice changes. I would keep working on this, growing it, adding layers of other sounds to get it to flow more and bring it together as a whole. The melody line and how you work it throughout the song is fresh to my ear. 7-6-7-6 Jack

MiMi	MiMi said 1747 days ago (February 12th, 2005)
	Chord Changes seem fresh yet melancholic. Listen to your favorite songs and imitate them( advice from my awesome musician brother). As a first original song consider it your baby steps, later you will walk, and then run. Keep writing and playing and learning, for time will make you better at all of them. Check out my latest song called You

Archy	Archy said 1747 days ago (February 12th, 2005)
	Thankyou Thanks All Check out my latest song called Vines

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Artist Info

Name: Archy de Berker

Hello. I am 15, bohemian and not -bald, just archy. I have the enjoyable prospect of French Coursework to conquer now, so I apologise for the abruptness of this bio.... [see more]

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