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And here it is a little bit further on. Still needs cleaning up a fair bit...
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| XMaramena said 548 days ago (December 18th, 2011) | |
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thanks for the comment. i'm glad it kept you interested. as for distortion, this is a draft and I just slapped on a limiter on the master. no other dynamic processing went into it - it's a composition, not a production. I still need to add dynamics and clear up the velocities before writing it in score. Check out my latest song called Title Music
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| Narad said 548 days ago (December 18th, 2011) | |
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Draft 2 Beautiful work ! I'm in awe. ;) Check out my latest song called Train of industrial delight II
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| XMaramena said 548 days ago (December 18th, 2011) | |
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Wow this need a LOT of work ... listening again and this needs a LOT of work. The transition from Horns to Strings doesn't work AT ALL. It's like a whole different piece. ARGH! Check out my latest song called Title Music
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| Six-Nail-Coffin said 548 days ago (December 18th, 2011) | |
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Urgency Seems to be at play here. Time is running out, but our valiant heroes are undaunted, stalwart and resolute. I agree that the transitions are a bit choppy, on the other hand, the scoring itself is beautiful! The melody progresses along nicely without becoming tiresome nor overly fiddly and pedantic. You do an excellent job of keeping the pacing going, and maintaining the mood of the piece from start to finish. Check out my latest song called Svartalfpolska
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| magnatone said 548 days ago (December 18th, 2011) | |
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Orchestral Composition yes, transitions are choppy etc., but you're working on that. the composition itself is BEAUTIFUL and when you get the details taken care of, this is going to be extraordinary! keep going! Check out my latest song called Wave Goodbye
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| richard13 said 548 days ago (December 18th, 2011) | |
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Wow! Great start. Some fine work here and I'm sure it'll only get better. Nicely done. Check out my latest song called Caledonia
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| XMaramena said 548 days ago (December 18th, 2011) | |
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one problem guys... this was done on a computer that I now don't have access to until january 3rd... facepalm actually when you think about it this isn't TOO bad for a couple of hours. Check out my latest song called Title Music
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| Char said 547 days ago (December 18th, 2011) | |
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An excellent beginning. It can only get better. I loved listening. It sounds like someone on the brink of a monumental adventure who has to hurry because it is a matter of life and death. Thanks. Check out my latest song called When Loving Is One-sided, Music by Bob Rodgers
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| Silky5 said 547 days ago (December 18th, 2011) | |
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I like it. Yes the transitions need a little work. The thematic melody is very good and the instrumentation is very good. I'd use a little more movement in the string sections rather than chords. Good work. Check out my latest song called Road to Apocalypse
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| Fire_Angel said 517 days ago (January 17th, 2012) | |
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Already good stuff! I look forward to the final version; this has plenty of detail to keep me interested. Check out my latest song called An Eventful Walk.
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The tune itself kept my interest and is good.
The points I would work on are the distortion in the section 1:08 to 1:32 and the way the dynamics of the piece have it more or less faiding away at two points before the actual end of the mix.
Liste to Doug Somers here at Macjams for how good a piece can sound. His lstest piece is awesome.
Take care.
Paul