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| karmicfreak said 495 days ago (January 10th, 2012) | |
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Cool Jam Nicely done. This could be a driving song, as in turn it up and drive fast. Polished guitar work, would like to hear some more effecting (phase, delay, vibrato?) to "kick it up a notch" as the tune goes on. I look forward to hearing this as you push it forward. Check out my latest song called 20 Beautiful Children
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| Philip18 said 495 days ago (January 10th, 2012) | |
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B minor dorian Solid beat from those driving guitars. Nice piano line. Lots of energy in the tune. I like the wild guitar that comes in around the 2.00 mark. Will be interested to see where you take the piece - nice bed here to work on! Check out my latest song called Close to Midnight w/ alackbass, rok41, paul f. page, & KyasheMusic
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| tf10music said 494 days ago (January 11th, 2012) | |
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this could turn out very well. I think there are places where I'd leave in the piano with the vocals (specifically, the segment that starts at 1:07). Great start. Check out my latest song called Canto II: A Rough Beast (To Stave Off The Rot)
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| DavidConnell said 493 days ago (January 12th, 2012) | |
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Feedback Thanks for the feedback. Check out my latest song called These are not tears (scratch vocals)
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| dave_b said 492 days ago (January 13th, 2012) | |
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B minor dorian I like the guitar work, and the drum fills are nicely done. Good separation and balance in the mix. Check out my latest song called Llarions Blues
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| Skean said 490 days ago (January 15th, 2012) | |
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Great mix Very nice melody, I can hear this with a female singer, that should be cool. Check out my latest song called No Fun Anymore (Macjams is dead)
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| FEEL said 490 days ago (January 15th, 2012) | |
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Nice mix Enjoyed the guitars with a piano melody. Builds nicely, it just rocks! Check out my latest song called I Want Emoticon
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| KCsGROOVE said 489 days ago (January 16th, 2012) | |
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this song definitely needs some vocals powerful rocksong cool guitar! KC Check out my latest song called I DON'T LIKE IT
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| gadzooks said 489 days ago (January 16th, 2012) | |
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B minor dorian Good performance ... nice crunchy guitar tone. The drums are killer! What are you using? Interesting chord progression and I like your screamin' lead. I agree with leaving the piano in in places with the vocals but that's something you will feel after the vocals are recorded and you mix. Mix sounds a bit flat ... not enough dynamics, but I know it's a rough mix. At 3:41-ish I would have the guitar stop with everything else and have a beat of silence or a drum flam bring you back. It's all very subjective. I look forward to hearing it with vocals. Cheers SG Check out my latest song called A Fly
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| DavidConnell said 489 days ago (January 17th, 2012) | |
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Drums The drums are GB pop kit with some basic compression and EQ adjustments. Before the final mix I will separate the kit into individual tracks and adjust as required. Check out my latest song called These are not tears (scratch vocals)
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| Slashh! said 488 days ago (January 17th, 2012) | |
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B minor dorian Well it certainly is quite the rocker. Looking forward to hearing this with some vocals. Check out my latest song called Days Not Realized
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| fambroski said 300 days ago (July 23rd, 2012) | |
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Yeah I really like this. Check out my latest song called The Troubadour Flies Again
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Nice choppy structure to this tune. has a great drive and feel. like the guitar work. look forward to hearing this with lyrics. the mix is pretty good for a rough mix. has an accomplished sound. cheers graham