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chilling account of a victim reanimating their dead body for vengeance. Very atmospheric.
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4 Days Dead
by Wolf macFal ©2004

I sit upon a green chair throwing stones at things that move
Contemplate my situation, And what to do with You

I plan I wait I ponder as the water drips on stone
My fingers trace the furrows and the crater of the wounds
I wonder what you told them and where they might have looked
I wonder if you pretended to care and what lies that took
But most of all I wonder how I'm waiting here for You
So much of me is missing from the weapons that You used

The dim light shows the greenness of the chair and of my skin
Mildew clots and blights my hair. Decay crowns me as its king.
I know that you'll be surprised that I'm waiting here for You
We have Unfinished Business. There's so much for me to do…
Now that I am 4 Days Dead.
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Comments: 17
Fans: 2
Plays: 133
Downloads: 95
Votes: 8
Uploaded: Feb 12, 2005 - 04:51:14 PM
Last Updated: Sep 02, 2005 - 01:06:21 PM Last Played: Sep 24, 2009 - 12:44:27 AM
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Comments
said 1746 days ago (February 13th, 2005)
Creepy
I look forward to more.

shamfaddish said 1743 days ago (February 15th, 2005)
what the hell
this is awesome i felt like a movie was in the next room
that just started. great!
JC039 said 1743 days ago (February 16th, 2005)
Cool Voice
This is cool!!!! I liked it.
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virtualruffy said 1738 days ago (February 20th, 2005)
thanks
I can visualize it exactly as if it was a movie playing. I'd love to see it as a mini movie. If it creeps you out, its doing its job.
thanks again
wolf
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K.I.S.KISMET said 1661 days ago (May 9th, 2005)
THAT EYE!!!
Rhythmic writing. Dark and threatening doom. Reminds me a bit of Poe. I look forward to more of your stuff Wolf. And, I truely appreciate you dropping by to listen and comment on my tunes. ~K
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virtualruffy said 1645 days ago (May 25th, 2005)
THAT EYE!!!
Thanks, and I love your work especially Colder Than. Its truly powerful.
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rovert10 said 1645 days ago (May 24th, 2005)
Comfortably Sinister
I'd love to hear more of this textured spoken word stuff on
this site. A good one to play to naughty children. Fab.
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virtualruffy said 1645 days ago (May 25th, 2005)
Comfortably Sinister
I'm thinking of adding to it and turning it into a metal song along the lines of the Diety Alice Cooper.
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ragurner said 1546 days ago (August 31st, 2005)
Shuddering
That is some creepy stuff! I got chills listening to this, and
the vocal effects are "drippy." It's freaking perfect. Hope you
recorded this with all the lights on!

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screaming.org said 1494 days ago (October 23rd, 2005)
frightful
zombie darth vader, batman!

I think this is one of the scariest of the halloween tracks.

The word "you" seems to be too drawn-out on those lines
that end with it. I probably would have done that differently.

The sound effects after "the weapons that you used" sound
like a distant, raging battle. Very nice!
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virtualruffy said 1473 days ago (November 13th, 2005)
frightful
thanks. Its deliberately drawn out in emphasis like a 'vocal' pointing finger. Meant to show the sheer hatred at the betrayal done and the recognition of the betrayer. Each persons indignation is felt differently and here, the key is the 'You' (but not you of course.. ) referred to. The anger , the shock, the hate at the betrayal -and the realization that somehow you are back and can do something about it...

There will be more, oh, yes. The musical is coming.

I move, I think, I wonder, Just What I’ll do With You
My Imaginations working, I’m So Glad That It Pulled Through
I Guess That You Could Call This, Life After Death
I Know That You’ll Want To Know, When Youre Taking Your last Breath
And If you Rise After You Fall, Then I’ll Be There To Catch
-You When you’re 4 Days Dead

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Scott Carmichael said 1340 days ago (March 26th, 2006)
performance
garage band and other programs like it, by their very nature tend to
make us focus on the technical aspects of production... even in this
genre the idea holds true... we must start with a good performance..
people will always respond to that... anything else is just polishing
turds

.. still the production was slick... bravo
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virtualruffy said 1337 days ago (March 29th, 2006)
??????
By your wording I'm not sure if you're trying to slam the work but praise the production or what. Please elaborate.
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Scott Carmichael said 1337 days ago (March 29th, 2006)
Sorry.. that was unclear
No slam.... i really enjoyed the piece.... and what i meant was... the
performance really shined... you committed to the piece.... and in each
genre a good performance will propell the work forward... then we
don't have to polish turds...

I think it was great work in both areas production & performance

thanx; Scott
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Agrippa93 said 1316 days ago (April 19th, 2006)
Creepy...
...haunting, and very disturbing. All good the ingredients I look for in a
piece.
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shirtless said 639 days ago (February 24th, 2008)
I LIKE
It is horror in detail and anticipation -- nice job. Great voice.
regards,
shirtless
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saymme said 196 days ago (May 13th, 2009)
inspiring ...!
Very inspiring , really enjoy this like your voice & the dripdropping : ) Great picture thx my pleasure always a treat hearing musicians speak when you're used to their singing & chatting !
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