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Hits: 1295
Comments: 16
Votes: 8
Plays: 130
Last Played: Nov 05, 2008 - 07:21:20 PM
Downloads: 59
Fans: 1
Uploaded: Feb 12, 2005 - 04:51:14 PM
Last Updated: Sep 02, 2005 - 01:06:21 PM
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Description:
chilling account of a victim reanimating their dead body for vengeance. Very atmospheric.

Lyrics:
4 Days Dead
by Wolf macFal ©2004

I sit upon a green chair throwing stones at things that move
Contemplate my situation, And what to do with You

I plan I wait I ponder as the water drips on stone
My fingers trace the furrows and the crater of the wounds
I wonder what you told them and where they might have looked
I wonder if you pretended to care and what lies that took
But most of all I wonder how I'm waiting here for You
So much of me is missing from the weapons that You used

The dim light shows the greenness of the chair and of my skin
Mildew clots and blights my hair. Decay crowns me as its king.
I know that you'll be surprised that I'm waiting here for You
We have Unfinished Business. There's so much for me to do…
Now that I am 4 Days Dead.

Hardware:
isight
G4 17" 1gz powerbook

Software:
imovie
sound effects
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Creepy &mdash 02/13/05 - 07:09:06 AM
I look forward to more.


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what the hell &mdash 02/15/05 - 07:34:08 PM
this is awesome i felt like a movie was in the next room
that just started. great!

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Cool Voice &mdash 02/16/05 - 01:03:53 AM
This is cool!!!! I liked it.

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thanks &mdash 02/20/05 - 06:59:08 PM
I can visualize it exactly as if it was a movie playing. I'd love to see it as a mini movie. If it creeps you out, its doing its job.
thanks again
wolf

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THAT EYE!!! &mdash 05/09/05 - 07:32:22 PM
Rhythmic writing. Dark and threatening doom. Reminds me a bit of Poe. I look forward to more of your stuff Wolf. And, I truely appreciate you dropping by to listen and comment on my tunes. ~K

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THAT EYE!!! &mdash 05/25/05 - 10:35:53 AM
Thanks, and I love your work especially Colder Than. Its truly powerful.

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Comfortably Sinister &mdash 05/24/05 - 10:08:32 PM
I'd love to hear more of this textured spoken word stuff on
this site. A good one to play to naughty children. Fab.

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Comfortably Sinister &mdash 05/25/05 - 10:38:11 AM
I'm thinking of adding to it and turning it into a metal song along the lines of the Diety Alice Cooper.

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Shuddering &mdash 08/31/05 - 08:05:56 PM
That is some creepy stuff! I got chills listening to this, and
the vocal effects are "drippy." It's freaking perfect. Hope you
recorded this with all the lights on!


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frightful &mdash 10/23/05 - 01:33:20 PM
zombie darth vader, batman!

I think this is one of the scariest of the halloween tracks.

The word "you" seems to be too drawn-out on those lines
that end with it. I probably would have done that differently.

The sound effects after "the weapons that you used" sound
like a distant, raging battle. Very nice!

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frightful &mdash 11/13/05 - 05:34:01 PM
thanks. Its deliberately drawn out in emphasis like a 'vocal' pointing finger. Meant to show the sheer hatred at the betrayal done and the recognition of the betrayer. Each persons indignation is felt differently and here, the key is the 'You' (but not you of course.. ) referred to. The anger , the shock, the hate at the betrayal -and the realization that somehow you are back and can do something about it...

There will be more, oh, yes. The musical is coming.

I move, I think, I wonder, Just What I’ll do With You
My Imaginations working, I’m So Glad That It Pulled Through
I Guess That You Could Call This, Life After Death
I Know That You’ll Want To Know, When Youre Taking Your last Breath
And If you Rise After You Fall, Then I’ll Be There To Catch
-You When you’re 4 Days Dead


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performance &mdash 03/26/06 - 07:24:03 AM
garage band and other programs like it, by their very nature tend to
make us focus on the technical aspects of production... even in this
genre the idea holds true... we must start with a good performance..
people will always respond to that... anything else is just polishing
turds

.. still the production was slick... bravo

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?????? &mdash 03/29/06 - 08:55:47 AM
By your wording I'm not sure if you're trying to slam the work but praise the production or what. Please elaborate.

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Sorry.. that was unclear &mdash 03/29/06 - 11:27:01 AM
No slam.... i really enjoyed the piece.... and what i meant was... the
performance really shined... you committed to the piece.... and in each
genre a good performance will propell the work forward... then we
don't have to polish turds...

I think it was great work in both areas production & performance

thanx; Scott

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Creepy... &mdash 04/19/06 - 11:13:58 AM
...haunting, and very disturbing. All good the ingredients I look for in a
piece.

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I LIKE &mdash 02/24/08 - 11:08:14 PM
It is horror in detail and anticipation -- nice job. Great voice.
regards,
shirtless

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