Could use slightly more variation, and of course needs to
be much longer. This sort of tracks is not supposed to be
shorter than 25 minutes.

But on the whole I like it.

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Sorry but I don't follow you:" ...of course needs to
be much longer. This sort of tracks is not supposed to be shorter than 25 minutes."
I don't know what you mean by 'this sort of track'. Elaborate please.
It says what I meant to in the time I needed. I will be extending the ending phase a bit. The song is part of a larger context of its theme.
I will say also that I am influenced by Mort Garson's synthesizer album Black Mass by Lucifer.
Anyway glad you liked it.
-w

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i like how it gets heavier at the end, keeps u listening.
Good, varied electronica. I like it

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Thanks. I'm working on expanding it and making it richer. New improved whitens your teeth etc.

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track
I'll definitely check back to see how it progresses.
thanks for sharing

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I think it's a good amount of time for the song to speak for itself. How did you think of the story? You're so creative. I never would have been able to write about a ship crash landing. You inspire me to think outside the box.

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