Sight Words In C

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Taking a break from doing "Just Loops" I wanted to get feedback on this little tune.

I am developing a phonics DVD for children and this is one of the songs on the DVD.

I want to know if it sounds "fun" and "lively" for kids (and any comments for improvement and/or praise).

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Uploaded: Feb 14, 2005 - 05:50:34 AM
Last Updated: Feb 14, 2005 - 05:29:36 AM Last Played: Oct 26, 2009 - 05:23:29 PM

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alanfraser	alanfraser said 1743 days ago (February 14th, 2005)
	Make up your mind whether you're doing a dance tune or something that will serve as a backdrop for information you're trying to present. If the latter, you might want to pull back on the drums. Otherwise, it seemed fairly credible. Check out my latest song called It's For You w/Mystery Lady

nyakki	nyakki said 1743 days ago (February 14th, 2005)
	Make up your mind Thanks for the comment. I will be putting a voice over this which will go along with the words that will appear on the screen. So you are saying the drums are to much and bring them down?--- I Do Loops :) Check out my latest song called Maple Leaf Rag v2

	said 1742 days ago (February 15th, 2005)
	This one is... ...is a little... "punchy". I think I like this one better than the second version. See my comments on the other one. Cowbells...

nyakki	nyakki said 1742 days ago (February 15th, 2005)
	This one is... Can't have enough cowbells :) Seriously, I'll try some where the bongos are and see how that sounds. Thanks for the comments. I responded to your other comment.--- I Do Loops :) Check out my latest song called Maple Leaf Rag v2

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Syncopatient said 1738 days ago (February 19th, 2005)

It does have bounce
I think kids' would like this, although it has almost a video
game sound to it...of course, that very well may be your
intent. The rhythm section needs some tweeking as it
somewhat overpowers and makes the song overall
incohesive. Like the conga feel...but the drums
themselves...just for the heck of it, try a different loop?

Fun bouncy song though.

Check out my latest song called Jazz Praise

nyakki	nyakki said 1738 days ago (February 19th, 2005)
	It does have bounce I brought the 'drums' down in the remix version (Same title with 'remix' added). Take a listen to that one and see if the drums fit better. Thank you for your comments.--- I (Used To) Do 'ONLY' Loops Check out my latest song called Maple Leaf Rag v2

TennesseeVic	TennesseeVic said 1634 days ago (June 3rd, 2005)
	Sesame Street reborn The melody has that sing-song quality, but as Alan remarked: the drums is too upfront. Also, the drums are not bouncy enough for a children's song. How about alternating bass-hihat-snare-hihat in a 1&2& rhythm? Lose the four-to-the-floor bass. With some change like that it's a fun little ditty. Check out my latest song called Tecmo Superbowl 2009 w/ Dead End (MJRF 2004)

nyakki	nyakki said 1632 days ago (June 5th, 2005)
	Sesame Street reborn Thank you for your comments Also, the drums are not bouncy enough for a children's song. How about alternating bass-hihat-snare-hihat in a 1&2& rhythm? Lose the four-to-the- floor bass. I started messing around with the drums after reading your comment. What a difference!!!! Thanks for the suggestion. Check out my latest song called Maple Leaf Rag v2

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