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Dead in the Eyes features some of our simplest production to date, really emphasising the intimacy of Rachel's song, and her performance.
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Alone on the couch with just my thoughts.
Try to get up but I am caught.
I always knew you would break my heart,
but I didn't think I would fall this hard.

I just can't believe it went this far.
I have no idea who you really are.
You looked me dead in the eyes,
And like it was nothing you told me lies.

It was always unclear how things would go.
You always made sure that I didn't know.
And worse than you not wanting me,
Is being the fool that I could be.

I thought at least we were friends.
And it would all work out in the end.
But what do I need with a friend like you?
I don't even think you know what is true.

Now that I know it's goodbye,
It's no longer worth it for me to try.
My mind is twisted, my heart is spent.
This crooked game is where my love went.

You have nothing real to offer me.
And I should be happy to finally see.
I should count my blessings and walk on by.
But it's just in my nature to agonize.

There's nothing left for me to say,
best I can do is take myself away.
It's not like me to make this wish,
But I hope someday you cry like this.

I just used to love to make you smile,
For nothing in return it was worth while.
And it really is too god damn bad
That you didn't realize what you had.

Alone on the couch with just my thoughts.
Try to get up but I am caught
I always knew you would break my heart
But I didn't think I would fall this hard.

I just can't believe it went so far.
I have no idea who you really are.
You looked me dead in the eyes,
And like it was nothing,
Like it was nothing,
Like it was nothing you told me lies.
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Uploaded: Feb 15, 2005 - 09:57:11 AM
Last Updated: Feb 15, 2005 - 08:53:54 AM Last Played: Jul 11, 2009 - 09:45:29 AM
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Dual 1 GHZ PowerMac G4, motu 828 firewire interface, rhode nt3 mic, accoustic guitar
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Comments
Tom Atwood said 1746 days ago (February 15th, 2005)
If I was your producer
I would change the harmonies. I would make it even a
more intimate performance by using just the solo voice in
the beginning, adding the drums and then, maybe,
harmony.

To me the harmony is a little awkward and distracts from
a very minimalist melody. (The harmony kind of
disappears in the middle...and then comes back.)

Nice guitar, drums. Interesting vocal style.
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gudkarma said 1745 days ago (February 15th, 2005)
If I was your producer
i agree......no harmony.

its good....but i think for that intimacy....no harmony.
nice song! :)
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Peter Greenstone said 1746 days ago (February 15th, 2005)
Gotta' agree with Tom
The harmonies should be mostly cut out, and what harmony that there is should be done differently. Right now it sounds like two lead singers clashing as they try to sing the song, each in their own way.

Rachel's lead voice is really good. Excellent, in fact. The guitar sounds great and is solidly played. Overal, it's a really nice song melodically and lyrically. It mostly just needs a reworking on those harmonies.
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Jim Bouchard said 1745 days ago (February 15th, 2005)
Not to be ganging up, but...
I gotta agree withTom and Peter. You guys have a lot of talent and potential, so I hope you're looking for this input, but yeah, the harmony vocal isn't working. It is too similar to the main vocal stylistically and too intrusive. Also if you are going to re-work this, you might look into editing it a bit, because it seems to go on for a while after you say you have nothing left to say. But what do I know? I'm an old wind-bag! I like the chorus a lot and the guitarwork is great.
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BlackLily said 1744 days ago (February 17th, 2005)
hmm
I love this song.. the harmonies were not working as well
as they could have but it was still a great song.
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thetiler said 1692 days ago (April 10th, 2005)
Killer killer words
These are the best words I can remember hearing on this
site.
Just fantastic. You music set a nice tone to this precious
but sad words.

Thanks much for sharing
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***itiswotitis*** said 989 days ago (March 13th, 2007)
great lyrics
lovely voice on the lead vocal ..
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