The underbeat and ambient foundation of the song
overpowers the timid guitar noodling. It might help if you
were more resolute about a "lead voice" playing a well-
defined theme. However, that is not in the style of your
extemporaneous explorations, so that may not be an
appropriate suggestion. The drum beats are a little too
pronounced for my taste. Could possibly be remedied by
adjusting track levels.

Basically, I like the feel of the piece. It definitely out of this
world as we know it. I could see laying a poem called
"Mars Retroterraformation" over this piece.

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i like the beat track-booms nicely, but still tight & drives
the song very well. the eerie windy synths do a wonderful
job of creating the dusty landscape, & the little bells in the
background provide just the right amount of 'perk'. high
marks for production. DL'd

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as the interior walls on my first floor. LOL. So I like Yellow
Orange.

On to the music ... I like the atmosphere and ambience.
How sounds float in and out. The guitar is like an insect
trying to make its way through the sand, sometimes it
gets buried.
I wonder what this would sound like with an acoustic bass
replacing the acoustic guitar (I realize you've used a real
guitar ... so hearing that will just be an imagination
exercise rather than a simple midi instrument
substitution.)

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