Seems more like an piano exercise than a song. Builds
without going anywhere. No real resolution. Like
listening to someone practice scales.

You can also sing the commercial to Halloween 3 to parts
of this. The one that turns the kids' heads to mush.

"Three more days 'til Halloween, Halloween, Halloween.
Three more day 'til Halloween, Silver Shamrock!"

I didn't hate it, but it is too trilly for my tastes. I won't
vote, since I'm obviously not connecting enough to judge.

[Note: I wasn't going to post this, but after emailing with
the artist he encouraged me to, saying negative comments
are better than no comments, and since I agree.... Feel
free to shout me down. Now I feel mean.]

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I guess the Silver Shamrock tune is also "London Bridges Falling Down."

http://www.stomptokyo.com/movies/halloween-3.html

Probably won't let me link to the site. If not, oh well.

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cjorgensen:
"Seems more like an piano exercise than a song. Builds
without going anywhere. No real resolution."

Then, this most be one of the more honest pieces I've recorded, because that
pretty much sums up my life.

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LOL. I resemble that remark too.
I'm looking forward to the techno and heavy metal versions of this. ;)

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Well played. The piano could use a little EQing it sounds a
little flat, and possibly a little sustain pedal in parts.

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