This is pretty cool. I like the mix of eerie sci-fi sounds and the bittersweet melody. This seems like it's just begging for lyrics and vocals.

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the confidence in your keyboard playing gives this a very
intentional, professional feel. great melodies,
production & overall sound-this is really great! the song
stands on its own without lyrics, but i agree w/pgreens'
comment. pairing the right words to this could take it to
marketable airplay IMHO.. ya got any more?

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I like the way you take the melody and play around with it, develop variations, add sonic texture, to create a layered piece.

A couple of thoughts - all minor. I'd eliminate the eight-beat drum intro and start the piece where the piano enters (because that's where the mood of this piece begins, so while wait eight beats for it to start?) The second theme could be developed a little more as a break from the original, but it does serve as an interlude that lets the original theme come back in and feel warm and wonderful when it arrives. I think it ends a little too soon - that you didn't give the ending as much attention as the beginning of this fun piece. Maybe just one more two-line repetition would make it seem less abrupt? Anyway, thanks for posting - I enjoyed the ride.

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Melody is good too.

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but I'm not so sure about the accordion (?) that's over it
part of the time.

But on the whole this is a very fun piece, and well played,
well arranged.

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