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About a man who keeps promising everybody he'll do this and that, but tomorrow. Then he loses his son.
This is take 2 of this song. It was suggested to me that the vocals wasn't up to par so I completely re-recorded the vocal track and also did a slight re-mix. Also I changed the song genre...
The picture is a statue in wood, actually a man hanging by one hand looking at the sunset. It's in Prague.
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This is take 2 of this song. It was suggested to me that the vocals wasn't up to par so I completely re-recorded the vocal track and also did a slight re-mix. Also I changed the song genre...
The picture is a statue in wood, actually a man hanging by one hand looking at the sunset. It's in Prague.
PLEASE VOTE! PLEASE COMMENT!
Please check out my other songs:
http://www.macjams.com/users.php?mode=profile&uid=4276
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Lyrics
My heart is full of empty
My head is full of You
Got wind in my hair
Clouds in the air
It's a lonely affair
The hills are all bare
Sitting in the grass just painting a kite
I'm all in the dark but the colour is bright
Gotta get the kite ready for the first flight
Gotta get the kite flying 'cause here comes the night
It will ascend
I can't amend
I won't pretend
It's time for my end
My heart is full of empty
My head is full of You
My head is full of You
Got wind in my hair
Clouds in the air
It's a lonely affair
The hills are all bare
Sitting in the grass just painting a kite
I'm all in the dark but the colour is bright
Gotta get the kite ready for the first flight
Gotta get the kite flying 'cause here comes the night
It will ascend
I can't amend
I won't pretend
It's time for my end
My heart is full of empty
My head is full of You
Peter Greenstone
The sound of your voice is better on this one and the levels are good, but the rhythm of your singing seems quite off from the music, particularly during the "full of empty" chorus parts. I like how you stretch out the words there but you're getting off tempo.
Other than the voice tempo issue it's a nice improvement. It's good to hear your voice more clearly.