The basic song is nice, so are the vocals but with the
loops i get a feeling of snippets roughly quilted together.
Even the volume wavers. I like Your other cleaner guitar
songs better. Even so there's a nice beat and melody
somewhere in this one. I would try to straighten it out,
keeping it simpler and let Your great voice carry the song.
With a voice like Yours, You don't have to have a fat
production. And if You do like what the loops does, do it
on Your guitar. I have no doubt that You can handle it!

IMHO
/Algabatz
5-4-6-6

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funny you should mention it . . . .

We're working on an acoustic version of this one right now . . . Hopefully we'll
have a finished product in about a week. We're tracking it right on top of the
original loops, and then we're letting many of the loops go.

But the loops were very helpful in the composing of the song, which I think
should be a very strong selling point for GarageBand.

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Zach

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