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Archy

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I still feel I have somewhere to go with this piece, although I am not sure where. I put together a chorus/bridge in B minor to go with it but it ended up hard and grungy so I may have to do something else with it...

Archy

(The artwork is from a picture my dad took in Venice..... there really was an aubergine in the water!)

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Hits: 2452
Comments: 4
Fans: 1
Plays: 929
Downloads: 124
Votes: 6
Uploaded: Feb 19, 2005 - 07:47:00 AM
Last Updated: Feb 19, 2005 - 07:12:37 AM Last Played: Aug 27, 2009 - 07:38:20 AM

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Hardware:

eMAc G4 evolution 69 key keyboard

Software:

garageband.

Comments

	said 1741 days ago (February 19th, 2005)
	I Thought It was a Kidney Bean I'm glad you got your keyboard - this is a bit more refreshing, in my opinion, than the loops only music you had been creating. I agree with you that it needs some other sections to make it sound less the same throughout,

aclarke	aclarke said 1739 days ago (February 20th, 2005)
	Nice Start I really like the melody.. it has kind of a rainy day feeling sorry for myself kind of feel. I'd really be interested in hearing where you go with this. Plans for lyrics and vocals? I think they would integrate nicely with the song you have composed. Check out my latest song called Ballad of The Little Tiki

Archy

Archy said 1739 days ago (February 20th, 2005)

Nice Start
Well I wasn't to record vocals, but at your suggestion I burnt the track to CD
and went to bed and listened to it a couple of times, and as I had hoped some
lyrics and a rather rudimentary tune popped into my head, as well as a chorus
which I need to now do the music for. The updated version should be up here
in about a week (I still havent really got over the shock of what my voice
sounds like on tape!!!)

Thanks for the comments; they mean more to me than usual as I particularly
enjoy your own work.

Archy

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Life is a terminal illness

Check out my latest song called Vines

dvandetta	dvandetta said 1711 days ago (March 20th, 2005)
	Wow! I must say that I'm impressed. I must be an old foagy, but if you really are 13, this piece is great. It is actually similar to some minimalists like Philip Glass or Brian Eno. It could use an ending, and probably shouldn't have lyrics. I'm impressed because if this is what you are doing at 13, I can't wait to hear what you'll be doing at 20!!! Keep up the great work. -Dylan

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Name: Archy de Berker

Hello. I am 15, bohemian and not -bald, just archy. I have the enjoyable prospect of French Coursework to conquer now, so I apologise for the abruptness of this bio.... [see more]

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