Twisted

neilh79

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I found this in relation to my last song which people commented on the lyrics being difficult to work out. At the time I wrote a couple of songs, which I left the lyrics open to interpretation, this is another of those!! Either that or just damn right weird. For you to decide. Anyway I hope you can enjoy it.

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Lyrics

V1, Envelope Mind
Thoughts Like Butterflies
Quiet Storm
As The Bells Toll

C, Quick Shift
Floating Echoes
Rancid Evening
Wishing Well

V2, Marmalade Patterns
Voices Shallow
Armageddons Near
Soviet Blame

V3, Soul Searching
Violent Shadows
Steep Mountain
Collapsed Wing

Twisted, Twisted, Twisted, Twisted (to fade)

Song Stats

Hits: 678
Comments: 31
Fans: 23
Plays: 51
Downloads: 21
Votes: 0
Uploaded: Jun 08, 2012 - 10:29:09 AM
Last Updated: Jun 08, 2012 - 10:29:09 AM Last Played: Apr 02, 2013 - 02:06:08 PM

Song License

Creative Commons License:
Attribution-NoDerivs-NonCommercial

Song Actions

Keywords:

twisted (5), help (18)

Hardware:

Me and the guitar

Software:

Tracktion v2

Comments

alackbass

alackbass said 348 days ago (June 8th, 2012)

Twisted
I think the lyrics are suitably dark and foreboding. They fit the melody and you deliver them well in your solid vocal. I like abstract lyrics like this. Leaves me room to interpret them as I hear them.

I like the overall character and balance of the mix. But the overall mix is quite soft. If you're interested I know a few easy mastering tricks you can do with Audacity to get a hotter mix.

Check out my latest song called Just Ain't Worth a Song (2 Track)

neilh79	neilh79 said 346 days ago (June 10th, 2012)
	Andrew Thankyou for stopping by and having a listen, glad you enjoyed. It was a rush mix, I recorded and posted the thing i 45 minutes so maybe that has something to do with it. Always looking to learn, is Audacity freeware? Check out my latest song called Resurrection of Life Final Mix! (w/ Loob, Rok41, Symphony101, Gadzooks)

pablatone	pablatone said 348 days ago (June 8th, 2012)
	i think the Words are good. No need to be specific about anything. It could definately use some help with the volume though. Good job! Check out my latest song called King Kong

neilh79	neilh79 said 346 days ago (June 10th, 2012)
	Pablatone Thankyou so much for dropping in your time and comment is much appreciated. Glad you enjoyed it Check out my latest song called Resurrection of Life Final Mix! (w/ Loob, Rok41, Symphony101, Gadzooks)

gadzooks	gadzooks said 348 days ago (June 8th, 2012)
	Twisted Neil, the words fit the tune. I like your voice .. the deepness of it also suites the darkness of the melody. . with a little better recording and volume the box could really shine. Good tune... Cheers SG Check out my latest song called Song of Life

neilh79	neilh79 said 346 days ago (June 10th, 2012)
	Stan Thanks for finding time to comment. Was a rush post but glad you like the song Check out my latest song called Resurrection of Life Final Mix! (w/ Loob, Rok41, Symphony101, Gadzooks)

Philip18	Philip18 said 348 days ago (June 9th, 2012)
	Twisted I like the tone of the guitar and I think the vivid, haunting images in the lyrics work. The vocal is too far back in the mix for my tastes, given its resonance, but nevertheless a powerful song! Check out my latest song called Close to Midnight w/ alackbass, rok41, paul f. page, & KyasheMusic

neilh79	neilh79 said 346 days ago (June 10th, 2012)
	Philip Always nice to see you pop up with a comment. Glad you dug the lyrics and enjoyed the song Check out my latest song called Resurrection of Life Final Mix! (w/ Loob, Rok41, Symphony101, Gadzooks)

lavalamp	lavalamp said 348 days ago (June 9th, 2012)
	Neil, well done Like the sort of dark feel to this. Vox has a deep, honest quality to it. Coolness friend. LL Check out my latest song called A Funky Little Thing

neilh79	neilh79 said 346 days ago (June 10th, 2012)
	Dave Thankyou so much for the cool comment, appreciate it Check out my latest song called Resurrection of Life Final Mix! (w/ Loob, Rok41, Symphony101, Gadzooks)

jgurner	jgurner said 347 days ago (June 9th, 2012)
	Definitely twisted And that's a good thing. I love enigmatic lyrics and these are great. Reminds me of my college days when the band I was in did "White Room." Your lyrics leave a lot of room for interpretation and the moodiness of the lyrics helps fill some of that in. Nicely done. Check out my latest song called Anniversary

neilh79	neilh79 said 346 days ago (June 10th, 2012)
	Joe Thanks for dropping by, glad you enjoyed the song. The lyrics are very abstract but glad you got one of many interpretations!! Cheers Check out my latest song called Resurrection of Life Final Mix! (w/ Loob, Rok41, Symphony101, Gadzooks)

I.G.M.	I.G.M. said 347 days ago (June 9th, 2012)
	Dark Acoustic but very nice tune. Timing is a bit shaky here and there. But overall well performed. Check out my latest song called By Now

neilh79	neilh79 said 346 days ago (June 10th, 2012)
	IGM Thanks for stopping in, glad you enjoyed the tune Check out my latest song called Resurrection of Life Final Mix! (w/ Loob, Rok41, Symphony101, Gadzooks)

Relic67	Relic67 said 347 days ago (June 9th, 2012)
	nice I like the riff and the understated way you play it. Guitar is sounding good. nice vox too. good one! Check out my latest song called Someone Else's Thing

neilh79	neilh79 said 346 days ago (June 10th, 2012)
	Alec Thanks for stopping by, I like the riff too (if thats not conceited!). Thanks for the comment, cheers Check out my latest song called Resurrection of Life Final Mix! (w/ Loob, Rok41, Symphony101, Gadzooks)

Jarvoid	Jarvoid said 347 days ago (June 10th, 2012)
	interesting and very bizarre in th lyric department ....your voice has a quality that I cannot put my finger on for a comparison .....which means it is probably highly original,,,the guitar is very good....a darkly mooded song ....good stuff..... Jarvo Check out my latest song called Cripple Creek Revised........By Jarvoid and the Banjo Bedraggled Manic Mandolin Accordion Squeezers

neilh79	neilh79 said 346 days ago (June 10th, 2012)
	Jarvo Bizarre is good for a change!! Original! Great word so many meanings, cheers Check out my latest song called Resurrection of Life Final Mix! (w/ Loob, Rok41, Symphony101, Gadzooks)

PaulaMunk	PaulaMunk said 346 days ago (June 10th, 2012)
	Your vocal is quiet but the mood of the song is trippy and that kind of works. It reminds me a bit of Jim Morrison and The Doors. Check out my latest song called Alone at Christmas

neilh79	neilh79 said 346 days ago (June 10th, 2012)
	Char Wow, what a comparison to make! Appreciate the listen and comment, thankyou Check out my latest song called Resurrection of Life Final Mix! (w/ Loob, Rok41, Symphony101, Gadzooks)

Sigmund	Sigmund said 346 days ago (June 10th, 2012)
	Twisted Cool tune Neil. It kind of reminds ME of some the slow stuff that bands like Alice in Chains or Soundgarden would do, or even Metallica. It's got that grunge-ish style of chord progression. I like the simplicity of the arrangement, and your vocal track goes well with the song. Enjoyed! Sig Check out my latest song called Under Your Bed - feat. strangedream, rok41 & Steve Ritter

neilh79	neilh79 said 339 days ago (June 17th, 2012)
	Sig Thanks very much for the kind comment, used to like a bit of Alice in Chains, and was a big Nirvana fan so maybe the grunge came from there, thanks for dropping in cheers Check out my latest song called Resurrection of Life Final Mix! (w/ Loob, Rok41, Symphony101, Gadzooks)

dave_b	dave_b said 344 days ago (June 12th, 2012)
	Twisted Very cool guitar riffs. I like the stream-of-consciousness lyrics. Strong vocals, like the attitude. Check out my latest song called Llarions Blues

neilh79	neilh79 said 339 days ago (June 17th, 2012)
	Dave Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment, really glad you liked it Check out my latest song called Resurrection of Life Final Mix! (w/ Loob, Rok41, Symphony101, Gadzooks)

lyzak	lyzak said 344 days ago (June 12th, 2012)
	Envelope Mind I enjoy your musical poetry and its presentation here. The comments offered thus far are constructive, informative, and come from good places. I also wonder if, at the same time, this too is a perfect presentation of 'Twisted' as is. Good work! Check out my latest song called Bro .. with A-man and gadzooks

neilh79	neilh79 said 339 days ago (June 17th, 2012)
	Lyzak Musical poetry haha I like it and this is certainly twisted!! Thanks for the comment, glad you enjoyed Check out my latest song called Resurrection of Life Final Mix! (w/ Loob, Rok41, Symphony101, Gadzooks)

LeXxi	LeXxi said 343 days ago (June 13th, 2012)
	Nice track Nice track... Will be great when its mixdown a wee bit more and mastered!! Check out my latest song called Summerhouse

neilh79	neilh79 said 339 days ago (June 17th, 2012)
	Lexxi Thanks for stopping in, appreciate the comment, cheers Check out my latest song called Resurrection of Life Final Mix! (w/ Loob, Rok41, Symphony101, Gadzooks)

magnatone	magnatone said 342 days ago (June 14th, 2012)
	Twisted hi neil - sorry to be late to this - what a cool track! nice job as usual - thanks for the D/L! Check out my latest song called Blind Love (Seeing Heart) - Orchestral Version

neilh79	neilh79 said 339 days ago (June 17th, 2012)
	Karen Always lovely to see you stop by, thanks so much for the kind comment Check out my latest song called Resurrection of Life Final Mix! (w/ Loob, Rok41, Symphony101, Gadzooks)

PockBluesman	PockBluesman said 309 days ago (July 17th, 2012)
	Nice one Neil Love the feel of this. I agree the vox needs to be brought forward as your vocals are great along with the haunting lyrics. Check out my latest song called 20 Year Blues

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Name: Neil Hicks
Location: York North Yorkshire United Kingdom

Hi all!! I have been here over a year now and have learn't so much. The community on here has been very supportive. The challenges presented to me have been both musical and production and I have enjoyed (though sometimes wanted to hit my head into a... [see more]

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