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Description

This is a song that I composed about special forces "Deltas". Inspired by Hans Zimmer's Black Hawks Down Soundtrack. Hope you like it.

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Song Stats

Hits: 1197
Comments: 7
Fans: 1
Plays: 89
Downloads: 43
Votes: 5
Uploaded: Feb 23, 2005 - 09:31:28 AM
Last Updated: Mar 06, 2005 - 07:52:49 AM Last Played: Oct 27, 2009 - 02:51:16 PM

Song License

Creative Commons License:
Attribution-NoDerivs-NonCommercial

Song Actions

Hardware:

iMac 1.25 GHz PowerPC G4

Software:

Garageband

Comments

	Anonymous said 1732 days ago (February 24th, 2005)
	Really Hot levels This track starts out great, and about a third into into it the levels become really hot. They are hot past the point of clipping and distortion, and I would recommend another mixcown session. This piece has some great elements, but the hot levels really hurt it overall in my opinion.

White Hawks	White Hawks said 1732 days ago (February 24th, 2005)
	Really Hot levels Thank you very much for your comment RIAA. I think your advice is right. I will apply your advice to my next song. thank you very much. - HAWKS Check out my latest song called Shepherds Out in the Field

Tom Atwood

Tom Atwood said 1732 days ago (February 24th, 2005)

Conversion to Mp3/audio issues
I have had problems before with levels, especially coming
out of Garageband. Your piece--which does sound like a
film soundtrack--may have been mixed well in GB but
could have become distorted in the conversion. Check out
a forum post on this site from Tobin Mueller on using
LAME to convert to mp3. (Just use the search engine in
Forum Posts and type in LAME.) You might bring all the
levels down in Garageband, too, and see if that helps.

Nice job.

p.s. when you submitted this song, it looks like you
accidentally checked "Explicit Content." You can edit your
submission and remove that.

Check out my latest song called Keep Looking for Jesus (MJRF)

White Hawks	White Hawks said 1732 days ago (February 24th, 2005)
	Conversion to Mp3/audio issues Thanks for your comment Tom! And thank you for your help. That helps me alot! and yes I accidentally checked "Explicit Content". but I didn't know how to fix it so thank you for teaching me how to fix it :) Check out my latest song called Shepherds Out in the Field

said 1722 days ago (March 6th, 2005)

Another Suggestion
Since you are not creating "songs" but rather sections of
music to fit an imaginary soundtrack, you might want to
put your soundtrack music into the game/soundtrack
genre.
The reason I mention this is that if people were to listen to
this without reading the description, they might think this
is not a very good "song" (like one you'd hear on the
radio), but it is quite all right as part of a soundtrack.

BTW, I liked how you put this together.

White Hawks	White Hawks said 1722 days ago (March 6th, 2005)
	Another Suggestion thanks for your suggestion. i will change it's genre. - Hawks Check out my latest song called Shepherds Out in the Field

	Lodestar said 1600 days ago (July 6th, 2005)
	Nice I liked the beginning, but agree the volumes were clipping.

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Name: Jemimah

-Who is White Hawks, Jemimah- I am 16 years old girl Mac Jammer. Born in 1989 as the second one of the family(now I have five siblings, which is pretty uncommon in Japan), and raised by wonderful christian parents. I grown up listening to alot of ... [see more]

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