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Uploaded: Feb 24, 2005 - 06:36:20 PM
Last Updated: Feb 24, 2005 - 01:26:20 PM
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These last two songs were written as wedding songs. Been trying to get down GB But realizing that I mainly hear guitar and vocs. Been challenging to be a producer and fleshing out the tunes. Any ideas are definitely welcome.

Lyrics:
One ring, to place upon your finger
one song, to sing when we're apart
one kiss, soft enough to linger,
but strong enough to hold your heart
There's a halo on the mountain
cobalt blue embraces heavenly white
there's a golding ore the Promised Land
terra firma meets the big blue sky
Specks of sunlight swim in emerald green
there's a hint of sadness in your eyes
desert winds trace a path round the corner of you eyes
Tonight, forever, you're so beautiful to me
one ring..........


Hardware:
Powerbook 1.5, US-122, Berringer B1, Taylor amped acoustic

Software:
GB2
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Very Nice &mdash 02/24/05 - 06:57:59 PM
I really like the vocal on this. Sung with passion and
sincerity. The song is good the way it is, in my opinion.
The only thing I'll suggest is to mic the guitar instead of
amping it. I think the guitar sound would be warmer and
more full. Very nice job!

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very poetic! &mdash 02/24/05 - 07:03:08 PM
not the sort of song i'd usually listen to, but the
guitar is really nice, and you have a great voice, very
soothing. the song subject is perfect for it with very
poetic lyrics.
Nice!

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great singing &mdash 02/24/05 - 11:59:10 PM
You have a great voice and you use it well. I like the melody and the lyrics a lot. Seems perfect for a wedding. As far as recommendations, well, I agree that it'll sound better with the guitar on a mic; you could also combine both ways and blend them in the mix. Other than that, well, I think it would be nice to have a bass come in and perhaps some other instrument; perhaps a flute. Something soft and light. But still, keep it simple.

Wonder who the putz is that gave you a "1" on writing/content.

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Cool.. &mdash 02/25/05 - 03:02:06 AM
Really cool tune man.....great voice!

Keep jammin'...

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Great &mdash 04/16/05 - 11:07:13 PM
Your voice, the performance, and the production are
great. Keep jamming!

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