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I found this tune that I had redone about a month ago... thought I'd post it here. This tune is way out of my comfort zone. For the last 4 or 5 months I've been writing mainly musical theatre tunes. Thought I'd try and do something a little different and this was it.
I had posted this tune in a different version a while ago... though it never felt right to me. This version, I feel, is much improved.
I had posted this tune in a different version a while ago... though it never felt right to me. This version, I feel, is much improved.
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Lyrics
Don't look now, your burning desire
Has burst into an uncontrolled fire
Don't look now, you've been paying double
And your last step was a step into trouble
Run away but I made you look
Hide your eyes but I made you look
and I knew you would
now you can't unsee what you have seen
and dream the dream without it understood
Don't look now, you took the wrong exit
Forget the map, cause there's no way to fix it
Don't look now, the miles are plenty
And your stuck cause your gas tank is empty
Don't look now, your paint job is peeling
And you forgot the cracks on the ceiling
Don't look now, the faucet is leaking
And when you walk the floor boards are creaking.
Rebsie
I like the proggy keyboard solo very much - in fact all
the instrumental sections are excellent. I think the
vocals could be made to stand out a little more ...
they are slightly drowned by the guitar ... otherwise
very nice.