You really thickened this up nicely. Sounds great. This
song has an awesome drive behind... cool vocals still and
expertly placed. I love this song! Downloaded!

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Thanks!
I totally agree with most of the critisism i have gotten for the old version. I'm much more satisfied with this mix. There's a much better flow, even though I changed the drums. I took Your advice regarding drawing more attention to the chorus, I think it works much better now.
Thanks again for the input.

/Al

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Yes....these changes are great!...I love this song btw.
Downloading and Faved. The drums are thicker and oh..I
just love that organ..perfectly placed...thanks for this
tune...on my Ipod!

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Thanks! I'm honoured. I took Your advice and tried thickening the drum beat to enhance the rhythm. I also "fatted" the keyboard to make it a bit more powerful, which led to having to power up the volume on the guitar. But in the end i think it turned out fine.
Thanks for Your advice!

/Al

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There are two things that smell like fish. One of them's fish. [Groucho Marx]

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I really like your singing on this. Your voice sounds great,; it reminds me of someone but I'm not sure who. You could tighten up your rythm in a few places but overall it has great drive. I didn't hear the previous version you posted but I like this one a lot.

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Thanks a lot! Yes, I know exactly what You mean. Some of the beat are on clay feet, but I'm working on a new song now and will have to leave the fine tuning to the CD-version ;-)
Thanks again for Your input, it is much appreciated.

/Al

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There are two things that smell like fish. One of them's fish. [Groucho Marx]

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This is a very cool tune and a very cool concept. The best part is the organ groove breakdown that the tune moves into later. Love it!

It may be just my headphones but I think the bass could use some volume/kick to lift everything up further. You may also want to up the distortion guitar a bit to blend better with your core arpeggio.

But mate ... DAMN COOL TUNE.



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Thanks! Well I'm having serious problems using headphones. Like I said in an earlier posting I'm having severe problems with the bass. I usually play at night and need to use headphones on account of the rest of the family sleeping. I have a pair of capped Sonys, which are great, but loses a lot of the bass, and i have another pair of Sennheisers, which has a great bass thump, and listening to it through speakers in the morning, sounds different in a third way. I think this is a tough nut to crack. How do You do it?

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whole feel to this track.
great drums and the organ sounds just right, it adds some
great variation

Good singing

SlimGirlFat

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Thanks! I sometimes find it hard not to add too much to my songs. The more tracks and instruments, the harder to keep the balance, but at the same time you get a pregnant sound that could be rather pleasant. But the truth is that it's hard to keep it simple...
Thanks for your input, it's very much appreciated!

/Al

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The extra synths are a nice touch - gives it plenty of
variety, and it still meshes together well. Love the
pounding beat, as before. Well done!

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Thanks again!
I was afraid that the synth would kill the vocals, but i find the chorus melody a tad weak, compared to the verse, so it really enhanced the power of the chorus instead. I kind of think it turned out OK...
Thanks for Your input!

/Al

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I wanna do you some justice on the comment......

I will drop back in when I hear it the 20th time.

Still interesting after 10. Good sign.

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That IS good grades. I'm very happy y'all took time to listen to the remodeled
version. I'm also glad you seem to like it. I can of course hear the mishaps in
the beat, the missed notes on the keyboard and the errors on the guitar. But
what the hell, I'm just a happy amateur, new at this game!
Thanks for your input, much, much appreciated.

/Al

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Good overall structure to the song though I would like to
hear more of the vocals. Synth leads are good love the
glide bit!!!

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Thanks! Well i have a feeling it's a bit over the top in the production, so too
many instruments might put a bit of a dampening on the vocals... I don't
know. Many thanks for your input, it's very much appreciated!

/Al

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And I still totally love this track!

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As always, You're very kind!

/Al

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