Genre: Soft Rock-Adult Contemporary
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This song is about interrupted friendships. It was more of a personal challenge to see if I could compose something that was keyboard-centric. This is the first song I've done that didn't involve a lick of guitar. I'll admit I'm not a piano player so I hope it turned out OK.Lyrics:
As quick as it came it went awayLeaves me here with not much left to say Now in my darkest hour I stay Praying for escape I wish I could take back yesterday The joyful feelings that it once gave So many friends lost along the way I hope their souls are safe One was searching for true love Thought he'd found her but she gave up Couldn't bear the thought of moving along So took a gun in his hand...now both are gone One was just out for some fun Thought he'd found it in the drugs he'd done Just a little more before crawling to bed As the sun arose he woke up dead I'm reaching for heaven But find that I'm stumbling Though I keep on searching for a piece of solid ground Just hope that I make it 'cause I'm tired of faking Through another day pretending everything's OK Hardware:
M-Audio Radium 49Software:
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You must be registered and logged-in to comment. Don't you hate it when people say... &mdash 03/02/05 - 02:48:49 PM
Don't you hate it when people say... &mdash 03/14/05 - 09:50:50 PM
nice exercise &mdash 09/26/05 - 07:02:47 PM
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line and the voice. Really simple and rhythmic with a good
tune and good lyrics. (though the jokey "as the sun arose
he woke up dead" doesn't work for me) I don't like the
other keyboard(s)? It gets in the way. What about another
instrument in there to lift it? Guitar? And "I'm reaching for
heaven..." sounds like a chorus, especially with the
doubled vocal. What about bringing that in earlier? Nice
though.
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