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Another song co-written with my friend Tracy. Lyrics and vocals by her and music by me. I couldn't resist putting this harmonica on at the end even though it wasn't in the right key and I could only find one note that worked. So go ahead and tell me I'm a goofus and to take it off. Any and all constructive criticism solicited. Or praise if it deserves it.
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Tom Atwood
I like how the lyrics seem almost improvised at times. And
the double time gives this blues a swing. The harmonica is
working for me too.
My criticism is slight -- as in many of your recordings, I
feel like the vocals need to be more 'present.' Not just
louder, but closer to the mic. And make sure everyone is
together on that double time. The bass seems to be
dragging slightly.
You are home grown, for real.