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I had the thought that I'd like to write a song for TENSE that explores the negative aspects of consumerism on society. I'm in the marketing profession, so I have a lot of thoughts about society's values surrounding material wealth, the manipulation of those values through advertising, a culture that espouses excess rather than moderation, and so on.

After thinking about the topic for a while, I distill a few key thoughts: the root of greed is fear, consumerism proliferates itself by preying on the fears of others to entice more greed, and all of this distracts us from "real" personal growth. You may not agree, but that's my concept so far.

One lyric springs to mind: "Enough should be enough for me, if its true the best things are free." For now, I decide to call the song "Enough."

Thinking about how the musical style might fit the lyrics (as a TENSE song), I have an idea about contrasting a feeling of sickness with a feeling of outrage. One of my gimmicks is to use a tempo that is fast enough to work as "cut time." My idea is to set the song at about 160bpm. This will let me drag-out the "sickness" theme at 80bpm and drive through the "outrage" at 160bpm.

Not knowing much theory, I like to sit down with the guitar at this point and experiment with very basic note pairings until I arrive with something that suggests the mood I'm after. These note pairings eventually get expanded into full chords and/or bass lines.

After some experimentation I arrive at a very simple progression (F#/B, G/C#, F#/D, F/A, E/A). Turns out this is essentially the key of D. Somewhat satisfied, I go into Logic Express (LE) and lay out that progression with a bass. It sounds too hard for the "sickness" theme, so I change the instrument to a stand-up wooden bass.

After listening a bit I get an idea for an undulating synth part to reinforce the idea of "sickness," which I build using the generators and effects in LE. At this point I'm beginning to feel like the song concept has a basic starting point from which to work.

You can hear the musical results thus far in the song file. Chime in below. How does this relate to your own approach to creating a song concept? What would you do differently? What do you see that might be useful to your process?
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Only one line so far: "Enough should be enough for me, if its true the best things are free."
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Uploaded: Mar 04, 2005 - 08:48:36 AM
Last Updated: Mar 03, 2005 - 11:24:34 PM Last Played: Jul 17, 2009 - 03:17:09 PM
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Hardware:
Ibanez RG guitar, iMac 800mhz
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Peter Greenstone said 1726 days ago (March 4th, 2005)
This journaling concept is a great idea
I'm looking forward to seeing how this unfolds.

Not having any one particular method of my own for
developing songs, I think I'll remain a spectator to this for
the time being.
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Kevensor said 1726 days ago (March 4th, 2005)
Contrasts your others..
I've listened to the other two TENSE songs and I like the slower rhythm you have sketched out here I think it evokes the sickness aspect you are looking at. Although the anger would need to come through the vocals and probably the guitar. This should be an interesting exploration into creating a song.

I write lyrics and songs seperately. I don't really look for a concept at first. I keep a large notebook of lyrics or sayings (single sentences) and when the song is finished, musically I begin to think about what type of feel I'm evoking and then I match lyrics or try to find something that is contradictory to the attitude of the song. I sometimes need to isten to the music for weeks until I decide upon what I want to do lyrically. Your approach seems more logical and organized.


thanks for sharing.
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chikoppi said 1726 days ago (March 4th, 2005)
Contrasts your others..
That's an inreresting approach. Occasionally I've started with a little piece of
music, arrived at through experimenting on guitar, and then developed the
lyrical idea based on what that music suggests (Shining Through the Pale was
like that). But I've never tried developing several musical and lyrical ideas
separately and then exploring the relationships beteen them. That could lead
to some fresh directions.
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Musohead said 1726 days ago (March 4th, 2005)
Questions?
What modes,scales, chords, and in what rhythm will
convey a feeling of sickness(perhaps a descending
chromatic scale)????????
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Syncopatient said 1726 days ago (March 4th, 2005)
Sound experiments
With the concept of sickness in mind I would look for a
particular sound that would become my theme
conveyor...meaning that there would be a particular
musical passage intertwined thru the piece as the
"spokesman" of the message. I'm hearing a cool but wierd
synth. An off beat rhythmic concept in 7's comes to mind
as well....will give it off balance but a cohesive feel....heh,
of course what I would end up with will be like way
different than your's and Packo's brilliance! :)

This is gonna be fun!

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aclarke said 1725 days ago (March 5th, 2005)
This will be helpful
It's great to see how others approach their music making
and I appreciate you taking the time to document it.

Although I'm not exactly a prolific songwriter or musician I
do find that most of my songs follow a certain pattern of
spontaneity. I start usually by just jamming on my guitar
and making up non-sensical lyrics to fill out a vocal
melody. What usually happens is I wind up with a couple
of usable lines (lyrics) that I can build upon. Then it's a
matter of filling out the rest of the song- chorus,
bridge,etc and the lyrics.

It's rare that I have a concept in mind before I start. I think
this may be because I have no concept of "true" music
theory and absolutely no idea what the notes or chords I
am playing... it's more difficult the hear something in my
mind before I start.

Not sure if this is what you are looking for here... but
thanks for hearing me out.
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chikoppi said 1725 days ago (March 5th, 2005)
This will be helpful
Exactly the kind of feedback I was hoping for, thanks!
Check out my latest song called Loop It or Lose It 9
said 1725 days ago (March 5th, 2005)
I Look Forward to Following This Journal
I like the insight you are providing into your creative
processes here. The thoughts, the intents, the choices, the
decisions, all laid out.
said 1725 days ago (March 5th, 2005)
I Look Forward to Following This Journal
BTW, is there another journal I should be following, since this is a
collaboration?

---
Mungo
chikoppi said 1725 days ago (March 5th, 2005)
I Look Forward to Following This Journal
Well, Packosmokes and I have found our collaborations work best if we
develop songs independently at first. Once this song has a strong sense of
direction I'll pass a rough cut to him for feedback. A little further down the line
we'll actually trade the Logic Express project file back and forth.

I'm hoping Packo will add any notes that he may have to this journal!
Check out my latest song called Loop It or Lose It 9
packosmokes said 1721 days ago (March 9th, 2005)
I Look Forward to Following This Journal
I'd like to chime in for this bit. There's a track called "Malcontent" that Brian
and I did, which holds alot of merit to be a song, but that was the first and
last track we actually built from the ground up by committee. We then
embarked on a few other ideas that still remain shelved to this day and
hopefully will come to fruition some day.

Seems as though someone should always be in control of a track as the other
supplies options or recommendations to "improve" it. Like chikoppi's guitar
playing and mixing, I will be helping him out in any way I can for this track,
but it's his baby. He's the one controlling it. Which is great, cos we don't get
many TENSE tracks under his pen, due to how much time I got on my hands,
heheh!
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hacked_to_pieces said 1725 days ago (March 5th, 2005)
Thanks
for taking the time to share your process very interesting.
I look forward to more installments. I like what I hear so
far.
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_nderscore said 1725 days ago (March 5th, 2005)
contrasting instruments
seems like this is about the place a nice slow beat kicks
in-of course, that's what everyone & their mother would
do. maybe introduce a new character/effect-pull things
along farther than expected. right now it feels like it's all
mood, & a little freaked out (good). the first note or two
might start a touch softer since they are the first thing you
hear-or maybe add something like a soft screech to lead
into that first note? ideas, ideas.. ya got a winner so far

consumerism is THE drug & it operates at any level of
addiction: 'sale' bottles of shampoo to that new BMW.
corporations are much too big to fight, the game was over
long ago. now they solidify their hold without having to
hide behind the scenes-no none notices anymore.
knowing this, i still want my MTV
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_nderscore said 1725 days ago (March 5th, 2005)
process=
dissection+abstract commentary. maybe some free-association

sorry. carry on..
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chikoppi said 1725 days ago (March 5th, 2005)
process=
Stop reading my mind! Heh... you'll find the next entry interesting.
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ka-klick said 1724 days ago (March 6th, 2005)
Cool Concept
Both this "blog" bit and the song "germ" I think you're
heading in the right direction. I really like the line you've
got so far.

Another good aspect to explore is our attraction to death
- in media and advertising (sort of the reverse side of the
sex) and it fits in with the revulsion aspect.

Looking forward to this.
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