Hey, I like this track, but I'd think about adding some reverb or echo to the keys. For the song's mellow sound, the piano sounds a little cutting. Good stuff though, I like it

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And that's most of the point with ambient, in my opinion.
It is bright enough melody, that with a little different
production and arrangement and vocals, you could have a
pop song here.

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… this could quite easily be either pop or progressive
rock with just a subtle bit of tweaking here and there.
Melodic, nice use of sounds and it doesn't out-stay
its welcome. Good stuff.

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