I loved the vocals (as much as I could hear in the mix) and
the guitar.

You might want to consider bringing the vocals forward in
the mix. Also, I'm not sure if the percussion is adding
anything to the song except being slightly distracting.

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Thanks for listening. I'm sorry you couldn't hear the vocals very well. I am at a
loss to explain why that happens for some folks. When I listen on my system
the vocal is way above the other tracks. I have my mac feed into a Sony
receiver and Bose speakers so maybe that has something to do with it. Maybe
I should get some good headphones and plug directly into the Mac and I
would hear what you'll hear.

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This has that good Bronco living room jam feel to it. I'd
leave the percussion in. I do agree with Mungo that the
vocals could be brought up a bit more (do I sound like a
broken record?)

Also, I'm not sure if Tracy needs to double her vocals. I
think she sounds fine alone. If a double vocal isn't
perfect, it can sound a little out of tune.

This is a revised version, isn't it? I like it much better.

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Tom,
Yes it is a new version. I knew the first one was awful before I posted so I am
not sure why I did that. I am really clueless about people saying the vocal isn't
loud enough as explained above. By the way, I am going to rename our group
based on a comment you made last time. When we occasionally played in
public with another guitar player we would call ourselves High and Lonesome
but now I am going to change it to Homegrown. Perfect name for us.

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That means I get 10%. Royalty fee for the band name. I like High and
Lonesome,too. You two do have that high, lonesome sound sometimes.

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Okay, let me see if I can remember my college math. .10 x 0 = 0. I think you
can count on me being like Leonardo Da Vinci. It will take at least one
hundred years before people come to admire my insanity.

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Nice duo, nice picking.

Thanks for sharing.

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