The best part of the tune is in the lyrics and that's the
basis for the 7 on song writing. The background isn't that
interesting so that's the basis for the 5's in other
categories. Consider a collab with other MacJammers as
you've got a unique voice and I'm still convinced you've
got a lot more power than you're using.

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Reminds me of the Cardigans. I have to agree with alan, in that there needs to be a bit of a change. I liked it enough to download it though. Great to have you back!

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I liked that repeated phrase a lot. Nice. Very linear which
is its strength and its weakness at the same time. Maybe
adding one more element, instrumental or vocal, would
give it a little more shape. Don't, uh, know what that
would be though.

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there is something familiar in the music that you do.
I really like it

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Kevensor nailed it with the Cardigans sound. Fun songs light and nice.

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When you've got a melody this good, you don't need to overdo it on production. I like the way you play with it using multiple voices. Lots of subtle little shifts in meaning come out of the repetition - sometimes sweet and sometimes bittersweet. Very nice!

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