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Heartbeat - A song first created via MacJams with JD Holliday, listen to http://macjams.com/song/63272 . since James isn't living here, I had to sing it myself, with my band, a rock-trio from the Netherlands, we want to use this as a demo. Any thoughts?? What do you think of it, let us know, we would like constructive feedback
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Lyrics
There's something changed - Since you went away

Then it felt kind of strange - But strange in a good way



It's hard to explain - The way I'm feeling

I can't find the words to say - So you get my meaning



Come and sing out along

This could be our song

Come on sing along

This could be our song

So things really changed - The good and the bad

And I'll find a way - To get up again..



I can't really say - I miss you that much now

And you've paved the way - For my freedom somehow



Come and sing out along

This could be our song

Come on sing along

This could be our song
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Uploaded: Sep 07, 2013 - 12:56:30 PM
Last Updated: Sep 07, 2013 - 12:56:30 PM Last Played: Jan 30, 2017 - 08:09:27 PM
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alackbass said 1412 days ago (September 7th, 2013)
Heartbeat
Great stuff. I like your vocal and the band has plenty of balls! Strong rocker!
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speedonl said 1410 days ago (September 9th, 2013)
Thanks
for listening, much appreciated!!
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MarkHolbrook said 1411 days ago (September 8th, 2013)
Quite nice!
personally I felt like your vocals sat in a different sound space than the rest of the band. Perhaps just a bit too far front? I mean they sound nice... No issue with them at all.

The song is cool as can be. The versus are a bit similar. Maybe something could bring the second verse up and away from the first... Like some echoed vocals, or vocal doubling. More guitar work... Just something to make it feel like you not fallen back to the first verse.

Overall I like it! Nicely done!
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speedonl said 1410 days ago (September 9th, 2013)
I
Will take your notes for the next mix of this one, hand them over to our mix engineer, thnx a lot!
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kingbee said 1411 days ago (September 9th, 2013)
heart beat
Good song.
Mix levels just a bit distracting.
Drums..or at least the snare) taken down a bit.
Guitar and bass up a bit.
maybe one or 2 guitar overdubs here and there just to lift up a few moments in the song
And main vocals just down a bit and maybe a touch of reverb on them.
Just needs a bit of tweaking in the mix
cheers

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speedonl said 1410 days ago (September 9th, 2013)
Hey
There, thanks a lot for your reply, I taken notice from your notices :)
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rok41 said 1410 days ago (September 9th, 2013)
Heartbeat
Egbert, as always, I love your energy and drive. The vocals are the best i have heard from you. I do think that this mix needs to be sculpted a bit...while I really like the live feel of it, I would eq it in a way that you could bring the vocals back a hair, just sit them in the mix a little better. Use a little compression to to tighten it up. Good song, good energy and one of my favorite guitarists! Excellent!
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speedonl said 1410 days ago (September 9th, 2013)
Thanks
Chris, so nice to hear from.. glad you like, I do think the song deserves another mix, I'll discus it with my bandmates. Thnx!!
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