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Well, I’m not, and will never be a guitarist, but this is a riff that’s been bouncing around in my head for some time, so a borrowed a Fender Stratocaster and did my best. I know i need to polish the chorus but i’d really love some feedback towards the final mix. It basically is a guitar song, so it should have a solo, but i’m not the man to do it, sorry :-)
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Lyrics
’TILL I BLEED
I’m not satisfied with you sitting in my car
Eatin’ pickled pickles from an old fruit jar
It’s not enough, no life for a man
Just listening to music, just holding your hand
Gimme your mouth
Kiss me ’till i bleed
I want more, more than your hugs
You don’t need to love me, but we’re a perfect match
I need you tonight, so take my hand
And let me lead you,, to a promised land
I’m not satisfied with you sitting in my car
Eatin’ pickled pickles from an old fruit jar
It’s not enough, no life for a man
Just listening to music, just holding your hand
Gimme your mouth
Kiss me ’till i bleed
I want more, more than your hugs
You don’t need to love me, but we’re a perfect match
I need you tonight, so take my hand
And let me lead you,, to a promised land
aclarke
Very cool classic rock riff. I like how you use your full
vocal range on this although you seemed to struggle with
the higher notes. Make sure you draw in plenty of air and
work on controlling your breath and you'll hit them with
ease.
This is a really good start and I'll be interested to hear
where you take it from here. Rock on!