I really like this. It's crazy as all hell, yet I seem to be drawn to this. This song reminds me of something SlappyTwac would put together. 2 thumbs up from me.

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pretty neat mix of stuff. i like how it all broke down in the
middle there, & then the doors opened again to reveal
another level of insanity. there were plenty of parts that
could have taken off on their own as a song.. abstract like
it ought to be

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I appreciate the feedback. My wife was a little scared of this when she heard it. So I was interested in the reaction I would get.

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Let's see...a soundtrack for the grand opening of
Demolition City..."your source for used backhoes,
wrecking balls and industrial meat grinders".

Wonderful!

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LOL,
Thanks RS!

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Nice textures, very gutteral! I wonder if there might be some way to weave the piano throughout the whole. Maybe the melody could break down to just one repetitious note that then begins to falter in rhythm, with the inverse leading back to the melody. This really does seem to convey the sense of depression followed by "oh god, what's wrong with me!"

The kalimba reminds me of the sound effect used in old horor movies to evoke the idea of "creepy crawlies."

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Thanks! I like the idea of the single piano note. I think it would give it continuity throughout.

I agree with the "creepy crawlies" comment. HA! :)

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Awsome!

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Focus Me Inside My Head

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The noise seems just a tad too noisy. The track builds a
sense of anxiety in me (which is fine if that's what you
want).

I think the sections where you drop into relax mode
should be a little bit longer. Give me a chance to recover
from the teeth drilling.

This is almost what I wanted as a backdrop for my Self-
Medication poem, but am looking for more calliope and
less cacophony. This track captures the play between the
two rather well, but you don't take either anyplace. It's
nicely balanced, but I'd like to see it longer, and maybe
have each "noise" section get more intense, interspersed
with enough silence to recover, building until it all comes
crashing down.

Good stuff though.

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Like the description says, there is an obvious battle of different emotions
raging here. Like the piano, the noise, it was all solid original stuff.
exquisite.

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Thanks for the listen!

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