Rather nice start to a tune... sort of Mike Oldfield-esque in
the sound and harmonies. This sounds like a great thing
to go ahead and finish, if you can... why was it never
finished? There are several directions to go with it. My
preference would be to add a slow-sliding Pink-Floyd-like
guitar over this... or a short hummed chorus. But
hopefully other people with much more musical sensibility
will jump in and give much more useful ideas than mine!
:-) Welcome to this cool place known as MacJams!

ttfn,
Drakonis

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Thanks for listening and giving feedback. Really appreciate the advice and agree that a floyd style guitar would be nice. Wish I could come up with a chorus, or some type of change that would maintain the feel but continue to explore.
Thanks again,
Swanny

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I agree with Drak,
thii is certainly a beautiful track that needs to be
finished, I love the piano along with the guitar, although
it gets a little repetitive. as a bridge idea you could
perhaps make some chord changes and change the piano
rythym /melody to something slightly different or bring in
another guitar riff that could either solo or add in some
sweeping synth pads along with it.

Very good so far though
SlimGirlFat

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Come on, get off your sweet patootie and finish this.

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You leave a ton of room for potential melodies, solos, etc.
Very open ended and very cool.

Would you be interested in some collaborative work?

Here's some of my prior collabs:

http://www.macjams.com/song/song_profile.php?
lid=1398

http://www.macjams.com/song/song_profile.php?
lid=1399

And one of my own little ditties:

http://www.macjams.com/song/song_profile.php?
lid=4235

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