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Like other tunes I've posted, this is a short concept. I want to expand it, but had to get the idea out of my head, so this is the first blush.
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Good Start! &mdash 03/17/05 - 06:38:19 AM
I know this is a rough sketch, so I'm not going to rate this. But, here are some things to think about.
The drums need to be louder, they are kind of wimpy when compared to the hard guitar and keys.
I hear some interesting things going on in the background that should be moved to the front.
The guitar sound fits with the keyboard sound very nicely. You need some type of bass line as well. Hopefully, you will add a bridge and chorus to change it up a bit.
I really do like what you have started here, I can't wait to hear the final version! Keep going! [ Reply to This ]
Just Listened... &mdash 03/17/05 - 06:44:48 AM
to your other stuff. You've got the skills my man!
I'd like to hear some bass and vocals, I think it would take your "sketches" to the next level. [ Reply to This ]
OOOh &mdash 03/17/05 - 04:52:44 PM
I like what you have have so far
I'd like to hear that lead guitar come more up front,
great synth backing.....
I hope you get around to expanding this track,
SlimGirlFat [ Reply to This ]
Nice idea &mdash 06/16/05 - 08:22:41 PM
I agree about bringing the lead guitar and the drums forward. Also, since the guitar is playing a nice distinctive groove, it would be cool if the drum beat accentuated the guitar. [ Reply to This ]
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The drums need to be louder, they are kind of wimpy when compared to the hard guitar and keys.
I hear some interesting things going on in the background that should be moved to the front.
The guitar sound fits with the keyboard sound very nicely. You need some type of bass line as well. Hopefully, you will add a bridge and chorus to change it up a bit.
I really do like what you have started here, I can't wait to hear the final version! Keep going!
[ Reply to This ]