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Ice Planet 21


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Like other tunes I've posted, this is a short concept. I want to expand it, but had to get the idea out of my head, so this is the first blush.
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Uploaded: Mar 17, 2005 - 01:00:41 AM
Last Updated: Mar 16, 2005 - 11:51:41 PM Last Played: Mar 05, 2009 - 12:43:44 PM
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Kevensor said 1711 days ago (March 17th, 2005)
Good Start!
I know this is a rough sketch, so I'm not going to rate this. But, here are some things to think about.

The drums need to be louder, they are kind of wimpy when compared to the hard guitar and keys.

I hear some interesting things going on in the background that should be moved to the front.

The guitar sound fits with the keyboard sound very nicely. You need some type of bass line as well. Hopefully, you will add a bridge and chorus to change it up a bit.

I really do like what you have started here, I can't wait to hear the final version! Keep going!
Check out my latest song called Smoove
Kevensor said 1711 days ago (March 17th, 2005)
Just Listened...
to your other stuff. You've got the skills my man!

I'd like to hear some bass and vocals, I think it would take your "sketches" to the next level.
Check out my latest song called Smoove
SlimGirlFat said 1711 days ago (March 17th, 2005)
OOOh
I like what you have have so far
I'd like to hear that lead guitar come more up front,
great synth backing.....

I hope you get around to expanding this track,

SlimGirlFat
Check out my latest song called Not Enough
perceptualvortex said 1620 days ago (June 16th, 2005)
Nice idea
I agree about bringing the lead guitar and the drums forward. Also, since the guitar is playing a nice distinctive groove, it would be cool if the drum beat accentuated the guitar.
Check out my latest song called Machine Man (w Beastie Boys)
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