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| Iseae said 1706 days ago (March 22nd, 2005) | |
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Great Nice punk sound. I would have liked a little less midrange in the guitar, and some overall EQ work. Other than that great job. Check out my latest song called Vickys Song
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| packosmokes said 1704 days ago (March 24th, 2005) | |
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Vocals too up front I'd try and get them down into that song more. However, you've put quite a presence into a wonderfully penned track by Daphna. You add personality and emotion to the track. Some of your best vocals! Check out my latest song called With You
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| TobinMueller said 1704 days ago (March 25th, 2005) | |
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Nice interpretation I dig this. Really like the chorus especially, and the changes in tempo. I'd have prefered more clarity in production, mainly becuz I really like your vocals on this. The flange on the left guitar detracts (for me); as compared to the clarity of the organ and precision of the distortion guitar (on the right, in my headphones). I really like the vocodor Daphne backing vocals, could use more. Such a great pop song. Check out my latest song called Forge A New Life (MJRF)
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| daphna said 1703 days ago (March 25th, 2005) | |
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thanks everyone for your comments. Songs always seem to be a work in progress no matter what you do! Check out my latest song called I Love My Mac mjrf
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| ka-klick said 1703 days ago (March 25th, 2005) | |
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Thanks everyone (and sorry) I've been out of town for a couple days (and a bit busy before that) Thanks for all the comments. I just re- listened in my larger monitors (which I'd just realized I'd neglected to do) and I think I definitely need to look at the mix again. LOL - All this for a project I wanted to use to "warm up" after being away for a while :-) At least I didn't subject y'all to the "too many Bryan's" version :-) Check out my latest song called Big Bad World - Live 1-16-2009 plus - MJRF
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| Warren Smith said 1672 days ago (April 25th, 2005) | |
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lyrical thoughts Nice job on covering Daphna's catchy tune. The feedback I have is that the chorus is too repetitive for a set of lyrics that are so wonderfully inventive. Even though it's a great line, hearing "There's no mistakes in life just lessons to be learned" repeated 16 times is overkill. I'm thinking the third line in each chorus could be different (something like "you play with fire and it's certain you'll get burned") to give a break from hearing the same line four times in a row. That said - let me repeat that it's well written, catchy, and well-performed here. Check out my latest song called Pushing and Pulling
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| Drew Kopr said 1605 days ago (July 1st, 2005) | |
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Cool! Reminds me of Big Bad Voodo Daddy, which is a major compliment. Check out my latest song called WinterSong
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| Drew Kopr said 1605 days ago (July 1st, 2005) | |
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Cool! Reminds me of Big Bad Voodo Daddy, which is a major compliment. Check out my latest song called WinterSong
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koolpaw
and WOW this is interseting, both tracks r all the same song but soud totally different.
original sounds like funny 80s pop song and this sounds nice "punk" rock.
i like both =0