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What I Want [Explicit] by cjorgensen [Email]

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Uploaded: Mar 24, 2005 - 09:06:51 AM
Last Updated: Mar 24, 2005 - 08:39:11 AM
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I wrote an essay about what I wanted in a woman. From memory I tried to distill this essay into poetry. The poem has less dimension than the longer work, but I'll take poetry over an essay any day of the week.

I left this as vocals only. If anyone wants to create a musical backdrop to it, feel free to run with it.

Lyrics:
What I Want

I want you to be my pornography.
I want to take you home
and make you my own.
I want a kiss to the wrist
and the back of my hand.
I want to taste your flavors,
be infused with you,
take you inside and know you,
through and through.
I want to explore your body,
find places no other man has been,
(virgin territories) if there are any left.
I want you to say I do,
and be my wife, my blood,
my bones, my soul, my life.
I want you to be my bedroom slut,
and the perfect mother
to our sons, our daughters,
my Madonna, my whore.
I want to show you off
to friends and strangers,
play dress-up and doctor,
take you out in leather and lace,
wire and cuffs, put you over
my knee and be your teacher,
fill the world with envy.
I want to sleep with you
by my side, year after year,
grow old together, forever,
an eternity of you.
I want a name to summon you by,
and to hear my own in turn
dripping from your tongue.

I want the courage to say hello.

Hardware:
Emac 800 mhz, Tascam US-122, and a M-Audio mic

Software:
Garageband 2 only.
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Affair of the Mind &mdash 03/24/05 - 10:30:16 AM
Great punchline.

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Affair of the Mind &mdash 04/04/05 - 01:22:35 AM
Thanks. Figured the nature of the poem might get more response. Oh well.

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my life for those without one...
http://www.christopher.jorgensen.name

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nice &mdash 06/23/05 - 05:32:50 PM
i really enjoyed this piece. nice flow. nice phrasing.
honest. More!!!

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nice &mdash 06/23/05 - 09:50:48 PM
There will be more soon. You check out my website? Has a couple not here.

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my life for those without one...
http://www.christopher.jorgensen.name

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Well done &mdash 08/20/05 - 08:05:05 AM
Well written piece. Captures the mindset of many, saying
what many feel but never say. We do want it all in a woman.
A wife, a mother, a slut, a lady in the street but a freak in the
bed. Hello has been know to open many a door.

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Well done &mdash 08/28/05 - 01:30:44 PM
Thanks for the feedback.

A woman criticized this poem, saying I was looking for the "skinny fashion
model" type. I told her to reread it. Don't remember saying any such thing. Kind
of neat how people project though when it comes to poetry.

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my life for those without one...
http://www.christopher.jorgensen.name

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