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What I Want

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I wrote an essay about what I wanted in a woman. From memory I tried to distill this essay into poetry. The poem has less dimension than the longer work, but I'll take poetry over an essay any day of the week.

I left this as vocals only. If anyone wants to create a musical backdrop to it, feel free to run with it.
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What I Want

I want you to be my pornography.
I want to take you home
and make you my own.
I want a kiss to the wrist
and the back of my hand.
I want to taste your flavors,
be infused with you,
take you inside and know you,
through and through.
I want to explore your body,
find places no other man has been,
(virgin territories) if there are any left.
I want you to say I do,
and be my wife, my blood,
my bones, my soul, my life.
I want you to be my bedroom slut,
and the perfect mother
to our sons, our daughters,
my Madonna, my whore.
I want to show you off
to friends and strangers,
play dress-up and doctor,
take you out in leather and lace,
wire and cuffs, put you over
my knee and be your teacher,
fill the world with envy.
I want to sleep with you
by my side, year after year,
grow old together, forever,
an eternity of you.
I want a name to summon you by,
and to hear my own in turn
dripping from your tongue.

I want the courage to say hello.
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Uploaded: Mar 24, 2005 - 09:06:51 AM
Last Updated: Mar 24, 2005 - 08:39:11 AM Last Played: Feb 15, 2009 - 07:32:45 PM
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Emac 800 mhz, Tascam US-122, and a M-Audio mic
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Garageband 2 only.
Comments
TobinMueller said 1709 days ago (March 24th, 2005)
Affair of the Mind
Great punchline.
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cjorgensen said 1699 days ago (April 4th, 2005)
Affair of the Mind
Thanks. Figured the nature of the poem might get more response. Oh well.

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macgalver said 1618 days ago (June 23rd, 2005)
nice
i really enjoyed this piece. nice flow. nice phrasing.
honest. More!!!
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cjorgensen said 1618 days ago (June 23rd, 2005)
nice
There will be more soon. You check out my website? Has a couple not here.

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my life for those without one...
http://www.christopher.jorgensen.name
Check out my latest song called Gardens
balata said 1560 days ago (August 20th, 2005)
Well done
Well written piece. Captures the mindset of many, saying
what many feel but never say. We do want it all in a woman.
A wife, a mother, a slut, a lady in the street but a freak in the
bed. Hello has been know to open many a door.
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cjorgensen said 1552 days ago (August 28th, 2005)
Well done
Thanks for the feedback.

A woman criticized this poem, saying I was looking for the "skinny fashion
model" type. I told her to reread it. Don't remember saying any such thing. Kind
of neat how people project though when it comes to poetry.

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http://www.christopher.jorgensen.name
Check out my latest song called Gardens
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Christopher L. Jorgensen is lucky enough to make his living answering questions about Macintosh computers all day. In his spare time he likes to drink wine, play with webdesign, and learn new things about computers. He has an iron ego and lives fo... [see more]

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