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Pop / country tune. Entered in Tamworth Country music festival for early next year. Song about the land turning bad and forcing he / she to leave. Written by myself and Anne Unger who sings whilst I do the rest. Still a work in progress. Any feedback (good or bad) appreciated.

Cheers

Richard
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Lyrics
So I’m leaving this town, where spirits laid me down
I look to the east, hear sounds of my retreat.

When the sun’s up today, I’ll be fifty miles away
Through open eyes ,I see remains of my disguise


CHORUS:
So farewell Deloraine
As I lean into the rain
Tonight, Tonight, I lose these chains.

I wanna know, what it is to just let go.
I need to feel what is not and what is real.

The mine, the lies and then you, took most everything,
The ten years I tried, took everything inside

CHORUS:

Way out east

Where the sky and the trees will meet
“He walked away”, I hear them say
But what else can I do.

Solo: -

CHORUS:

The life I once knew, is gone along with you
With all these memories, I’m on the road to my release

And so I ride into this day, not so sure I know the way
The sounds of another time, contained by my wandering mind.

CHORUS and fade.
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Uploaded: Sep 28, 2017 - 09:01:41 PM
Last Updated: Sep 28, 2017 - 09:05:17 PM Last Played: Oct 19, 2017 - 10:25:40 PM
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Daugrin said 76 days ago (September 29th, 2017)
Ballad About Leaving
Has some of that lonesome quality that once was important... The chanteuse sells the vocal like she's singing a song, if I was producing I would ask her to up the emotional intensity to 11 and recut the vocal, this is a desperate lyric. Her delivery is pretty, like she's reading poetry, not crying her heart out. If she was going for a singers reading she nailed it...
She could give us more... I can hear it.
Great job on the music. The production supports the material. The vocal harmonies are outstanding, maybe a bit of auto tune, but not bad at all!
Bravo guys, very pretty leaving song! Once plentiful, and now kinda rare.

Daug
Check out my latest song called TCYB/U Got No Mind
Strawberry_Lane said 74 days ago (October 2nd, 2017)
Thanks
Thank you for the feedback. Still in progress but we plan on recutting some of the vocal.
Cheers
Richard
Check out my latest song called Deloraine
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