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Description:
Created most of the song with the GarageBand pen tool.
Hardware:
Imac
Software:
GarageBand
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HARDER! &mdash 03/28/05 - 12:29:29 PM
Nice groove, I wish it changed and modulated more. Get
harder.
Needs a big change up. [ Reply to This ]
Good dynamic variation &mdash 03/28/05 - 12:54:28 PM
but I agree with Troy, this needs some modulation at
some point to take it to the next level. Interesting stuff. [ Reply to This ]
State of mind &mdash 03/28/05 - 11:23:02 PM
Very cool mood in this piece and lots of thoughtful details. Terrific production! The percussion sounds great and I love the echoing plucked instrument. I think the piece works as it is, but there is an opportunity to drive up the intensity. As it is, it really catures a state of mind more than a story. Nothing wrong with that!
The end was a bit abrupt. You might want to leave some space for the reverb tail? [ Reply to This ]
kickin &mdash 03/29/05 - 09:10:04 PM
major props on the pencil tool engineering-well done.
lookin forward to seeing where you go from here. really
nice edge [ Reply to This ]
kickin &mdash 05/22/05 - 08:35:11 PM
Thanks, I think it needs something else, but I am stuck so I posted it anyway. Thanks for listening
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Rock On® [ Reply to This ]
Industrial Revolution...OMG &mdash 03/30/05 - 07:43:42 AM
Breezer this work shows a rose colored side to some of your work. As I listened I saw the red hue and only wanted more. I hope you can add to this sound much like our forefathers added new and better machines to our everyday world. You have something to build on with this piece and I and others are waiting.......................Thank youl
PB [ Reply to This ]
Nice production &mdash 04/25/05 - 10:08:22 PM
I like the texture of this track. Really cool vibes from this.
You've created an interesting sound/feel...great
percussion. If you were to add some counterpoint/
melody using the main theme underneath as support and
take it to a new level it would be perfect and complete.
It's a great track now..but some variation as others
suggested would be super....don't stop...would love to
have a melody above this groove....fade out or define the
ending....very close. I dig the whole idea framework. [ Reply to This ]
what the bleep :-) &mdash 04/25/05 - 10:14:27 PM
This is very nice actually... rather synthy industrial, but
with nice space between the instruments so they all sound
distinct... nicely thought out and orchestrated pulsating
machinery. But yes, GB chopped off your ending, don't
forget to pull out your last loop a little extra ways to force
it not to do that.
ttfn,
Drakonis [ Reply to This ]
It amazes me &mdash 05/23/05 - 09:53:40 PM
what some of you can do with the pencil tool. This was a very relaxing piece of music. Considering I listened in the middle of a driving rain storm.. put me in a good frame of mind. [ Reply to This ]
Aluminium Something &mdash 05/26/05 - 10:22:57 PM
It's nearly 5am here and I'm tired, so my brain isn't
working! What do you call the rain that freezes and drops
in stones? Well, that is what this track made me imagine:
those things, but made out of aluminium. Crazy, eh!
Good music again, Breezer. I like your stuff! [ Reply to This ]
Forgot... &mdash 05/26/05 - 10:23:52 PM
The ending seems to cut off slightly early. This leaves me
ever so slightly with a feeling of "uncompleteness"! [ Reply to This ]
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harder.
Needs a big change up.
[ Reply to This ]