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Created most of the song with the GarageBand pen tool.
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| Tom Atwood said 1699 days ago (March 28th, 2005) | |
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Good dynamic variation but I agree with Troy, this needs some modulation at some point to take it to the next level. Interesting stuff. Check out my latest song called Keep Looking for Jesus (MJRF)
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| chikoppi said 1699 days ago (March 28th, 2005) | |
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State of mind Very cool mood in this piece and lots of thoughtful details. Terrific production! The percussion sounds great and I love the echoing plucked instrument. I think the piece works as it is, but there is an opportunity to drive up the intensity. As it is, it really catures a state of mind more than a story. Nothing wrong with that! The end was a bit abrupt. You might want to leave some space for the reverb tail? Check out my latest song called Loop It or Lose It 9
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| _nderscore said 1698 days ago (March 29th, 2005) | |
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kickin major props on the pencil tool engineering-well done. lookin forward to seeing where you go from here. really nice edge Check out my latest song called glyd
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| breezer said 1644 days ago (May 22nd, 2005) | |
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kickin Thanks, I think it needs something else, but I am stuck so I posted it anyway. Thanks for listening --- Rock On® Check out my latest song called Leapfrog
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| puff_bob said 1697 days ago (March 30th, 2005) | |
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Industrial Revolution...OMG Breezer this work shows a rose colored side to some of your work. As I listened I saw the red hue and only wanted more. I hope you can add to this sound much like our forefathers added new and better machines to our everyday world. You have something to build on with this piece and I and others are waiting.......................Thank youl PB |
| Syncopatient said 1671 days ago (April 25th, 2005) | |
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Nice production I like the texture of this track. Really cool vibes from this. You've created an interesting sound/feel...great percussion. If you were to add some counterpoint/ melody using the main theme underneath as support and take it to a new level it would be perfect and complete. It's a great track now..but some variation as others suggested would be super....don't stop...would love to have a melody above this groove....fade out or define the ending....very close. I dig the whole idea framework. Check out my latest song called Jazz Praise
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| drakonis said 1671 days ago (April 25th, 2005) | |
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what the bleep :-) This is very nice actually... rather synthy industrial, but with nice space between the instruments so they all sound distinct... nicely thought out and orchestrated pulsating machinery. But yes, GB chopped off your ending, don't forget to pull out your last loop a little extra ways to force it not to do that. ttfn, Drakonis Check out my latest song called Lullaby for the Inner Child
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| aclarke said 1643 days ago (May 23rd, 2005) | |
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It amazes me what some of you can do with the pencil tool. This was a very relaxing piece of music. Considering I listened in the middle of a driving rain storm.. put me in a good frame of mind. Check out my latest song called Ballad of The Little Tiki
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| Shimky said 1640 days ago (May 26th, 2005) | |
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Aluminium Something It's nearly 5am here and I'm tired, so my brain isn't working! What do you call the rain that freezes and drops in stones? Well, that is what this track made me imagine: those things, but made out of aluminium. Crazy, eh! Good music again, Breezer. I like your stuff! Check out my latest song called Funeral
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Nice groove, I wish it changed and modulated more. Get
harder.
Needs a big change up.